Rumya TS : because I cant let you go : part 3 B) pg 9 : COMPLETED

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Posted: 8 years ago

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love is a verb.. not a noun. it is active. it not just a feeling of passion and romance. it is behavior. but you know what... sometimes we hurt the ones we love the most... life is complicated, so is love.

First of all I love this dialogue of yours. 👏

You beautifully penned Rudra's emotions.

He loves he deeply.

Loved Obbros here.

Lovely story, 😳

Please write more.😃

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naina

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz
yay... Rumya ke MUs khatam hogayi..
aww.. Rudra is really sorry for his ass like behaviour towards Saumya..
yay.. they r getting married..
Rudra's proposal was so awesome..
if possible,please write an epilogue to it..
loved how Om bhai and Shivaay made Rudra understand the aspects of love n marriage..
the dynamics of relationships were perfectly portrayed..
thanks for the pm.

yeyyy 😃 😃 glad u like it 😊 well Im thinking of writing another OS that would be kinda of sequel to the TS.😉 thanks a lot...!!! 😊

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: naina927

yeyyy😃😃glad u like it😊well Im thinking of writing another OS that would be kinda of sequel to the TS.😉thanks a lot...!!!😊

please..do write that.

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naina

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

please..do write that.

I will for sure... 😊

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Wow!loved it!

Very well written..I loved the jealous ,angry ..insecure rudra to the rudra who I saw in the end!

Thanks a lot for writing this dear!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Such nice and sweet ending!!!

Nice !! Thanks for the PM!

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LiveLoveLaugh96

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Yayyy ur story ended

and i read everything in one go 😆

It was amazing!!

I loved it. The mature Rudra was too cute

And i loved how u incorporated Obros moments too

Absolutely loved it ❤️

please write more! 😃

And thanks a lot for the PM 😊

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Sanavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Naina,
This was awesome. Thanks for the well deserved slap nd also I liked ththe Saumya held her stand and made Rudra understand hw wrong he was.
Om was grt as usual nd Shivaay has started to understand love after marriage, I guess.
All in all a grt ending.

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Awe lovely ending
Even though rudra made another mistake
His brow were there to set him on right path
Just hope this happens in the to serial too once om n rudra find out what shivaay has done
N then om n shivaay knock some sense into rudra too
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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LiveLoveLaugh96

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Posted: 8 years ago

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pg 11 😆

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