Shivika FF- Do Dil, Ek Jaan! AUTHOR'S NOTE pg38 23/03/18

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Akshnavlove

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

hi dear,. i m ketaki
i read all parts in one time.. all parts are superb.. humare shivika banenge mummy papa woww...
woww ye tia ki bachhi yaha bhi aayi haddi bankar aur humesha ki tarah humare buddu ramji shivaay babu usse le aaye... but i liked this story aur isme anika jyada bhav khaye ab shivaayse bat karne ke liye afterall shivaayne galti bhi utni badi ki hain... tadpao shivaayko anika fully 😆

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Fariba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: lourel24
Shivay is gonna regret it. He should not have hidden from her knowing clearly how much she hate her.

Totally agreeing! He should have told Anika everything. 😕 But don't worry! Haha it's Shivaay after all. He won't do any more mistakes! 😆😳

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Fariba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: joy1
Ow boy!
This was sure to happen...
I'm loving the way your story is shaping up..
Adding on, don't know about others,but I'm seriously enjoying your story..
So without any second thoughts, please keep writing...

Thank you so much for your lovely and inspiring comment! Will In Sha Allah update soon for you guys! Gladdd that you are loving my version of our Ishqbaaaz! 😳😆 So thank you thank you sooo muchhh! 😳😛

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Monidipa konar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

nyc one dear...excitd fr d nxt part...do update soon😊

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Fariba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good..

Thank you so much for always reading everything every writer writes and always leaving behind a positive comment! I am really glad that you liked my story and thank you again for reading! 😛😊

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Fariba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: wafa.M
lo phail gaya raita... 😉

One beautiful update... Loved it... ❤️

Now waiting to see how Shivay makes things right... 😊

Continue Soon Will Be Waiting... 😉

Raita samet lega Shivaay don't worry! 😆 Par thoda sa time toh lagega!

Thanks for reading! I am happy that you loved what I wrote! Haha, my version! 😳

Will try to update soon!!! 😛

Also, thanks for you lovely comment! 😃

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Fariba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: pihusingh
Phail gya raita Tia is back
Shivaay is dumb he will regret for this
Why he is working with lady baba?
Khidki tod update
Please pm me

Hahaha, Raitaaa! Main Shivaay ko iss Raite ko samet ne ke liye majboor kar doungi haha, dw! 😆😳😆 oh, he is just helping Tia, because Anika had completely changed him and he is now a v kind person! 😆😳 But he will soon realise his BIG mistake!

Thanks though for praising my work! 😆😛

Will surely pm you next time I update!

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Fariba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Ketaki19
hi dear,. i m ketaki
i read all parts in one time.. all parts are superb.. humare shivika banenge mummy papa woww...
woww ye tia ki bachhi yaha bhi aayi haddi bankar aur humesha ki tarah humare buddu ramji shivaay babu usse le aaye... but i liked this story aur isme anika jyada bhav khaye ab shivaayse bat karne ke liye afterall shivaayne galti bhi utni badi ki hain... tadpao shivaayko anika fully 😆

Heyyy Ketakii! 😃 read everything in one go? Hahaha! Aww 😆😳

Yes that Tia though😡. Bohot dino ke baad ayi yaha par haha! 😆

Thank you for reading and I am glad that you like my FF. 😭

Don't worry Anika will definitely not forgive him so easily here. 😡 Batameez Shivaay! Badpayi karega ye abhi! 😆

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Fariba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr
nyc one dear...excitd fr d nxt part...do update soon😊

Thank a lot for reading! 😃

Will Update soon In Sha Allah 😛

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Akshnavlove

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Fariba

Heyyy Ketakii!😃read everything in one go? Hahaha! Aww😆😳
Yes that Tia though😡. Bohotdino ke baad ayi yaha par haha!😆
Thank you for reading and I am glad that you like my FF.😭
Don't worry Anika will definitely not forgive him so easily here.😡Batameez Shivaay! Badpayi karega ye abhi!😆

haa sab ek sath padh liya 😆
bharpayi karne do par yar shivika ko alag mat karo plzz