Her broken trust... ShivIka TS. Last part updated on pg:9 - Page 8

Originally posted by: ...Tahsu09...

Hey Sharmi! beautiful ending😳
I love it to the core❤️
Specially the proposal where shivay kneeling down in front of d Anika

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Thanks for d PM🤗

Originally posted by: Roselind

Just loved the update...Khidki-tod Update...👏

Shivaay cancelled his & Tia's wedding...Rudra must be in cloud 9...😆😉🥳

Shivaay wants to hold Anika's hands throughout his life...😳

Shivaay now felt peace that he can hold his Paanika's hands in his own bcoz he said it right, her hands belong to him only...😃

Shivaay kneeling before Anika was an awesome one...wish this scene is shown in the serial itself...Hope you won't mind if your story's dialogues & scenes get copied...❤️

He announced that he is in love with Anika...😳

You have nailed the proposal scene, Sharmi...Just AWESOME...❤️👏

The last line was LOL...epic one...😆😆

Thnkxxx for the pm...😊😃

Keep writing more...😊

Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow
so nice
loved shivaay's proposal

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Unres dear😳

Hey Sharmi, since I couldn't revert in detail to reply of second update I am commenting for last two chapters now.

First of all, I loved, loved, loved this story of yours. I quite enjoy such tales😳🤗

I really liked Shivaay's realization in the second chapter and the way he broke down in front of OmRu about the same...And then BOOM😆 Daksh's reality got revealed in front of anika👏😳 ...and then she confronted Daksh. He is disgusting🤢 I hate him.

"Tumne meri Anika ko kaise chua?" Hahaha, bada jaldi realize hua inko😆 But I loved how he came to her rescue...

Anika's thappads to Daksh were mindblowing😆 Go girl👏

I too loved that line... i want Shivaay to say it once... and Anika to stare at him while saying that...😆

Aur mein ye bhi chathi hun ki Anika ki chandnu se Daksh ki pitayi hojaaye😡😆.

Then comes the water splash scene😆 hilarious 🤣

Their 'fark padta hai' dialogues were amazing. I really loved the way you shaped this story. Description, dialogues...everything was awesome.

Coming to the last update, ShiTia wedding🤣

"Shivaay.. kya ab pura din uska haath pakad kar bhaitega kya?" Asked Pinky.
"Nahi...puri zindagi iski haath pakadna chahtha hun.

Wa wa...kya line hai sharmi

Awesome, confession by Mr. SSO🤗 Loved reading them🤗

Amazing Three shots Dear.

Keep writing.

Loads of love

-Harshada

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Love the proposal..cute...aww...now how will they manofy the family..waiting

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Roshni...yaar tere comments just make me go overwhelming...😳

Thanks a tonn dear...😳🤗

Will write more... fikr mat karo... 😆

Originally posted by: priyanvs

Wow dear awesome ts read all the parts in one go loved it