ShivIka FF - The Ray Of The Dawn ** PART 3 PG 17 26/4/17 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

120

Views

20.7k

Users

36

Likes

365

Frequent Posters

IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Hi guys, I have updated prologue and the first chapter to this story. Please do let me know how it is, and whether should I continue or not.
Love
-Harshada
arohiarsh16 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Starting is realy nice...waiting fr next update...continue soon...
MorningStar01 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#33
The reason for this huge goofy smile on my face?? 😳
Answer: HARSHADA 🤗


Here I was checking IF like it's the morning paper && what do I see?? 😲... I see the most amazing thing ever
A story dedicated to me, for my anniversary ❤️ I don't think there could have been anything better to wake up to this morning or a better anniversary gift (he's going to be really jealous that someone stole his #1 spot for gifts 😆)


Thank You so much sweetheart. I'm going to love you forever for this 🤗🤗 (not that I wasn't going to, but now it'll be more). I just love you ❤️
...

So about the prologue, firstly I'm glad that you uploaded a first chapter along with the prologue because I would have been sitting the whole day waiting for the first chapter after reading that prologue 😆 Secondly ilove angry young man who has a past that made him that way stories, so this story already made it on my top 10 List 😳 (among your other stories). && the title of the story, LOVE IT 👏



Chapter One. Has left me with so many questions 😳 I thought that I'd be ok after reading this part but no, I'm stuck here with a whole load of questions 😭
Is Tia a major part of this story? Is she going to be a vamp?
Why does Shivaay dislike Mr Raichand? && what did Mr Raichand not know about? What caused Shivaay's anger?
What happened to Shivaay that Mr Raichand didn't know about? Why is Shivaay angry with Anika? Is it because she left him and went abroad? Or something bigger? Is that wardrobe and room set out for Anika? He was holding something of Anika's isn't?

(I know, I know, I'll wait for the other chapters to get answers 😆)
...

The emotions in this story are beautiful ❤️ They're in perfect contrast to each other. Shivaay is ice && Anika is the fire to warm him up But even under all that ice, Shivaay has a warm spot tucked away just for Anika 😳... That flashback was so cute, such a connection at such a young age


Sneezing in between their "moment" was funny, way to break the mood Anika 🤣 ... but awww, even with all that anger he has towards Anika, he still can't see her sick 😒...Sigh, the connection if still there 😵


He likes Pink? I bet it's because she looks beautiful in that colour ☺️...Well their convo was enlightening, he doesn't wanna need her and she knows he won't admit to needing her so she says that it's she who needs him 😆 ... I like that she's determined to be with him && I like how he doesn't refuse her answer 👏 From that flashback he had, I can tell that he is someone who needs to be wanted by Anika as much as he wants to be with her 😭 So she knew exactly how to assure him when she said it's her who needs him 😳


Him looking for assurance of her words from her eyes reminded me of a quote of Ishq ( I think it was part 3) "Eyes are the most beautiful part of the human body. Eyes let us know what people often can't speak. Eyes allow us to catch secrets of people... because eyes don't lie" ❤️

That last para' with Anika's promise, I knew she was doing all this for him. She knows him more than he knows himself. I loved the words in that promise 👏
...


Thank Uu for a beautifully written update 🤗 I will be eagerly awaiting every Sunday now (I used to hate Sundays because there was no ishqbaaz, but now it will be a day I look forward too) 🥳


Sending virtual hugzZz && lots of Love 🤗❤️
-Shan'e
elysianights thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Yah!!! New story...and that from you..
I just love your stories dear...you are an awsm writer...and so are your stories..❤️
Very interesting concept...Shivaay and annika are childhood best friends...but wat happened to Shivaay and why he don't need annika??
Do update it soon...



Love you,
Anya 😳
lucky_princess thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Firstly... happy Anniversary Shan'e dear.🤗
Be happy always... nd keep smiling. May the Almighty shower his blessings on u.😳


Harshuuu... what do i give u this tym????
Made me speechless... oh wow! What an intensity.
Brilliantly..fnatabulousy written!👏👏
Kya batao... the way Anika understood Shivaay.. her Shivaay. Was sooo beautiful.
Shivaay's pain was amazingly expressed. I felt i will cry if u would have written more. Poignant!
The man of a stone was soo vulnerable on hearing her name. Her name did all that no one can eve do to him.
Her one sight did made him forget all his anger. She was indeed his Angel.
U r way tooo good Harshu.😳

I loved how they thought about each other... "her nose still turns red!" "Mr.Perfect...nd he still cares!"
Oh how much i love these two. ShivIka r wesome.. nd more beautiful in ur brilliant stories.

Love u loads... nd continue sooon.

Love Sharmi❤️
Nohsin10 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Beautiful story 👏. As usual I really love this.
IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: arohiarsh16

Starting is realy nice...waiting fr next update...continue soon...



Thank You Arohi.
Will continue soon dear
IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 8 years ago
#38


Thanks Sumi.
Glad you liked it
Sakkiyah thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Interesting story line
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Please pm me
ShivIka..Ketaki thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#40
ek aur story harshu di ki taraf se tan tana tana 🥳 🥳
interesting story as always waiting for next

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".