ShivIka FF - The Ray Of The Dawn ** PART 3 PG 17 26/4/17 - Page 5

Originally posted by: MorningStar01

The reason for this huge goofy smile on my face?? 😳

Answer: HARSHADA 🤗


Awww...really?????????😳

Thanks a ton dear. You know what, I was sitting over scooty on the road when I saw your comment. [My sister had gone to buy something and here I was, grinning like an idiot on road reading your comment not caring if people around me are finding me crazy🤣

Here I was checking IF like it's the morning paper && what do I see?? 😲... I see the most amazing thing ever

A story dedicated to me, for my anniversary ❤️ I don't think there could have been anything better to wake up to this morning or a better anniversary gift (he's going to be really jealous that someone stole his #1 spot for gifts 😆)

Thank You so much sweetheart. I'm going to love you forever for this 🤗🤗 (not that I wasn't going to, but now it'll be more). I just love you ❤️

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Oh you do? Even I check IF every morning the moment I wake up.😆 You are just being generously sweet.😳🤗 I am just so glad this could make you happy😳 Yeah a gift from me to you😊 Happy Advance Anniversary dear Will wish on actual day too❤️

(😆 Don't tell him then😳)

Completely my pleasure dear. I love you too🤗🤗

So about the prologue, firstly I'm glad that you uploaded a first chapter along with the prologue because I would have been sitting the whole day waiting for the first chapter after reading that prologue 😆 Secondly ilove angry young man who has a past that made him that way stories, so this story already made it on my top 10 List 😳 (among your other stories). && the title of the story, LOVE IT 👏

Hahaha😆 I had typed it so there was no meaning in delaying. I anyway would not had posted just a prologue. You people would have hit me then🤣

You are just make me go Awww...

Title isn't really unique dear. But I am glad you liked it.

Chapter One. Has left me with so many questions 😳 I thought that I'd be ok after reading this part but no, I'm stuck here with a whole load of questions 😭

Is Tia a major part of this story? Is she going to be a vamp?

Why does Shivaay dislike Mr Raichand? && what did Mr Raichand not know about? What caused Shivaay's anger?

What happened to Shivaay that Mr Raichand didn't know about? Why is Shivaay angry with Anika? Is it because she left him and went abroad? Or something bigger? Is that wardrobe and room set out for Anika? He was holding something of Anika's isn't?

(I know, I know, I'll wait for the other chapters to get answers 😆)

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I know a very confusing start right? I dont know why my stories start on suspense and cliffhanger.

I won't reveal that now🤣

The emotions in this story are beautiful ❤️ They're in perfect contrast to each other. Shivaay is ice && Anika is the fire to warm him up But even under all that ice, Shivaay has a warm spot tucked away just for Anika 😳... That flashback was so cute, such a connection at such a young age

Thank you so much dear. Pleasure knowing you enjoyed reading this chapter.

Oh well I love including flashbacks in my stories😳

Sneezing in between their "moment" was funny, way to break the mood Anika 🤣 ... but awww, even with all that anger he has towards Anika, he still can't see her sick 😒...Sigh, the connection if still there 😵

He likes Pink? I bet it's because she looks beautiful in that colour ☺️...Well their convo was enlightening, he doesn't wanna need her and she knows he won't admit to needing her so she says that it's she who needs him 😆 ... I like that she's determined to be with him && I like how he doesn't refuse her answer 👏 From that flashback he had, I can tell that he is someone who needs to be wanted by Anika as much as he wants to be with her 😭 So she knew exactly how to assure him when she said it's her who needs him 😳

I wanted to included some lighthearted moments. Glad you enjoyed reading them.

Of course, Shivika hai to connection to hoga hi na...

Hahhaa...didn't think about that.

Him looking for assurance of her words from her eyes reminded me of a quote of Ishq ( I think it was part 3) "Eyes are the most beautiful part of the human body. Eyes let us know what people often can't speak. Eyes allow us to catch secrets of people... because eyes don't lie" ❤️

That last para' with Anika's promise, I knew she was doing all this for him. She knows him more than he knows himself. I loved the words in that promise 👏

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Oh that wasn't a quote🤣 They were simple sentences written by originally myself😆

You really thought it was any quote???😳 I am honored.

Thank Uu for a beautifully written update 🤗 I will be eagerly awaiting every Sunday now (I used to hate Sundays because there was no ishqbaaz, but now it will be a day I look forward too) 🥳

Sending virtual hugzZz && lots of Love 🤗❤️

-Shan'e

Thank you so much for this beautiful comment dear.

You don't like sundays?? I love them. Finally a break from my clg😳

Loads of love

-Harshada