ShivIka OS: || Her Reward. || - Page 4

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

No dear... my story was only filled with one segmemt.. that is with the Pehli rasoi wala segment.. i had written the shot before one day of posting... par ye Net 😡... gosh i just hate it!!
I had got the sudden idea after watching that olv.
Well ur comments... r soo goood. I feel soo good... that i cant express it Shan'e dear. 😳 😃. Whenever i read ur comment my face is lit up like a 1500 watt bulb. Nd i guess i have already told u this.
Oh... u just summarize my story... that i love ur comment more than my story.😉
Yes... the love ghost has taken over Shivaay!
I love emotional things... but not sooo... cuz i am a bit sensitive to all those!
Do keep on commenting like this. The oast TS nd this OS disnt get much likes and comments... was bit disheartened... but when i see comments like these.. especially yours... that one is more than enough!
Thank u soo soo much dear.🤗🤗😳

Love u loads...
Sharmi.
Nd lots of virtual hugs r on its way! 😳 😉

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Sharmi, my darling, my sweetheart🤗

Should I apologize for being late or you understand why am I late??😉

Won't do much time pass😆 Coming to the OS😳 so this was it you were writing and saying its going too long? But it wasn't much long Sharmi😳 A very lovely read dearest.

Such a sweet OS. Loved reading it. The way, Shivaay ate Anika's made food which was horrible but just to save her , he ate it. Ohhooo, wife ki reputation bachani hai, Ahan😆😉 But it was a simple cute gesture by a husband. Ese husbands har ladki ko mile❤️ Don't worry, tumhe bhi esa hi milega🤣 Tathastu balike🤪

Later, when Anika tasted her own food, she was like ' fhat the wuck'😆 Liked Rudra's role here. And then some good food for Shivaay and he was scared before eating😆

But the most important part of the OS< ...Her Reward😉

Haan Haan Sharmi, I understood itni romantic updates kaise ati hai😉

Apart from this😆 Fabulous OS. Enjoyed reading this one😳 In fact your all stories are as lovely as you😳

Loads of love

-Harshada

Originally posted by: Roudy1

Aww Sharmi cute OS
Beautifully written dear. I loved the AniRu moments in your OS. Hope we get to see scenes like this in the real story as well.

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-

so lovely!

Originally posted by: Roselind

I am really Sorry for this late comment...😭 pls excuse my delay...😔 I was a bit busy with by studies...I know you will understand, Sharmi...

Coming to the OS...

Superbly Awesome OS...👍🏼👍🏼

Sharmi, you are seriously the best OS writer in this forum, no doubt there...👏👏😊

From the segments you created this sweet, funny & so full of love OS...amazing...just loved it...😃👏🤗

ShivIka are so perfect for each other...the most takkar ki jodi...& you made them shine brightly through this OS...

(He thought to taste it before anyone does. He kept a spoonfull in his mouth.
The consequences were...

His tongue screamed at him... "Fhat the wuck!!"
His throat burnt as the delicious Paneer Butter Masala ran down through his food pipe.
His belly punched him from inside... "how dare u feed me something like this!")----- This was hilarious...🤣😆😆

Shivaay superb-fantastic was LOL...& his throat, tongue & belly screaming at him even more funny...😆😆🤣

Shivaay ko exotic paneer itna pasand aaya ki Rudra k saath share karne ko ready nhi hua...😉😆

Dadi teased Shivaay...in midst of all that...& Pinky wanted to taste Anika's cooking...bichari khaati toh unki O My Mata ho jaati...saare saas wale instincts bahar aa jaate...😉😆🤣

(Shivaay pulled it back...

"Nahi..nahi..i am..reallly hungry...hungry.." he started gibling it all up.
"Bhayanak! Its bhayankly... fantastic...itna bhayanak aur... ta...tasty paneer apni life mein nahi khayi. Beautiful!"
He commented nd Anika's face glowed with happiness. She just couldnt believe he was complimenting her wrk. She was on the 9th cloud.

Shivaay didnt want to spoil her happiness.)------ This was both a comedy scene as well as a bit romantic...😆😳

Shivaay praising Anika's cooking in a very weird manner & he didn't want Anika's happiness to disappear...he cares for her so much...

Anika's expressions on tasting her paneer was really priceless... 😆😆

("Dadi i hope saari rasamein ho chuke hain... iske baad mujhe koi bhi rasam sehne ki himmat nahi hai!" Wid that he glared at Anika nd left as fast as he could.)-----Red part... 😆🤣

("Thank you" they said in unison...
They shared an eyelock.
"Par aap kyun thank u bol rahe hai??"
"Kyunki aaj tumhaari vajah se maine ek din mein itni baar khud ki bathroom visit karke aaya hun. Aur usse mujhe pata chala ki meri baathroom kitna bada hai aur usme... 2,699 big sized tiles hai!" He said.)----- Again some hilarious lines...🤣😆😆

Ohhh!!! this "family k liye kiya" excuse dena kab band karenge ShivIka...😒 but anyways, even if not in front of Anika, still Shivaay confessed that he did everything for his wife...😳

AniRu bonding was as adorable & cute as ever...😃😃

Rudra said Shivaay cares for Anika the most & that made Anika lost for a moment...😃😊

ShivIka intense eye-lock & Shivaay rubbing off the sindoor from Anika's nose was so romantic...😳

The family praised Anika's cooking & Shivaay's body parts' reaction was just opposite from yesterday's...😃😃

("Thank u Tej Uncle."

"Uh..uh...Uncke nahi... call me Bade papa Anika Beta."
He said. As soon as those wrds left his mouth she looked at him and his eyes held only care for her. She felt soo loved for a moment. And the word Beta was more than enough to make her eyes brim with tears. Shivaay saw that she was getting emotional.
Tej left an smiling Anika.
She looked at Shivaay indirectly thanking him with a smile for allowing her to be a part of a family Shivaay understood her and smiled in return.

All blesses Anika...Pinky too..)------ Such a emotional & touchy portion of the OS...👍🏼😃

Again the AniRu moment was superb...they always give that bro-sis feeling...just loved the dilogues they exchanged & the love Anika showered on her devar/brother...😃🤗

The last ShivIka scene was awesome-est...waow...there was love, care, romance, fun...everything...😳😃

Thnkxxx so much for the pm...😊😊

Pls write such OSs more...😃😃

Originally posted by: preity_d

☺️

Sharmi ❤️ what a cute OS

I love how the bheega billa turns into a smart, naughty billa in ur story. I love the Tej-Anika equation in ur story. I love how Anika couldn't keep the secret of her burnt paneer from her beloved devar Rudra, whom she considers as her own brother. Aww! Love they are...

I loved your words in the brackets that u don't remember all the dishes Shivay likes, that was so cute, Adorable u'r... Finally I want to thank you for always bringing sweet fantasies to us which we can cherish with the current negativity in the show. Will look forward to your future works on our fav couple 'SHIVIKA'

Love, Preity ❤️

Originally posted by: chottekikhushi

Such a cute story yaar...So much Shivika cuteness and also loved the way she again tried and got it right with the help of her favourite devar!!!

Originally posted by: MorningStar01

Ohh, I thought you also used the seg' where they hug under the staircase 😆😆

But anyway, it was still a brilliant OS 😳 what else can we expect from a brilliant writer 👏

I know what you mean by net problems 😭 sometimes I feel like it's conspiring against me 😆 probably the universe telling us we're spending too much time online 🤣

Amazing writing deserves praise Sharmi && you make me smile too by giving me such wonderful replies to my replies 😳 && your work makes me happy for days 😆

All the members who didn't read your work don't know what they missing out on 😭 hopefully they realise soon && I'm sure they will 🤗

Looking forward to any updates from you ❤️

HugzZz&Love Received 😆 sending some of my own back for you 🤗

Originally posted by: annikaa

Nice One Sharmi..!

Cutely overloaded with food😉

👏

AniRu were fab..!😃