Dark Shivika OS:Relentless Predators(Chp 2 pg 5 u) Read at ur own risk

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

first of all...

thank u very much for continuing it...❤️

i just hate this shivaay...but it was an awsm update...

and plzz don't feel that we will hate u for this..it is different and unique...in it's own way...

atleast for me...I just love reading this totally different shivaay...THE DEVIL ONE...

u r just an awsm writer...

and the way annika saved herself...was just superb...

she is indeed a sherni...

plzz...continue this...

i will be glad if you will continue this...

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AsyaManeetAnshi

@AsyaManeetAnshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Wow!!! amazing update. Totally killed it.

I love the bold Anika dealing with a shady SSO. Beauty!! Update the next part soon.

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

i was LMAO sso was so eager have his pleasure from annika.i was saying go slow sso,something really shocking is waiting for ur pleasure🤣.and dear u didnt disappointed me.thanks for tht😆.

update soon.

thanks👏

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piaa88

@piaa88

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Amazing update

Thanks for the pm

And plz continue wd it

I would love to read dark

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Nidhi Pillai

@AnShi_LoVe

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Awesome...👏

Honestly i din expect this...Shivaay is jus pure evil...the way Anika saved herself it's soo soo awesome...indeed, she is the Angel of death for Shivaay.

Kudos to ur writing...⭐️

Loved it !!!!!❤️ ❤️

Thnx for the PM dearie...Pls pls Continue :)

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Dude. This was amazing. I got gone girl vibes.

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Hey this was intense!
I liked it! It was awesome for a change.
I am very big ShivIka shipper...but i am seeing from writer's view...nd i must say its amazingly written.
Anika is superbly portrayed..the strong ndependant and the lady who gives it back to him every damn time!
I actually loved this baddy one. But cant bare Shivaay being bad. Phir bhi i enjoyed reading this.
Do write more...
Not to forget... i just loved this title.."Relentless Predator." Holds evil in it!!

Love Sharmi.

Edited by lucky_princess - 9 years ago

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Wandering about

@Nomadic_Vibe

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: rani-lucki
didn't expect that!!!
love it

thank you for the pm dear

:-)

chalo glad u liked it😊dont mention the pm😉

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Wandering about

@Nomadic_Vibe

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: itzanya32
first of all...
thank u very much for continuing it...❤️
i just hate this shivaay...but it was an awsm update...
and plzz don't feel that we will hate u for this..it is different and unique...in it's own way...
atleast for me...I just love reading this totally different shivaay...THE DEVIL ONE...
u r just an awsm writer...
and the way annika saved herself...was just superb...
she is indeed a sherni...
plzz...continue this...
i will be glad if you will continue this...

thank u so much dear for ur kind words and support and I m really happy u liked it inspite of it being a dark hate story than love story😊

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Wandering about

@Nomadic_Vibe

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: AsyaManeetAnshi
Wow!!! amazing update. Totally killed it.
I love the bold Anika dealing with a shady SSO. Beauty!! Update the next part soon.

thank u so much dear for ur feedback its much appreciated😊i m glad u liked it even if its not romantic😃