ShivIka SS: Avoidance Waltz PART 8 (22.5.17) pg 40*new* Index pg1

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#221

go rohit

wow what a attitude

loved oyu for provoking shivaay and now our jealous badag billa is back

he will do something of that i am sure

please do continue

bye sumi

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sky-if

@sky-if

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Am at a loss for words! "Brilliant" does not cut it!

All I'll say is that am glad I read parts 6 and 7 at the same time! Part 6 had me close to bawling but part 7 - oh so glad Rohith seems like a smart guy.. and one who is not afraid to stand up to SSO! can't wait for the next part!

PS: Those images and GIFs in your update! So on point! And thank you for that 'Rudra asking for lori' one :)

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#223

you updated so quick. O yay!! First of all thanks for keeping your promise n now coming to your update. I loved this rohit character a lot n he might be simple business man but was so subtle in his observation. The way he was assessing shivay was so cool but keep him this strong till end as the opposition is non other than mighty SSO.please please don't let sso win against him. why I felt that his last comment about last man was not like he wants to win anika back but rather to give impression to shivay that now even he will fight for anika's love. Let's see what happens. Would be waiting for Sunday eagerly just for your update.

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Brilliant ..beautiful.

Rohit is gonna play cupid...intentionally it seems.

Need the strong Anika back. .but not one who has no hope.

I can't seem to like Rohit...but as a catalyst. .good going.

Weak character hai.. mums blackmail mein a gaya. Hope sso doesn't succumb to that...Pinky is vile.

Sunday bahut door hai. Waiting eagerly.

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Superb update
First Rohit now Shivay both of them had hurt Anika in love
Rightly Said may the best man win
Next Update on Sunday
Yeh to bhaut nainsafi hai
Please update soon

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laola

@laola

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Love where have you taken this story. Shivaay seems to have jumped the gun on the whole Rohit issue; at what point was anika suppose to tell him about her engagement when he was draging her down the alter or when he was semi married to her with a fiance on the side. They were not in a relationship to have had that exes talk, the only way Anika new about Mallika was because she literally dropped in. The only way shivaay's reaction would have been justified if they had talked about exes and Anika deliberately hid Rohit. Anyways bravo for the writing, I am sorely tempted to gently steer Harneet to your story, as a possible future track but won't as I am sure credit wouldn't be given where credit is due.

Edited by laola - 8 years ago

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MafiaQueen17

@MafiaQueen17

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Arey wah you updated again omg
fentastic update
let's see what shivaay do now
countinue soon

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Nice update.

The story of Rohit is revealed.It was beautiful love story but his mother spoiled it.The destiny had other plan.It was god's plan

Anika is shattered.Her love was her strength but now it was her weakness.she is a fighter.but when it comes to love it will break all the rules.It will be our strength when our love is with us.but it will be our weakness when we are fighting against them.

Shivaay and Rohit convo was interesting.

Eagerly waiting for your next update

Edited by Sakkiyah - 8 years ago