A Shivika OS: Trust Overcomes it all

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To all those people, who asked why people were angry with Shivaay, you have to watch today's and tomorrow's episode. They take tyranny to new level. Being a brother, who love his brothers with his life, we expect a bit more compassion towards a sister. And that too, the brother question is a disabled, orphaned 8 year old (though he doesn't know that ). This is that moment where I actually wished Shivaay died in any of that attacks. I hate him, at least until he goes to know of the truth and goes on a guilt trip saying,
"Yeh Maine Kya Kar Diya ?"

For the time being, I hate him and I am sure I am not the only one to feel the same. Dude, that was not character assassination, that was the very creation of the self centered male lead, Shivaay MacBeth Singh Oberoi. That's the nayi soch. Yay, NOT!

Anyway, Anika was compelled for the sake of his brother but I don't expect my Sherni to sit and watch whatever is happening like a damsel in distress. She is going to make him pay. Aur vaise bhi, Oberoi khaandaan main divorce nahi hotha.

Buhahahaha, Shivaay ke sar par nacho, uss se panga lo. Uski zindagi ki oh my maata Kar dho.
Par Shivaay, even though I hate you, you have my aashirvaadh with you,
'Eeswar tumhei sadhbudhhi dhe, puttar!'
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys, just read some regulations. So just tell me if I used inappropriate language or bashed anyone. I am kind of convinced that I used proper language. In fact, I didn't use any swear words nor have I wrote this with some personal grudge against anyone. It's just how I felt after I saw the show.
P.S. Sorry for the spoiler. I just realized that most haven't watched the serial because it's streaming right now. I kind of used Hotstar. That was unfair. But Gul Khan had given us a peek on what was going on so that is at whatsoever mode. Don't take it as bashing or anything. I guess thats exactly why the regulations were sent out. Fans will react on this sudden antagonization of our Shivaay. I know the story will have a happy ending, but when? Only Gul can tell
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A Shivika OS: Trust Overcomes it all

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Now that I am over my anger with Shivaay, my brain came up with a better/worse alternative track. So here goes.


SPACE FOR CONTENT

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Anika stared at him, disbelief evident in her eyes. Sahil was in one of those cars, but in which. She calculated the possibility of herself being able to overpower Shivaay Singh Oberoi's heartless army and realized that she reaching to her brother before they do something was far from possible.

"Shivaay, yeh hamaare beech ka maamla hain. Mere Bhai ko iss mein lane ki koyi zaroorat. Please usse chod dho." She begged, her eyes frantically looking for at least some sort of movement in the cars.

"Hmm, chod dheta hoon tere Bhai ko.. BOOM"

A car to her side blasted, rising high above the air. Anika took a step back. She couldn't register what just happened. Her brother. HER BROTHER. HER ONLY FAMILY.

"SAAAHIL!!!!" She screamed. No this couldn't happen. This is Injustice. He's all she had left. The reason for her very being. He couldn't just leave her! Couldn't leave her like Momma-Papa did. Couldn't leave her like Chutki. Couldn't leave her like Ma-Bau ji did. No he just couldn't.

"Ab kya kehkar mujhe dhamkaaoge?" Her eyes were glassy when she looked, void of any kind of emotion.

"Excuse me?" He smirked, victory evident in his eyes. "Car mein jaakar beto, waha sab wait kar rahe hai."

Anika took another long look at the charcoal black wreck beside, lying only a few feet away. That's when something clicked. Was Shivaay, the man she loved more than anything, maybe even more than her own brother, capable of killing a brother? No, he wasn't. Sahil is not in that car. He's safely tucked away somewhere else.

"Mera Bhai kaha hai?"

Shivaay shrugged and pointed at the blast off car.

"Nahi, aap mere Bhai ko nahi maar saktha."

"Kyun?" He asked, his forehead sweaty, his give away when he's about to be caught bluffing.

"Kyun ki aap kisi ko nahi maar saktha."

He had O Jaana playing in the background at that moment. She trusted him. No matter what, no matter what he did, she will always have that faith in him. He had already failed to keep her out of the Great Wall of Shivaay. She was already cherished there; now the Great Wall was not going to let even himself hurt her. He had realized that the minute his brain rejected Tia's accusations on her, when he himself started contemplating on what she had told, when he said, with no doubt whatsoever, that Anika couldn't anything like Daksh told, until he saw the whole event with his own eyes, and then too he had doubted on his eyes rather than her. Of course, he didn't believe anything Daksh told. It was his jealousy which took over and made him say such harsh words to her, hurl insults at her and got rewarded with a Danththod' slap.

He chuckled while she narrowed her thickly lined eyes at him.

"Agar koyi aur ladki hothi toh behosh ho chuki hoti. Paagal ho chuki hoti. But nahi, tum kaha typical ladki, tum toh Anika hoon." He had the ghost of a smile on his face. Give it to her for make a sinister situation just another one of their daily nhok-jhok.

"Yeh pravajan dena bandh karo." She was moody, and she was back. "Mera Bhai kaha hain?"

Shivaay gestured Khanna to get the boy. He himself was shocked to see the boy in the crutches, the boy he called apaahich'. His first encounter with Paanika's Paani pheking frenzy.

"Sahil, tumse kitne baar kaha hai ki strangers ke saath kahi pe bhi math jaana." She had started with her scolding.

Sahil looked dumbfounded at the both of them. "Yaha koyi Rohit Shetty ka movie ka shooting chal raha hai kya?"

"Nahi, but I will take you there." Shivaay kneeled down.

"Tadi maarna bandh karo." Anika retorted.

"Anika, we need to talk."

"Mujhe aapse khoyi baath nahi karna naa hi sunn na." She got up and picked up her brother. "Ghar chalthe hain Sahil." She walked away. But turned around to say that she will send the shaadi ka joda to the Oberoi mansion.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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intersting
where is rest of the parts please continues soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Now thats more like our sherni n shivaay as well...tadibaaz!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update.. Anika giving it back with power.. yay!!!
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Brilliant, simply Brilliant 👏 it's amazing how you turned a scene that was supposed to be so full of hatred, aggression, anger, disgust and intensity into something with so much of realisations

"Was Shivaay, the man she loved more than anything, maybe even more than her own brother, capable of killing a brother? No, he wasn't."


"Agar koyi aur ladki hothi toh behosh ho chuki hoti. Paagal ho chuki hoti. But nahi, tum kaha typical ladki, tum toh Anika hoon."


Those two paragraphs was the highlight of this OS ❤️

Thank uUu for the p.m 😳 waiting for more. Haha.


-Shan'e
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely 🤣 Loved It ! Wish Anika aisa hi show me bhi karti... SSO to badi baatein aur fush harkatein... Kuch nai kar pata.
Manhandling k waqt bhi do char aur ghumake deti to banda sidha ho jata. Mar nai padi thik se, isilie aisa paida hua
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Originally posted by: preity_d

Lovely 🤣 Loved It ! Wish Anika aisa hi show me bhi karti... SSO to badi baatein aur fush harkatein... Kuch nai kar pata.

Manhandling k waqt bhi do char aur ghumake deti to banda sidha ho jata. Mar nai padi thik se, isilie aisa paida hua

😆 😆

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