Shivika SS: Enough *PART 3* pg 10* 5/1* - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anguish
Hurt
Pain
Still i feel anika will come back
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Awesome update...
Shivaay miss his lady love...his pain is visible in his actions...
The pain of past memories is haunting her...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow what way to express his anguish and her pain. Good that she has Mallika, Om & Rudra by her side though all she needed was and need is Shivaye. Some times, without realizing what will be the aftermath effect of some steps, thinking what we know is understood by the other person without even we voicing out, we make some moves thinking what is there to explain or thinking that the explanation can wait. But you never know how your own words will boom wrong and hit you on the soft spot even before you see it approaching.

Shivaye thought that there was no need for him explain his plan to Anika thinking she will not go anywhere. He under estimated her esteem and pride. He pulled a raw strand of her nerve when he talked so lowly about her lineage just to make his point clear to Kapoor's so that they will fall prey to his plans. He never even in his nightmare would have thought that his those words will shatter Anika's world and she will collapse and be broken.

the broken pieces are too difficult to fix but not impossible. It takes time and sincere effort and Shivay has to deal with it now with all his patience and love.

You have left us on a CLIFF HANGER and it is too difficult to hang for a long time,. So please update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the update glad you are continuing loved Sso getting a taste of his medicine love that Annika is not letting him get away with hurting her using her emotions against her let him work for it awesome update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh, I am loving the myriad ways in which you are taking the story forward- at a juncture when you think Anika will succumb, she doesn't- as she should! SSO needs to grovel a bit! No- make that, A LOT.


Hoping to read Chapter 4 soon:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
h god shivaay so desperate and anika so helpless
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Such a truly Angsty piece...really enjoyed reading all three parts. The tension between them is so thick and palpable...and feeling very bad for both of them...but mostly for her...as she always seems to get the raw end of the deal. Looking forward to the next part...glad I cam across this story!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such tortured souls albeit of his own making...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww such nice update
pain ful..
waiting.. update soon buddy..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I came across this just today and read all 3 parts in one go. I am so glad you are going to continue.
I do wish it would have played out this way but forget Shivvay it seems even Tej who has been 'Businessman of the Year' for 15 years in a row (how it beats me) is a fool.
It takes just 3 Kapoor sisters to make Pappu's out of India's leading Businessmen it seems
I should try my hand at it - might make millions 😆

I love all your characters. How true they have stayed and played out.
Pls PM me
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