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Posted: 9 years ago

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SRKian

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: .bintAli.

Well, I hope you don't mind if I don't ramble, as well, just to make my reply look longer 🤣 Mujhe thodi jaldi hai 😛 And don't tease ma Jessi too much 😲 🤣

Angst is my forte, you know that! And as much as I enjoy their light moments in the show, it's tiring to see everything around Rudra being a joke or made one, lol. Ugh, I had planned to update two days ago, tumhe bataya bhi tha, but hit a rock, unexpectedly 🤔 So frustrating, you are basically done but this one detail... just doesn't wanna be wrapped up in a satisfying way.

Wish me luck that it'll be done now 😆

aajkal m waiting everywhr😆😆 nw waiting 4 ur story😳

best of luck👍🏼 jaldi jaldi update rob toh geya😭😭

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Discontinued, thus far. For further information, if interested, you may PM me.

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OnVanvaasMode

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Res

Unres-

First thing, Kya mujhe yeh parhna chahiye tha? 'coz I am just 17🤣

As I have said you earlier, I love your fictions. So How could I not love this one!!!

HurtRu,AngstRu, TormentedRu, ConfusedRu, MatureRu, BrokenRu, ScaredRu- Kitna kuch mila.Aur Kya chahiye iss naacheez ko 😉

Like Everyone's mentioning, OmRu's one was my favourite part too❤️

The way O way trying to convince himself that now his heart is alright, almost broke down in front of him, When he realized that Ru was everything but...he still tried to gather himself up and was trying to pacify one heart outside and one heart inside !!!!!

Rudra to hai hi SNAG (I love this term you gave to him😳), Uske wajah se bhaiyya ki shaadi toot gayi,tension se almost pagal ho chuke honge...Now how will he face his Superman?

O...It was his job to make O stress-free by doing every type of crazy antics.Par aaj woh uske wajah se exhausted hai.

No Rudra, you have to rise again, you have to pick-up the broken shards and restore yourself again, You have to become the cool dude -for your brothers

RuBin...Rudra ko jaha solace milega,bechaara toh ussi taraf jaayega!!

But mujhe Robin kaafi confusing laga. Pata nahi kyu?

Kabhi Rudra ke kaafi kareeb aa jaata hai, kabhi sabse door mein khara rehta hai...

Kabhi lagta hai woh Rudra ko samajhta hai, he is emphathising with him, kabhi lagta hai-now it's mere sympathy...

Bhai , tujhe confused rehna hai to raho-beech mein Rudy ko kyu latka ke rakha hai!! 😆

And ACP was part of this rescue mission!!😳 Woh bhi Action Khliladi banke!!!

Now I am just imagining RanKara comming in full tashan and rescuing our adorable (but hurt at that time) Ru..

One question, how come O agreed to join hands with ACP?

And ending mein woh akela ACP ke saath tha! (ab koi O ko bachaao 😕)

Ending se yaad aaya, Bhaiyya ki entry!! Ab Ru ka kya hoga😕

At last I would say, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it ❤️

Update the next part soon...

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chai92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Noor 😳 I must say it was just worth the wait! Sorry was caught up with something so just read it now!

Amazing again! I wish that Kidnapping drama had at least some parts of ur story and not just comedy, as it was shown!

Bhaiyya.. Aah waiting for the next part!

Very well written Maine poora image kiya

Noor ❤️

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SRKian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

rob geya aur ur update aya😆

reswa😎

unres,

awesome update! i read it twice...rudyz pain was heartbreaking. if 1y show mein dey ddnt mess up dat romi track like dey dd,it would've bn a treat 2 watch lee playing out dos emotion,if 1y anyways, rudyz superman dd wt he should've done in dat situation. dat OmRu scene felt so real...(b honest,kuch esa vesa kheyal toh nahi aya tha while writing dat😉🤣)

nd my eid ka chand makes an appearance think abt RanKara na😉😭

tnx 4 da pm😃

edit-4gt 2 mention da main th RuBin😆

dat rubin convo was awesome. m really curious hw u r gonna go wid dis further😉

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twerping

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Posted: 9 years ago

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What an opening chapter!!! And Noor, I love you. You know why, right? In case there is any room for doubt, I shall tell you why. You brought my ACP in it!!! He helped save Ru!!! He helped O save Ru! And he didn't leave!! He stayed in the hospital with O!

I am officially over the moon!

Ok ok... now to the core of this amazingly written chapter.

The way you bring out so much without going into actual details...

For the first time,I felt the horror of the experience of being kidnapped by Romi. In the show, it was more like comedy... but here, I felt how traumatic it must have been for the guy. And to think that someone who had gone through so much would then go and attend his brother's wedding and dance there becomes that much more ridiculous. Of course, the wedding had to be called off.

Robin's denial of their relationship is now another area I really want to delve into... of course, it is a source of pain for Rudra. But Rudra himself must be tired of trying to live a lie, pretend to be someone he isn't. And maybe, just maybe, Robin is the one who gives him courage to shatter the lie. But for that Robin has to accept him, and therein lies the rub.

Please update soon, Noor.

And thank you for writing slash. 🤗

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nissi or jesi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

uhh err chomu ko Lana zaroori tha kya ...abb kya wahi rehgaya baby ko rescue karne O and robin the na bada aaya acp banke hrmphhh

well as of now am accustomed to ur writing style so could come to a conclusion about d ongoings

Omru confrontation ( muje wahi laga) was beautiful could very well imagine it

D bhaiyya in d dis fic is our shivaay mera shivaay ...abb tho Robin rehega nay LOL

Robin has guts yo coming to see baby and their past looks really intriguing expecting some snippets

Itna accha character ko itna horrible death diya screw you'll cvs rot in hell

PS : I can know y u were stuck itna perfectionist jho ho duh ...shivram agle saal tho aayegi na

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harshu...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

dekho kaun aaya 🤣
ROBIN ki not so good vidai ke baad cappy ki awesome story aayi 🤣 RIP show wala Robin 🤣
Well show main jo bhi ho hume koi lena dena hi nhi 🤣
We have our cappy to write wonderful stories for us na 🤣

Wht a beautiful starting cappy. . ACP helped O to save my baby.. he stayed at hospital too. .is this the beginning of Rankara story 🤣
The way you have written baby's kidnapping scene was heart wrenching. .I felt baby's pajn 😔
Gul toh yeh kar na saki.. 🤣

And Omru scene ❤️ you have described their bond beautifully ❤️ being a baised omru fan .. Tht was the bestest part of this update for me .. ❤️

Ahaan !! Bhiaya isn't paraya dhan here 🤣

Rubin's past seems to be interesting. Robin left baby 😔 but he came back for him. .

Will be waiting for next part,Rubin's flashback and Lots of Obbros and Omru moments ❤️
Update soon cappy. .
Love you .. tune toh Praya kar diya 😔

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