A Shivika OS: Trust Overcomes it all - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MorningStar01

Brilliant, simply Brilliant 👏 it's amazing how you turned a scene that was supposed to be so full of hatred, aggression, anger, disgust and intensity into something with so much of realisations

"Was Shivaay, the man she loved more than anything, maybe even more than her own brother, capable of killing a brother? No, he wasn't."


"Agar koyi aur ladki hothi toh behosh ho chuki hoti. Paagal ho chuki hoti. But nahi, tum kaha typical ladki, tum toh Anika hoon."


Those two paragraphs was the highlight of this OS ❤️

Thank uUu for the p.m 😳 waiting for more. Haha.


-Shan'e


Leave it to you to pick out the most random lines and point out the significance. You make me feel inspired, and confidence. Thank you sooo much!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow... this was so well written n such a nice approach..
loved it ❤️
thank for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: chaturchipkali

wow... this was so well written n such a nice approach..
loved it ❤️
thank for pm


Thanks. was just trying to build in some alternate to whatever they do on the TV
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Omg.
This was too good.
Anika trusting Shivaay even when she saw the blast nd heard him giving orders. On the other hand, Shivaay believed her to be of low character just bcoz of Tia nd Daksh words and needed that daanthtod slap to trust her.

Loved the update. Last mein Sahil ka woh Rohit She tty wala punch was hilarious.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yaar, yeh alternate series hain. I want to see the episodes before I can make alternatives. Aaj tak ka alternative written. Sat/Sun new one will be updated!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This one was really good!!!
Actually a bit funny and a hell lot of trust...
Continue sooon...

Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Darn. I can't wait to see Annika in full too Sherni mode. I simply can't wait for that moment..Relax Areeba, Shaadi drama mukne wala hai. 😃

Thank you so much for writing this OS and giving me dabbi hui hope. It was really nice.

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