A Friendship Lost| An Omkara-Samar Crossover Tale|ft TejKara and OmRu - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: butterfingers99


Mere paas Insta account nahi hai
Tum link bhej do!!

Mere paas bhi nhi hai 😭 😭

Tum twitter pe ho na wahin daal d0
Edited by FlauntPessimism - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
wow Shai. .
beautiful story
ur writing style is different and cute too 😉
samar and Om mil hi gye 😉
Preet ka sapna pura hue 🤣

do write more ❤️
sorry thoda hi zayda late hu ❤️
Edited by harshu... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: harshu...

wow Shai. .
beautiful story
ur writing style is different and cute too 😉
samar and Om mil hi gye 😉
Preet ka sapna pura hue 🤣

do write more ❤️
sorry thoda hi zayda late hu ❤️

Yes Harshu tumne kitni koshidh ki thi in dono ko door rakhne ke liye, but sachi dosti raasta dhoondh hi leti hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Interesting Shai 👏 Please continue 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu...

wow Shai. .
beautiful story
ur writing style is different and cute too 😉
samar and Om mil hi gye 😉
Preet ka sapna pura hue 🤣

do write more ❤️
sorry thoda hi zayda late hu ❤️

Thanks Harshu🤗

Preet ka sapna abhi pura kaha hua,milan abhi baaki hai😉

Rulets ko bulaao na
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Detox

Interesting Shai 👏 Please continue 😊

Thanks Dear!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Part TWO

Why am I thinking about all these again? It's over! Nothing's left to it...

Come on Om! Baar-baar iske baare mein sochke khud ko takleef kyun de raha hai?

No...Om...Nahi! Don't even dare to think about it! Tujhe strong hona parega, Shivaay ke liye. Tu phir se andhere mein nahi jaa sakta, You have promised him, and Rudra...




Rudra? Rudra...Angels ko maanne wala mera Rudra.Uss duffer ko toh yeh bhi nahi maloom ki woh khud mere life ka sabse pyaara angel hai. Us Pagal Oberoi ke kaarnaame hamesha mujhe hasa hi dete hai, uske saath toh mai thodi der ke liye apne problems ko bhi bhool jata hoon...



"...Why being sad, when Rudy got your back! Iss baat pe ek sher arz hai-

Mai hoon apne Bhaiyya ka Sunshine,

O baalon ke liye use kartein hai Sunsilk Silk and Shine..."


So Dumbell Oberoi is back from his college. So early? Did he bunk his classes again? I need to check out.




Omkara got up from his favourite chair and drifted towards his younger brother, who was busy chatting over phone, near the staircases.

"Wassup Rudy. Aaj ghar ki itni jaldi yaad aa gayi?"


"O, aap kab aaye? Chalo aa hi gaye ho toh ek naya sher banaya hai, sun lo ."


"Rudra..."


"Sunna parega-

Nahi kahega ki Rudy is a bad influence koi abhi...

Kyunki iss saal pass ho gaya Rudra, aur fail hua hai Chubby."



"Shut up Rudra! Wait a minute...tune abhi kya kaha...fail ho gaya Chubby'. Rudra, did Chubby fail in exams?"



"Yes O, bechaara bohot sad hai. Technically woh khud fail nahi hua. Exam dene hi nahi aaya toh by default ho ho gaya."



"But woh Exam mein appear kyu nahi hua?"



"Actually O, ussi din Lucent Talent Hunters' ne ek Music competition ka prelims organise kiya tha. Aur maine aapko pehle hi bataya tha ki Chubby kitna accha flutist hai..."



"Haan bataya tha, par iska in sab se kya connection hai?"



"Connection hai O. Chubby ka dream hai iss competition ko jeetna. Infact, he was practising hard for it for last few months. Usse exam aur competition ke beech ek ko chunna tha, so he chose..."

"Competition."

"Yes"


"What do you think about it, Rudra? Kya Chubby ne sahi decision chuna?"


"In my opinion, no. Competitions toh aur bhi aayengi, par parhaai bhi important hai... haan yeh baatein mere muh se strange lag raha hoga..."


"Nahi lag raha hai, continue."


"I agree that I am very laid-back. Classes se zyaada, canteen mein dikhta hoon. Par mujhe ek baat pata hai ki education is very important for one's self-development. Bhale hi main pure semester cool dude banke ghoomta hoon, par exams ke pehle kaafi serious ho jaata hoon."


"Saath mein Shivaay bhi serious ho jaata hai. Pata nahi end-moment pe tujhe exam ke liye prepare kaise karwaa deta hai."


"O..."


"Sorry.."


"Pata hai, uss din prelims ka sirf first part tha, agla part toh holidays ke waqt hua."


"Toh phir Chubby doosre part mein jaa sakta tha..."


"Maine usse yeh baat kaha, but he replied that there's probability of the second one getting cancelled, and he can't take risks."


"Rudra, I think tujhe usse priorities ke baare mein samjhaana chahiye tha. He is your friend. You should help him to choose right steps."


"Dost hai isliye hi to kuch nahi kaha"


"Matlab?"

"Matlab, jab woh iss completion mein part lene ki baat karta tha, toh uske aakhon mein alag hi shine hoti thi. He was really determined to participate in this. Mai uske determination ke beech kaise aa sakta tha. That time was not correct to contradict him. Sometimes we should just go with the flow. Mujhe tab sirf yeh laga ki mujhe apne Chubby ko sirf moral support dena chahiye. You have full rights on the lives of people whom you love, but if you start making them the way you feel is correct, you will lose them. That's why I did not try to say anything to him. Sirf uska saath diya aura aage bhi deta rahoonga."


Why did I never think in this way?



Rudra, tu itna samajhdar ho gaya hai. Proud of you."



"Mai toh hamesha se hi smart hoon, par aapne kabhi notice hi nahi kiya! Chalo issi baat ek aur sher arz kiya hai...sun lo-

Rudra is always right chahe spelling ho ya grammar

Har season me hai rocking ho winter rainy ya Summer"


"Shut up Rudra. Shayari jab tujhse hoti nahi toh try kyu karta hai?"


"Summer..."


"Duffer, abhi summer nahi winter season hai."


"Summer...Summer...Samar...Samar bhaiyya!"


Om felt something prickling inside him.


"O, Samar bhaiyya se yaad aaya, aaj mai Shivaay bhaiyaa ke saath majboori business news dekh raha tha. Tab waha Samar bhaiyya ka Interview dikhaaya. Woh ab kitne dashing ho gaye hai, O. Saath mein kitni bari-bari baatein kar rahe the. Mujhe toh thoda time bhi laga realise karne mein ki yeh hamaare Samar bhaiyya hi hai! Shivaay bhaiyaa ko mai bhi yeh point out kar raha tha par woh apne hi khyaalon mein kho gaye."



Rudra didn't know anything about that incident. He couldn't say anything to him. Never got a chance. But now, Rudra should know about it, everything should be made clear. Warna yeh Obros code of rules ke against hoga.



"Rudra..."


"Aur pata hai, woh saath mein kya keh rahe the, aage badhne ke liye bohot kuchh peechhe chodhna parta hai.' Pata nahi O, woh aisi baatein kyu kar rahe the, Samar bhaiyya toh aisi baatein nahi bolte hai."


"Huh? Usne aisa kaha?..."


"Lagta hai unke personal organiser ne unhe likhkar diya hai ki unhe interview mein kya bolna hai. Tch! Organiser ko khud hi nahi pata ki hamare Samar bhaiyya kaise hai. Unki jagah toh aapko waha hona chahiye tha. You know him In and Out."


"Rudra, mujhe..."


"I know aapko bhi yeh statement ajeeb lagi. But O, aap hi toh kehte ho na ki kabhi-kabhi insaan duniya ke saamne kehta kuch aur hai,par dil mein baat hoti kuch aur hai...Riya ka message, Meet me in 10 minutes' . Ok O, mujhe jaana parega, mere hot date hai. Shaam ko milte hai. Bye."



Rudra dashed away. But Om was still sitting on the stairs, occupied by new sets of thoughts.


Bohot kuch peeche chodhna parta hai'. Kya usne mujhe bhi peeche chodh diya? Meri yaad usse kabhi nahi aati? Am I the only only one who is affected by mere utterance of his name?

Rudra ki baat sahi hai. Mujhe Samar ko directly confront nahi karna chahiye tha, par usne bhi toh...

And How could I not confront him, after my accidental meeting with Sahir, that very day-


"Hey Sahir! What a pleasant surprise!"

"Om! Tum yaha kaise?"

"Next week iss gallery mein mere sculptures ka exhibition hai. So just dropped by to check the arrangements."

"Oh so now you are a busy man."

"Busy? Aur mai? Mai toh sirf mitti se khelta rehta hoon. Busy toh tum ho gaye. Kitne din ho gaye, na hi call kiya na kabhi milne aaye.Waise tum kal aa rahe ho na?"

"Kaha?"

"Party mein! Samar ne hi toh organise kiya hai!"

"Oh acchaa...haan sorry I can't come, uss din mujhe kahi aur jaana hai."

"Wait a minute. Sahir tumhe iss party ke baare mein nahi pata tha right? Samar ne tumhe invite nahi kiya!"

"No Om, aisi baat nahi hai. Molu ne invite kiya tha, but I have some important works."

"Tum mujhse jhoot nahi bol sakte Sahir. What's the matter between you too?"

"Om..."

"Don't try to cover it up. Tell me the truth"

"Mai aur Molu picchle 3 mahine se ek duusre se baat nahi kar rahe hai. Woh...woh mujhse baat nahi karna chaahta."


How could Samar not talk to his dear brother for three months in a row? Mai toh Shivaay ko ek din ka silent treatment bhi nahi de sakta! Usse agar baat na karu, toh mai khud ko incomplete feel karta hoon. Bhai ko paraya banana dil tod deta hai. Phir usne apne bhai ko paraya kaise bana liya!

Mai usse galat raaste mein kaise jaane de sakta tha.Mujhe laga that I should talk to him right away, and so I did...

Par Rudra ki baat sahi hai, shayad tab mujhe usse time dena chahiye tha, warna woh sab nahi hua hota...


Oh the flashes! Not again...

Edited by butterfingers99 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Finally the update
Thanks for using my Shayari

Will give detailed response later but this is it Om ne sapne me bhi nhi socha hoga ki Rudra usko advice de sakta hai
Edited by FlauntPessimism - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome part Shai 👏
Baby is the most sensible one in between the brothers, he always give right advice at the right time ( chahe kabhi-kabhi galti se hi kyu na ho 😆 😆 )
I am glad that Om got new perspective to think due to baby, I hope he understands that some matters needs to cool down before confronting...
Baby's shayris are amazing, he is truly a sunshine...
Will be waiting for next part 😃 update when you have time 😉
Thanks for the pm... 🤗🤗
Edited by VK_Sibling_Love - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res

Unres!

Lovely Bitiya! Aap Bahut achha likthi ho! Very nice


Rudy is the bestest smartest Oberoi! ❤️

P.S: mujhe jyaada likhna Nahi aatha sorry! I'm not good at words
Edited by chai92 - 8 years ago

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