A kid he is surely- a PriVeer OS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hola Priveerians! Due to no telecast of PriVeer scenes from last week( ok we got a choth sa scene) I was angry when this idea of him with his children strucked. So here you go - introducing ACP Ranveer with his son Navdeep and daughter Sahana.

"Sahana stop doing that!". Immediately regretting what he just repeated after trying to feed his 8 months old daughter from last 15 mins. He sat down on the couch with his hands on his head. "Oh! God! How does one take care of babies?".
"I'm not a baby! exclaimed Navdeep with narrowed eyes". Ranveer hopelessly looked towards his elder son and said "yes! I know! . Now Nav help me with feeding your sister. Can you do that old boy? (in a teasing voice). He said so because he knew that whenever challenges are thrown before Nav,he doesn't fail,this was a trick he learnt while Priyanka took care of this little boy,now not so little. He chuckled. Nav finding it difficult to reject the challenge ran towards his room. Ranveer's victorious smile slowly got lost amidst this situation. Obviously I'm wrong Sahana. Now please stop crying dear princess. I promise I won't scream again. Ok!
Sahana started crying loudly than earlier with like gathering all her energy which simpering till now.Ranveer was exhausted of taking care of his own children. He thought "how does she manage it all by herself? Because she has an NGO too where she has got children too care for,she has our children ,she has this house,her siblings,...Nav surprised him by saying
"Dad! You are such a kid!! I don't know how does Mom manage you? Saying that he brought his Jojo and gave it to his sister,asking her to eat the food while she is playing and telling some cute and sweet stories of Jojo. Ranveer felt like he was being slapped across his face. He? A kid? He who had caught famous culprits,solved impossible cases and God! knows what else had done is a kid? He quickly glanced back after being interrupted by a giggle in his thought process. He gave thanks to God! Nav said " don't disturb bhagwan Ji now Dad! He might sleeping. Who wakes up at this hour other than you and your police station? Ranveer replied hugging both of his children" yes! My boy. I was thanking God! for you and...Sahana. And Mom! Nav added in. Yes! A kid I'm Navdeep. Nav replied "I know Dad! Now quickly dress up, you gotta go now right?
All are welcome. If you enjoyed it do like and comment 😉 . I got this idea from Twerping's and Emerald 39 Os. Both of which were awesome and cute so anyone interested can ask for the links of 'Breakfast drabble' and 'Of new beginnings' from of them( I don't know how to post links ).

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hola, D! This is a cute little OS. 😊
Though, has Navdeep been hanging out with Rudr? 🤣 His naughtiness definitely tells me so. The way Rudy teases his Bhaiyya about how he's become old is quite similar to Nav telling Ranveer about him being a kid. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Hola, D! This is a cute little OS. 😊

Though, has Navdeep been hanging out with Rudr? 🤣 His naughtiness definitely tells me so. The way Rudy teases his Bhaiyya about how he's become old is quite similar to Nav telling Ranveer about him being a kid. 😆


Maamu ka asar !! 😎 Let's see what more has Navdeep been taking lessons on from Rudy 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My babies Nav and Sahana and Jojo made an appearance! Aww ❤️ Thank you for inserting them in this cute, cute OS, Dimaag! ACP really can't handle kids on his own, can he 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: emerald39

My babies Nav and Sahana and Jojo made an appearance! Aww❤️Thank you for inserting them in this cute, cute OS, Dimaag! ACP really can't handle kids on his own, can he😆


Yes! They did emerald 39 😃 . And I should thank you because you made me think of them as a family. And no he can't handle his kids. I imagine will he take classes from Shinde and Varma again surprising them both or not 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is cute 😳
Good work dimaag!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Dimaag,
It is indeed a cute little story. I can imagine ACP struggling with small innocent kids whereas he is so good in catching dangerous bad guys 😊

Perhaps ACP will have more 'daddy' moments.
What do you say to write more for us? 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is super cute, dimaag! I absolutely adore the idea of ACP as a carer. And to see them as a family was super cute and heartwarming.
Loved it!
Also, isn't it cool that now not only is the show inspiring us, but that existing fanfic on PriVeer is inspiring more fanfic on PriVeer. Just goes to show that even if the show fails to deliver us the PriVeer we want, we can create our own version quite capably 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was incredibly cute...😳
Ranveer is a kid..nd his son is his Father 😆
I loved this...

Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Hi Dimaag,

It is indeed a cute little story. I can imagine ACP struggling with small innocent kids whereas he is so good in catching dangerous bad guys😊

Perhaps ACP will have more 'daddy' moments.
What do you say to write more for us?😉


Hi Rishi! Thank you dear for finding it cute 😊 . And yes! they say in Hindi
" Baccho ko sambhalna baccho ka khel nahi" 😆

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