Shivika /Ishkara/Rumya SS (PART 26 *NEW - pg 56) 3rd October 2017 - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

335

Views

79.6k

Users

55

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

priyapatkar thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: choco0709

Thanks for pm...

Plzz updates soon...
I like ur update...
I like how you wrote ishkara scene...u described it so well
It was not there in this chaptert though i miss it...

u're welcome
yes i'll try to update part 11 (B) by tonight
thankyou!!!
in this SS each and every character's story will be given importance. butdont worry, part 11 (B) has lots of Shivika, Rumya and Ishkara
priyapatkar thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MorningStar01

Just read parts 9, 10 && 11 okay..u liked them na?? be honest haa..

They were absolutely amazing && I like that you gave importance to all the characters 👏 thankyou!!! thats true. eachand everycharacter's story will be given equal importance. so you might find that some chapters might not be that focused on Shivika/Ishkara/Rumya.
I especially liked the Shiv'Ika parts ❤️ Sigh ❤️


Brilliant updates && Thank uUu for the p.m's 🤗 thankyou soo much..n about pm, u're welcome.i'll pm u next part also.
Wish I could give you a thorough response for each of the 3 updates but I'm a bit strapped for time at the moment 😭 ohhh...okay..thats what i thought. i mean i thought u might be busy. no issues.
Buhhht hopefully I can come back and edit his comment 😳 will be WAITING. 😃😃



-Shan'e

priyapatkar thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MorningStar01

Let me just res' my spot 😆 finally, uunresed it.

...
Oh Gosh, Saumya has got everyone so worried 😭 she was hurt. n all she thought was to stay away from all.its her habit.
Glad that Ishana showed presence of mind and reminded Anika about the group else they would have ended up at the boys hostel 😆 hahahaha..Issu also taunted her. if u read it carefully.
I know this is wrong but when I read the part about Tia doing her reiki, I couldn't stop laughing 🤣 hehehe...😉 i can understand...Tia and her reiki. 🤢


Urrgghhh this Rudra, it's all his fault she went missing && on top of that he's lying to them 😡 he lied because he was scared.he knew if he had spoken the truth,his gang would have killed him.
Love how Ishana was being strong for Anika. So Anika is the one that keeps them in line , Ishana is the wall for them && Saumya is the one who give them the advice ?? 😲 you guessed it right. they all have weakness but in different form.
Maybe now Om will realise that Ishana is not as childish as she seems 😃 hehas already realised it dear...part 10, 11 are proof to it.


Saumya hides?? Now how are they going to find her 😳 they will, Rudra will..
I'm reading about how Ishana&Anika broke down and I can feel their pain, buhhht I'm glad that Om & Shivaay were there to comfort them. Even the strong ones need someone to support them at times 😭 part 8 was a kick start for Shivika and Ishkara's love story along with Rumya. this part proved that the guys will always be there for their girls no matter what.


He finally went to look for her 👏 he had too..Omw && his apology to her. He's just too cute yes, he is. Saumya's condition on forgiving him 😆 😉😉 He picked her up, haaawww 😳 abhi se hi joru ka gulam..aage kya hoga?? Hahahaha would have thought Anika&Ishana was going to scold her 😆 they would have but But Shivaay ended up making her feel scared. exactly... Ishana&Rudra friends, that's a shocker, but I guess they both love Saumya 😲 ishana thought that it was of Rudra that Somya was found. but when she will know that it was because of Rudra that Somya had d\hidden herself,she will be the last one to forgive him.


So Om&Shivaay are noticing that Ishana&Anika aren't really open books 👏 But its good that they're seeing the different sides of Ishana&Anika. yes..isse hi toh pyaar hoga..😳😳



Thank uUu for the p.m ❤️ u're most welcome
Loved the Shiv'Ika scene && also the Ish'Kara one too ❤️ m glad u loved them. 😳😳
In fact, I enjoyed the whole update. You have amazing writing skills 👏 oh! thankyou so very much dear. that was a great compliment for me. ☺️


-Shan'e


priyanvs thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear
I liked how they stand for there frnds
Felt bad for prinku
Loved the update
crazysweetie thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Poor priyanka and dev is such a devil
wafa.M thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful updates... loved all the parts... ❤️
the gang ... their friendship n bonding is amazing ... shivay rescuing the gang is bonus to be read 😉

Continue soon... will be waiting 😊
choco0709 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Update waiting since night...
😭😆
Edited by choco0709 - 8 years ago
priyapatkar thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: wafa.M

beautiful updates... loved all the parts... ❤️
the gang ... their friendship n bonding is amazing ... shivay rescuing the gang is bonus to be read 😉

Continue soon... will be waiting 😊


thankyou!!!! 😃
hahaha..Shivaay..😳😳
yes..updating part 11 (B) today
priyapatkar thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Part 11 (B)

Anika: sacchi mein?

Ishana: haa Anika.

Anika looked lost.

-------X-------X--------

Here, Somya looked shocked at Rudra's sudden action.

Somya: kya hua??

Rudra: Somya, kya hum..

Somya: hum kya??

Rudra: kahi bahar chal sakte hai? waise bhi aaj bunk mara hai toh..

Somya: hmmm..chalega. pr kaha?

Rudra: woh bahar nikal ne pr decide karte hai. its 12:30, hum ek 7 tak aa jayenge. Hostel door band hone se pehle.

Somya smiled n RuMya left.

-------X-------X--------

Here, Ranveer went n sat besides Priyanka.

Priyanka: Somya, meine kaha na..mujhe baat nahi karni..plzz mujhe akela chod do..

Ranveer: Priyanka, it's me. Ranveer.

Priyanka turned n saw him. Her eyes still had tears. Ranveer wanted to hug her so that she could feel comfort. but he didn't.

Priyanka: tum?

Ranveer: haa..

Priyanka didn't said a word n neither did Ranveer. Both sat there quietly. There was no awkwardness. Priyanka even though she denied needed support, n Ranveer was her support right now.

-------X-------X--------

Here, Anika was absentmindedly walking in the campus that she didn't realised that there were steps ahead. She kept walking n walking n walking n she slipped.

Anika: ahhh..

"kuch nahi hua, u're safe"

She heard a familiar voice n opened her eyes to find Shivaay looking at her. Then she remembered how he helped her, then her dream n then Isshu telling her that she was in love with the man holding her. She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't even realised that Shviaay had made her stand

Shivaay: Anika? tum theek toh ho na? tumhari chot ksi hai?

Anika saw him staring at her neck n thought of her dream..n started breathing heavily. Shviaay saw this.

Shivaay: Anika, kya hua?

He made her sit on a near by bench and sat with her.

Anika didn't said anything n kept panting.

Shivaay touched her temple to see if she was having a fever. As soon as he touched her, Anika jerked away n stood up making Shivaay also stand.

Anika: mujhe chalna chahiye.

Shivaay: ek min

Anika: kya hua Shivaay?

Shivaay : Shivaay?

Anika : haa. aapka naam Shivaay hi hai na?

Shivaay: haaan..pr..

Anika: toh ase chauk kyu rahe hai?

Shivaay: tum jaanti ho na mein kon hu?

Anika: yeh ksa sawaal hai?

Shivaay : nahi. puchna padh raha hai. qki shayad tum bhul gayi ho k mein tumhara professor hu.

Anika: pata hai mujhe!!

Shivaay: toh kis haq se tum mujhe Shivaay bula rahi ho? bhulo math k mein tumhara prof hu aur tum meri student.

Anika: I know this. (in an irritated tone )

Shivaay: So show some respect. Shivaay sir se sidha Shivaay?

Anika: arre? asa kya kar rahe hai aap? aaphine toh kaha tha k aapko aapke naam se pukarne k liye

Shivaay: what? kab? kab kaha meine yeh?

Anika: arre, aaj sub...

N it struck her hard. It was in her dream that Shivaay had asked her to call him by his name. oh crap, she was in deep trouble.

Shivaay: aaj sub? subhe??

Anika: nahi. aapne yeh kal raat kaha tha.

Shivaay: mujhe yaad nahi.

Anika: kaha tha aapne.

Shivaay: enough!! Yu have to write Modes of entry ans 20 times and submit it in 2 days.

Anika: kyaaa? kyuuu?

Shivaay: for bunking the class. correction for bunking the class for the 2nd tym. For calling me Shivaay aur mujhse behas karne k liye.

Anika: pr sir...

Shivaay: abhi bhi behas kar rahi ho? fyn..35 times.

Anika: what? sir plzzz

Shivaay: 50 times. aur abh agar phirse behas ki toh 100 times ho jayega..samjhi? mujhe yeh ans Thursday tak chahiye. sharp at 1:30 pm. now go.

Anika left and Shivaay entered his cabin. He didn't knew why but liked her calling him by his name.

-------X-------X--------

Shivaay: what? Shivaay, control yourself. woh teri student hai. toh kya hua agar tumhari age...no!! stop this. focus Shivaay, focus.

Shivaay literally banged his head on his table in frustration. Why was he getting attracted towards her? what was happening to him?

-------X-------X--------

Here, Ishana was sitting alone listening music when Om came and sat besides her.

Ishana: hiii..

Om: hii.

Ishana: Rehaan ka kya hua? uski chot gheri nahi hai na?

Om: nahi. theek hai woh.

Ishana: okay..

Om: Ishana??

Ishana: haa??

N b4 Om could say anything, Ishana's mob ranged. Ishana's eyes widen, n she started praying to God. She made all kind of faces while praying. Om was amused. He didn't understood why she was behaving like this. Caller Id showed Mumma. So why so much weirdness.

Ishana: he..

N she removed the phone from her ears n closed her eyes. Om looked shocked.

Mumma: nalayak!!! 4 hafte ho gaye. daffod. 1 call nahi kiya. humesha humne call karne ka kya tujhe? iss baar meine socha k tujhe call nahi karungi jab tak tu khud se call nahi karti pr tu hai k Deradhun gayi aur hume bhul gayi. ghadedi, bevakuf, daffod re daffod.

Ishana was embarrassed. Her mumma's voice was soo loud that whole colg must have heard that Ishana was getting scolded by her mother. Om looked at Ishana n controlled himself from laughing.

Ishana: mumma, su che, dheere baat kar ne..

Mumma: chup kar. saamne hoti na toh 2 laga k deti tujhe.

Ishana had enough of her sweetness. she couldn't take it anymore. Om need to knew this. he needed to know that how her relationship is with her family.

Ishana: Aeee..bas kar. kitna chilati hai. kaan phatt gaye mere. kabhi toh dheere baat kar. maana k mujhse galti hui. uske liye M sorry. pr tu chilla kyu rahi hai? tune bhi toh call nahi kiya na..mein gussa hui??

Mumma: theek ho gayi? kya ho gaya tha tujhe? itni acche se baat kyu kar rahi thi tu?

Ishana: haa ho gayi theek. karna padha. saamne Omkara joh hai.

This shocked both Omkara and Her mumma.

Mumma: kon Omkara?

Ishana: tera daamad. meine apne liye dhund liya. tujhe dhundne ki jarurat nahi.

Omkara stood up and all his laughter got vanished in thin air.

Mumma: ksa hai ladka? accha toh hai na? tujhe khush toh rakhega na? tera khayal toh rakhta hai na? tujhse pyaar se baat toh karta hai na? pakka serious hai usko lekar? pappa ko bataa du? kab milva rahi hai usse?? uske ghar walon ko pata hai? bol na..

Ishana: kitne sawaal mumma..dekh ek hi baar bolungi. dhyaan se sunn. Mujhe Omkara se pyaar hai. pr woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta. haa mujhe puri guarantee hai k woh mujhe khush rahega. bahit hi accha ladka hai. usne mera dil nahi toda. mujhe pata hai usse mein acchi lagti hu aur 100 takka pata hai k aage jaake yahi tera daamad banega.

Omkara unknowingly smiled n Ishana winked at him. Ishana's mother knew that Ishana will never say all this in tp n so was happy for her daughter. They chatted for a while and then hung up.

Om: tumhe itna confidence hai??

Ishana: yes.

Om: Ishana...tum saachi me pagaal ho.

Ishana: Om, mujhe joh log acche lagte hai woh Isshu bulate hai. I want you to call me Isshu. plzzz..

Om: what? Ishana...I..

Ishana: take ur tym. pr Isshu hi bulaya abh se.

Om didn't said a word, Ishana smiled n left.

-------X-------X--------

Here, Rudra took Somya to a children park n Somya excitedly ran towards the kids n started playing with them. Rudra stood at a corner and kept looking at her

Rudra: thank God, Google app hai. iske wajah se mujhe har jagah ka pata yu chal jaata hai.

Somya who was playing with the kids saw Rudra staring at her n came near him

Somya: chalo na..ase akele kya khade ho? Let's play. sab bacche abhi lagori khel rahe hai. bada maza aayega. come on.

Rudra: okay.

RuMya played with the kids till they got tired. Rudra saw Somya huffing n smiling at the same time.

Rudra: thaklis? (thak gayi)

Somya: ho yaar. jaam. tu? (haa yaar. bahot. tum?)

Rudra: mi pan. thodya vel basu aani mag jau. chalel? (mein bhi. thode tym bethte hai aur phir chalte hai. chalega?)

Somya: chalel. (chalega) ek min. Rudra? tum marathi bol rahe ho? wow!!!

Rudra: school days me marathi compulsory subject that. so isliye thoda thoda marathi aata hai.

Somya smiled n suddenly her smile turned into a mischievous smirk. b4 Rudra could sense, Somya started tickling him. Rudra almost slept on the road n Somya tickled him till his begged her to stop.

Rudra: plzz, plzz mujhe tickle msth karo. mujhe control nahi hota. plzz.

Somya: okay.

Rudra smiled.

Somya: tum mujhe nahi karoge?

Rudra: nahi.

Somya: shyaa..agar karte toh mein tumhara pachka karti..

Rudra: accha aur woh kse?

Somya: mujhe gudgudi nahi hoti.

Somya started laughing. Rudra kept looking at her n suddenly pulled her close to him. Somya landed on his well toned chest n closed her eyes. Rudra softly touched her waist n Somya shivered. Rudra moved his finger on her waist in a tickling way n Somya instead of laughing clutched Rudra's shirt, there was something different in his touch this time. Somya felt nice. She was now hugging him still clutching his shirt. Rudra looked shocked. he had thought Somya would fell tickling sensation. but she was hugging him, he didn't bothered to think why was she hugging him n hugged her back.

Somya didn't wanted to break the hug but she finally did n looked everywhere but not at Rudra.

Rudra: kya hua??

Somya started to blush n actually became pink due to her fair complex. Rudra saw this n couldn't resist from pulling her cheeks.

Rudra: tum itni hot kyu ho?

Somya looked at him in utter shock..

Rudra: mera maltab k tumhare cheeks bahot garam ho gaye hai. isliye pucha k itni garam kyu ho..matlab garam kyu ho gayi ho?

Somya: woh itna khelena..isliye..garmi k wajah se. mala hota asa (she lied)

Rudra: okay. w8 mein thanda paani laata hu.

Somya: nako..mi bari aahe..chal colg jau. late hoeil nahitar. (nahi..mein theek hu..chalo colg jaate hai. warna late ho jayenge)

Rudra: okay..

Saying so RuMya left for colg.

-------X-------X--------

Here, it had been almost 5 in the evening, Priyanka was still sitting near the discussion area. Ranveer sat quietly besides her.

Priyanka: tum jao Ranveer.

Ranveer: jaanti ho Priyanka? mein 8 saal ka tha aur meri behen 4 saal ki jab humare parents ki car accident me maut ho gayi. Mere papa ne will banayi thi k agar unhe ya maa ko ya un dono ko kuch ho gaya toh unki saari property humare naam kar di jayegi. Aur will k mutabit mere maa papa k guzare jaane k baad saari property mere aur mere behen k naam ho gayi. aur phir mere chacha joh sirf tyohar k din humse milne ate the hume achanak se adopt karna chahte the. mein jaanta tha k woh hume humse pyaar karte hai isliye adopt nahi kar rahe hy the balki unhe property chahiye thi isliye hume adopt kar rahe hai. mein yeh baat apni choti si behen ko nahi samjha paaya. aur ussi k khatir mein usse lekar mere chacha aur chachi k saath rehne laga..mein jaanta tha k woh hum pr kuch kharcha nahi karenge, isliye meine papa k account se paise nikal kar apni aur apni behen k education ka kharcha nikala. meri behen abhi 10th de rahi hai. uspr pressure hai. qki mein chahta hu k woh apna 11th yaha iss colg se kare. aur uske liye usse above 90 laane honge. joh woh layegi. mujhe pura bharosa hai uss pr.

Priyanka: tum yeh sab mujhe kyu bataa rahe ho?

Ranveer: mujhe bachpan me hi pata chal gaya tha Priyanka, k yeh duniya ksi hai. tumne shayad bachpan me sirf safe jagah rakha gaya hai, tumhara ghar, tumhare mom-dad k saath. tumne kabhi bahar ki duniya dekhi hi nahi. iss duniya me bure log bhi hai Priyanka. Dev jse. mere chacha, chachi jse, joh apne kaam k liye dusron ko use kar sakte hai. aur acche log bhi hai jse Om, Rudra, Daksh, Rehaan, Anika, Ishana, Somya. tumhe abh acche aur bure me farak karna aana chahiye. tum bacchi nahi ho, bina soche samjhe faisla lene. sab pr trust karna acchi baat hai, pr bevakufi bhi. acche aur bure log me farak karna sikh lo Priyanka, aaj hum hai, kal hum nahi rahenge. tumhe kabhi na kabhi idependent hona hoga, aaj hi ban jao. Come on khadi ho jao (n made her to get up) bhul jao Dev ko, usse yaad karne se sirf pachtava aur dukh hi mehsoos hoga. tumhare aage itna bright future hai, uspr concentrate karo. hum sab tumhare saath hai. tum 1 kadam badhao, hum tumhe 10 kadam badhane me help karenge. apni woh choti si duniya se bahar a jao Priyanka.

Priyanka: chodo mujhe!!! nahi aana mujhe mere choti si duniya se bahar. Kyu aau? kiske liye aau? kya milega? confidence? maturity? independent hone ka ehsaas? nahi chahiye mujhe yeh sab. mujhe bas pya..tum nahi samjhoge. (n ran away)

Okay, so part 11 (B) ends here. I hope u guys liked it. Do hit the like button n comment. ignore spelling n grammatical mistakes. Thank you.
Edited by priyapatkar - 8 years ago
priyapatkar thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: choco0709

Update waiting since night...

😭😆


Updated dear..sorry i couldnt update it last night. sorry!!!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".