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Posted: 8 years ago

My own chocolate center has filled up with poison, the roses he gave me all twisted black. - Terra Elan McVoy, After the Kiss

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nissi or jesi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wooohhh Rudy's vulnerability and him clinging to Robin ( I hate saying Robin's real name d it gives me creeps) ...

Oh my my they both hugged when all were looking wohooo ...oh dis shiv is better glancing at his bro at least ...

Ohhooo robin ne bola tho shivkara unhappy ...dis is d main thing dat am invested in dis story ...I don't mind a guy for Rudy and Rubin look cute bass but Robin indirectly challenging shivkara would be awesome to read ...

carry on cappy or I might irritate it doesn't usually work but why take chances right

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OnVanvaasMode

@OnVanvaasMode

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Posted: 8 years ago

Res!!

Unres

I am 17🤣

Mummy!!!!

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twerping

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Posted: 8 years ago

Brilliant start! Have to thank Ani for setting you on this path!

This is sure to be an epic journey, rivalling that of Puzzle Pieces. Loved the vulnerability you brought out in Rudra. Robin is more of a closed book in the prologue. Want to know more about what is inside that man. Today's episode in the show kind of took the easy way out, in my opinion, by making Robin into Tia's D. I'd much rather ignore this development and relive Robin through your story.

Please update soon! ❤️

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chai92

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Posted: 8 years ago

Unres!

Awesome Noor ❤️

Amazing start!

Will be waiting for the next part eagerly 😳

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PatialaKiMini

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Posted: 8 years ago

Noor what an amazing start. I am totally speechless. This gave me goosebumps(Prologue aisa hai Idk how amazing/superb/perfect the whole story will be )

And one thing I definitely want to say -Noor u are the best , Seriously .

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SRKian

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Posted: 8 years ago

AMI 🤗 i luv u 4 dis ❤️ 'll read it 2mro nw gt guests in house 😆

res 4 nw 😉

p.s-i luv da title Chocolate nd rubin yum.. ☺️ unres, ok! 1st th 1st,i was literally jumping when saw ur PM bt had guests so couldnt read it dat time 😔 anyways,nw NO tnq 4 dis as we had agreed 😉 nd i was sure ki u'll post it soon enough unlike a Certain SOMEONE who was so sure u wont 🤣 (poor th must b so devastated 🥺 🤣 wonder if i should buy her a new cap? 🤣 ) it feels good 2 've a story dedicated 2 myself 😎 since its 4 me,m gonna write a VERY LONG comnt...brace urself 4 da same 😉 by nw u must 've noticed(hope u dd) ki m beating around da bush by writing edar udar ki baate,vagera,vagera 🤣 just 2 make da comnt appear LONG as i mentioned above 🤣 so nw dat it looks fairly long,let's move on 2 da story (yes finally 🤣) RuBin who knew dey 'll gt me like dis ❤️Da prologue is absolutely brilliant ah da angst! ❤️ Gta say u gt me hooked wid dis 1 mayb more dan da show ka rubin(show mein toh we gt fun rubin 😆)if dis is da prologue,wonder hw 'll b da whole story!! Damn excited hw u go wid rubin nd da other chars who r/'ll make an entry 😎 m so up 4 dis 😎 Update jaldi jaldi else universe gonna punish u bad 😈 nd m defo gonna make u update da other story 1 of dis days 🤣 wt r u looking 4 nw?? M done wid da comnt 🤔

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