Shivika SS | part 5 updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Shivika SS

Thoughts after today's precap
(This is my first time writing something on shivika so bare with me)

Anika: Keep this flower basket near there, noo not there. Ugh why can't they work properly.
<she was busy in the last minute touch ups for Mr. Shivay Singh Oberoi's sangeet ceremony which she
Didn't have any enthusiasm about.>
Suddenly she was pulled back from her trance by none other than Tia Kapore
Tia: Here take this <showing her a bundle of cash> Shivay baby told me to give u this cash
As a TIP so that u leave him alone forever. ( she throws the cash in her hands and smirks)
Stay in ur limits don't try things u can't afford.

Anika stood there stun not knowing what to think or say startled with such ridiculousness
She couldn't think of anything else, hence walked towards the man himself responsible for her heartache.


Reaching on his door her heart thuded with uneasiness of something bad going to happen, while her mind
Was asking questions as too what exactly this man wants from her, does he think she is actually obsessed with him? ,that she could be faking her attacks? ,all this things going on with her is done deliberately by her so that he could notice her?

She knocked on the door.
A voice came
"Come in Anika "
How did he know it's me. He says he feels my presence, he senses me, so couldn't he see I'm not lying nor am I desperate for him, for his money, for this khoon khandan stuffs.
How can someone once be so caring and the next moment so cruel.



That's it for today, so should I continue. Plz pm me ur messages or comment down below
And give me ur views...
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UmeraT thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You should continue dear! It was too short
Isse teaser hi kehlo!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes u shud continue this 😊
Hope this has a happy ending 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
Os continued

Anika finally went inside the room to see the man who causes different emotions in her.
The man she doesn't what type of a relationship she has with him. A man who is her dream yet a nightmare.
Can she trust him? Or should she just become a robot with no emotions towards him so he couldn't hurt her anymore.
Shivay: Anika you need something?
Anika: did u ask tia to give me this money?
Shivay: yes I did
Anika: why?
Shivay: do u seriously wanna know the reason again from my mouth!?!
Anika: Yes (after great difficulty she replied)
Shivay: okay then here it is this money Is for you so that u leave me alone , from ur plans of becoming rich by trapping me. So that u stop ruining my and Tia's wedding. I'm not interested in you. Oh wait is this the reason you said no to Daksh's proposal.
(Anika was on the verge of crying her heart was breaking after hearing every word he uttered)
Oh and one more thing stop accusing Tia for things she never did or even dream of doing coz it's all u who is doing this drama to grab attention, My attention tonne specific, isn't it?
(Om who was at door couldn't believe that his brother could be this dense and couldn't see the girl who was always there to protect their family and him every damn time could do something rubbish like this)
Anika was shocked beyond belief to hear what Shivay had said. All her trust that she once had that he could understand her better than anyone can ever can was now gone. She didn't know who to blame herself or him? Herself for getting so attached and involved in his life, his family or him for letting her believe he was there for her.
Om came in just before shivay could say something more.
Om: Shivay, you have done too much for today lets go. (Before shivay could say anything om pulled him outside his room after glancing at Anika's broken state about which he could do nothing but pull the person who was reason for it away from her.



So how do u think this is?
Tell me ur views in the comments.


Edited by Sheswithme - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its so heart breaking...
how can he say that to her????
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
Its heart-breaking but I love angst. ..plase continue. ... and yes make shivaay cry
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3 A
Hello peeps thanks for ur comments and here is part3
Ik its small but I'll post part3 B soon




Anika stood there helpless and broken.
She threw the wade of money away.
Before she could do anything dadi called her.
Wiping her tears and pasting a fake smile she went to her. Taking the clothes she has to wear from her she robotically went to the room to change.


(From now onwards I'll be the Anika that no one knew before, I don't care if now Mr. shivay Singh oberoi has to say anything to me or my class. I won't interfere in any family thing. I'm an employee so I'll behave like one. The Anika they once knew is buried now where no one can find her.)
She changed the clothes to the oberoi theme. Reaching the destination she started checking the preparations.



Daksh: Anika you look just... beautiful, imean I have no words of gorgeous u look in this attire.
Anika: thank you (while giving him a fake smile and saying it without any emotions)


She saw that the sangeet ceremony started with a bang dance. Dadi and senior oberoi were dancing. Soon the obros started dancing.
She slowly moved away to call Sahil and check on him. Coming into the corridor she noticed tia talking to a person who definitely is her boyfriend. But as promised to herself she didn't bother finding who it is or telling anyone.
She called Sahil and completed her work. Going back inside she found shivay looking at her. She just moved her gaze away soon the couple dance begun.



Comment ur views below
Edited by Sheswithme - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
this os pure awesome...
how can shivaay hurt anika like that??
my queen is so broken...
she should leave him... she should throw that notes ke bundle on his face...
continue sooonish...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i m liking Anika's attitude..
she should just forget abt him and his family matters...
bagad billa looking at anika..
again tia ki bacchi talking with someone.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
updates ko thora lamba karna.

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