Her broken trust... ShivIka TS. Last part updated on pg:9 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: lucky_princess



Tujhe ye such mein filmy laga?!😆
I wrote it out of my frustration😡... well while writing first part..i felt it..nd i wanted to really happen.
Shayad 2nd part thodi filmy hogayi...😆
Thanks Areeba..😳


Heheh! I knew what the dialogues would be when I was reading. I kinda read your mind. 😆

I think it will happen like this but with a twist where Daksh will put turn the tables on Shivaay. (And that's what I want to see in the show) 😛
Let's see Kya milta hai ab? 😲
Edited by -Areeba- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
This update is especially for Annika...aka... Annika_Ishqbaaz...kyunki usne forum ko chodne ki dhamkhi di hai... aur mein nahi chahthi ki vo jaaye... agar vo chali gayi toh kaun hume awesome Os's dega??
So here it goes...

Part 3

They were lost in each other's gaze. Anika felt happy as Shivaay trusted her even more. Shivaay felt lighter as his Paanika had forgiven him.
Their trance was broken when Rudra and Om coughed. Both were embarassed. OmRuSomDi chuckled.

"So... finally Anika di is free. Toh matlab ek shaadi cancel aur ek hoga..." said Rudra..
"Kaash vo bhi na hota..." he mumbled a bit louder.
ShivIka's eyes met. Anika too realized that...ShiTia's wedding is happeneing.
"Nahi... your Anika di is not free." Shivaay said confusing everyone.
"... nd yupp the other shaadi is also cancelled." He continued.
"O My Maata... matlab kal shaadi nahi hai... kal ShiTia's weddings nahi hai..." Pinky exclaimed in happiness.
Without giving Shivaay a chance to speak.. Pinky grabbed Anika's hands.
"Chalo Anika... baaki ki kaam ko khatam kar lete hai..."
Pinky stopped as Anika stopped. Shivaay had held her wrist.
"Shivaay.. kya ab pura din uska haath pakad kar bhaitega kya?" Asked Pinky.
"Nahi...puri zindagi iski haath pakadna chahtha hun." He answer shocked everyone. Anika's eyes went wide.

Shivaay grinned at everyone's expressions.

"Aap Anika ki haath chodiye, ye apni hi shaadi main kaam karegi kya?"
Now all were like is he gone nuts??

Anika went near Shivaay and touched his face nd pulled back suddenly.
"Whatt??!!" He asked.
"Are u out of your mind. Its your marriage and not mine which is happening. And what was that? Y do u want to hold my hand... its someone else's right to hold your hand...not mine."

He moved closer and took her hands in his.
"Now it is in its right place. It always belonged here. I Just got confused for sometime... but i guess..now its perfect!" He said looking into her eyes.

Anika was taken aback... she didnt expect this all of a sudden.
Before she could ask anything he knelt down in front of her.
"Kaha tha na... koi aur tumhe chue..toh mujhe farak padtha hai. Aise main... how can i let anyone else hold this hand of yours?"
Anika felt so good. She smiled lightly.
OmRu were shocked to see Shivaay kneeling down that too in front of Anika...
"Aap toh kehte hai ki..Shivaay Singh Oberoi kisi ke saamne nahi jhuktha.. toh aaj ye kaise hua?" She asked.
He chuckled..
"Kyunki Shivaay Singh Oberoi aaj pehli baar haar gaya..toh aaj jhukana pada...usne apne dil kisi ko de diya. SSO ko pyaar hogaya. Samjhne mein der kardi...par i guess its ok...

"Par kisse??" She asked...

"Anika se.. srry.. Meri Paanika se...jaise tumne kaha."
He smiled widely as her eyes shined with happiness. Tears ran down her rosy cheeks.
"Aur... yupp its my marriage... but its happening wid u... what say?" He asked.

She was still shocked... she just couldnt take all of this together. Meaning... a totally changed Shivaay... a new one... to whom she was introduced a few seconds back."

All were standing shocked and confused.

"Bolo Anika...will u marry me. And i promise u... i will always be with u...forever by your side. Wanna make you mine now and forever. And i swear i cant afford to see u with anyone else. Daksh ke saath tumhe dekh kar mera khoon itna jal raha tha..ki mein kisi bhi waqt uske jaan le saktha tha. Mein tumhe khona nahi chatha... Shaadi karogi...aur iss Shivaay Singh Oberoi ko ek better version banogi?"
Anika let out a laugh amidst her happy tears. She made him stand up.
"Pinky promise?" She asked showing her little pinky finger.
Shivaay chuckled.
"Pinky promise." Nd he held her pinky wih his.
Shivaay felt some weight on him. She hugged him close and tight.
"Billu ki shaadi hogi...
Billu ki sehra sajega...
Billu ghodi chadega...
Billu dulha banega...
Par iss baar Paanika ke saath."
She said and smiled. He brushed her hairs nd held her close. Anika could have been the happiet person in the whole
They pulled back nd looked at each other with wide smiles etched on their faces. They stood there leaning their foreheads on each other.

The rest of the family stood closing their open mouths with their hands nd looked at each other..
"YE HO KYA RAHA HAI??!!" They all said in unison.

Done guyz... hope this was good..and was upto your expectations.
Waiting eagerly for your feedbacks dearies..

Love Sharmi.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Brilliant update.

Pinky too excited for ShivIka wedding 😆

Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
what a update dear...really loved it...
awesome one...
and the way shivaay proposed his paanika...that was sooo awesome...
lovely...yaar...
the Oberoi family..and rudy❤️
loved it to core...
but it finished😭...
koi ni...jaldi phir se wapas aana...
waiting...
and yaah thnx fr the pm...
love u❤️
Edited by angel_writer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
res Sharmi🤗
I'll be back soon to unres

Edited by Alvapriya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
This was so wonderful! Such innocence and love! This is what we wanted from ShivIka! Loved it, Sharmi!
Thank you so much for the pm.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Oh my goodness dear what a filmy ending!!! Loved it very much❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Hey Sharmi! beautiful ending😳
I love it to the core❤️
Specially the proposal where shivay kneeling down in front of d Anika

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Thanks for d PM🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Amazing update. Loved the ending a lot. 😳
Edited by Roudy1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Haye Sharmi. Aj Mjhe pata lag gaya hai Ye tum ho jo bari filmy Ho. 😆
It was soo cute, Ye wala Shivaay mjhe pasand hai. ❤️

Amazing shots!😉

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