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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3B
Hope You guys like it.!.!.!.!



All the couples started dancing on the slow music. Anika stood on the side and watched everyone.
Seeing everyone she remembered the moments spent with them and how they will end soon enough.
Coz Mr Shivay Singh Oberoi is getting married this week. It made her feel empty and broken.
But she was a wiled women who would stand up every time she would fall.
No one can break her will. She won't let anyone break her again.
Mistakes made, lessons learnt.


She broke out of trance when she felt someone's hand on her shoulder.
Daksh: Anika, where are you lost.
Anika: nothing. You wanted something?
Daksh: Yes can I have this dance?
He asked while extending his hand. She hesitated a bit.
How can I trust anyone to not hurt me. Forgetting her thoughts momentarily she smiled a bit and placed her hand in his.
Anika: Lead the way.


They both started dancing on the peaceful music slowly. She was in her on world, enjoying the peace for a while. Whereas someone else was getting agitated at their closeness by passing of every single minute.
Seeing her and only her who was not in his arms. But whom could he blame, it was his fault every time, every damn time.
Suddenly the music got a bit fast and they started changing partners and soon she was in his arms and God did it feel right. He felt as if she belonged there, right in his arms. But her eyes said something different she was like a stone. Her eyes that always had something to say, today were emotionless, empty. And that hurt him bad. She danced like a mermaid in water, to anyone it would look like a normal dance. But he knew it wasn't coz it was painful to watch someone who was always cheerful suddenly an emotional vacuum.
And soon it ended the dance it finally ended. She left without a word and yet she conveyed so many things.
She left him standing there alone, just like he did when she needed him the most.
She soon mixed with the crowd and got lost in it. And that made him realize that soon it gonna be his wedding and then she would go away just like he said she should and never be seen again roaming in corridors of his house or calling him names. She would be here yet she would be away from him, lost in the crowd and will just stay in his thoughts like a lovely fairytale.


How is this one pray tell.?.!?.
Edited by Sheswithme - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

this os pure awesome...
how can shivaay hurt anika like that??
my queen is so broken...
she should leave him... she should throw that notes ke bundle on his face...
continue sooonish...






Tysm for your comments
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
read all the parts in one go...
it was awsm...
wat happened to shivaay???why did he said those things to her??
i just love the way you potraited annika's character...being heartless and promising herself not to interfere in any of the matters of the oberois...
shivaay can feel that annika has changed...❤️
eagerly waiting for the next part
do update it sooonnn...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: itzanya32


read all the parts in one go...
it was awsm...
wat happened to shivaay???why did he said those things to her??
i just love the way you potraited annika's character...being heartless and promising herself not to interfere in any of the matters of the oberois...
shivaay can feel that annika has changed...❤️
eagerly waiting for the next part
do update it sooonnn...



Don't worry everything will be reveled soon
I will upload in an hour or so
Thanks for reading and commenting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
i m loving how u r showing Anika to be heartless..
Shivaay is sad seeing Anika like that..
please update sooonish...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
read all parts in one go and it was absolutely awesome...While reading, i was like what heck is wrong with this guy. even though he is getting married, he should at least spare the poor soul... I'm really starting not to like this shivay BUT...hey thats what make the story interesting...sooo...continue ASAP
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Part 4

(So here it is hope u like it)

Anika changed her clothes back to normal. She started taking off the decorations of sangeet. Winding up everything she placed all back in boxes.
Dadi: Anika it's quite late. Wait I'll ask someone to drop you home.
Before she could protest dadi called the Obros who were passing by.
Dadi: One of you go and drop her home its already very late.
Before Shivay could say anything, Annika replied
Anika: No dadi. There's no need for that I can go alone don't worry. Nothing or no one can do something to me.
She turned on her heels and walked out of the door but not without giving a tight lipped smile to dadi.
She was something different now. Someone who know looked empty or tired.
Dadi thought maybe she's seeing too much into this or maybe Anika is just tired from all the work she has been doing for the sangeet.
But Om knew that everything has changed the Anika they once knew would never come back and it was all their fault. They took away someone's smile their cheerfulness and made them vulnerable.
He couldn't forget Anika's face when Shivay was saying things he never should.

Rudra knew there was something wrong with his di today. She didn't look like always. And he also knew that the reason behind the change was definitely his big brother.

Shivay well he didn't knew what to think now. All was his fault he said all the things that his brain thought was true or maybe it was a possibility, he thought it was right to trust your fianc than your wedding planner. He knew in his heart that all the things he was saying are probably wrong, absolutely wrong. But it was like he couldn't stop himself from saying. His brain didn't want to believe that his fianc was having an affair or was already married. Hence he did the unthinkable, hurt the person who always protected him from getting hurt. Who always protects his family.



To be continued...
Comment your views or pm me...
Edited by Sheswithme - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
awesome story.. Plz continue soon.. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
amazing updates dear
i loved it very much
plzzz do continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
read all the parts in one go.its a lovely story,probably what we all want to see.that annika withdraw herself.she is a strong girl.she shouldn't take any crap from anybody.
but alas we will ever got to see anything like this reel.trp,huh?!
so thanks for giving us this confident girl who's self respect is as strong as the great wall of shivaay.
thanks again👏

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