The Heart Gets What The Heart Wants/FF ShivIka(Ud:May08 Ch:34a/pg141)

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#681

Originally posted by: ISensedYou
Down with fever, throat infection n cold. Will comment later. Urrgh canadian winter i tell u😡

Aww.. take care kammo.. 😊 Get well soon...love ya.. 🤗

Huum.. Kammo=KAmini comment doesn't go down well thru throat..😆 aww.. I won't call u dat again.. U fell ill..

Edited by --Zehnaseeb-- - 8 years ago

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Staysh

@Staysh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#682

Very good story loved it every part of it. Update soon and send me PM

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vandy

@vandywster

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Posted: 8 years ago

#683

loved it . very good story 👏👏👏

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shanry

@shanry

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Posted: 8 years ago

#684

I wish you were a true blue Ishqbaaz writer. I truly sincerely wish that.

It's only then will we get such beautiful Shivika moments and poignant learning situations when watching Ishqbaaz.

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#685

Dost dost na raha... Pyaar pyaar na raha... That's what Shivaay's gonna sing when anika loses memory... Pearlie Before I lose my sanity over is it just fake as per plan or a plan gone fail... Kindly give an update of ur FF...

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#686

Botox that was so wicked I so wished Annika got at least half the spunk she has in your ff I loved the cute flirting and their knock jokes amazing update thanks for the pm .

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Ishqbaaaz101

@Ishqbaaaz101

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Posted: 8 years ago

#687

A 100+ pages!!!!! Congrats!!!!!! 👏

I hope the Lohri scene here isn't as intense as the show

Beautiful description of Annika in red!!

and Shivaay's reaction!!!

Annika's burn on Tia ohhh that must of hurt her real good

Their hand holding scene and his compliment

I hope he catches Tia this time.

I just cant get enough of these two. I wonder how many times Shivaay will come home to see Annika.

Thanks for this part!! It was great! 👏

Waiting for the next

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jalarani

@jalarani

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#688

I am sure like me there will be many who wish that your story line would be picked up for the daily soap. You are just mind blowing.Please write some other fiction and publish it. Everyone here would surely buy it. Beautiful please continue and at the earliest.

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asya34

@asya34

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#689

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Asya...you are truly a master at writing stories...I am so enjoying this story...well and truly look forward to all of your updates!! Thanks for a brilliant read!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.. your encouraging words matter a lot 😊

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asya34

@asya34

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Posted: 8 years ago

#690

Originally posted by: poemssyndrome
It feels so good to back! Hi buddy!
This was a beautiful update. And I read it twice bcoz it made my mood!
First of all I think flirting is a art. There is a thin line between being flirty & being cheesy & man oh man Shivaay does make a good flirt without being cheesy!
lol ... yeah! we don't want the cheapde kind 😉

Dear Anika, we all have the Angel & Devil dancing around our back taking us on a hell ride to confusionland. That bit was so funny! I would love to see Shivaay's duo too Asya. That man must have many weirdly serious conversations with his angel & devil especially when it comes to Anika.
Oh! you will see Shivvay's Duo as well ... trust me 😆

I could see Anika walking out of her bedroom looking & smelling heavenly. And Shivaay losing his mind. So beautifully written! And would love to see him losing his mind when someone equally handsome of opposite sex delivers delicate complements towards her. Oh me & my devilish ideas. He would just burn! 😉
It may not be happening in the soap but it sure is happening in my story a bit later 😆

Lastly Tia! Give Anika a mean comment & see what happens! One of the best thing I love about the Anika we so badly miss. Her Hazirjawab attitude!
But under all this one thing that you layered so nicely was the genuine care ShivIka have for each other. The hand squeeze below the table. And the goodbyes to last till the end of the day!
I love it Asya!
I want ShivIka to have the BF/GF romance as well which they seemed to have missed ... that is why I yo-yo back and forth from light and flirty to sizzling
Off I go to read it for the third time! 😆