SHIVIKA Shot_When Two Worlds Collide (Shivay's P.O.V.) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Amazing! Reading about Shivaay's feelings is always a treat and you nailed it!

And she sneezed again.

Hilarious line and cute end!

-Sanu

Thank You Sanu 😳 n I'm glad that u liked it so much, means a lot ! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: jarir2010

Wow!its amazing dear.
It read the whole shot with great excitement,to what will come later.u write shuvaay's changing heart in such a manner ,it looks like like real snenario.people change when they got true love.coz tht love become life.and we human r very selfish by nature.we want to live,so for our existence to do anything and everything.
Its such beautiful piece of writing.
Plz give annika's pov too.
Update soon.
Ps-why was she sneezeing so much 😕 😆

and thank You so much for this detailed comment, I mean the things I wanted to showcase u have absolutely find that while reading and my aim accomplished. Thank you so much 😳
It was just One shot darling 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Haiyee...so sweet...loved it❤️

His fear so eloquently put...his acceptance...amazing writing...n d end is so cute n so ...

Thank You Darlo 😳 so cute n so dreamy? 😉 😳 😆 Loved ur comment 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SRKian

Pre kisses 2 u🤗 u knw i luv shiv da most nd luv anyth dat is only 4m dis pov❤️ absolutely fantastic 👏👏

luved it❤️ keep writing more😳

Oh U men I know tht U love Shiv more? 😉 are u sure???? 😉 Then the other one is wholly mine 😉 But Shivay bhi mera thoda sa 🤣
Thnks for always reading n commenting on my posts 🤗 Ani 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: preity_d

Oh U men I know tht U love Shiv more?😉are u sure????😉Then the other one is wholly mine😉But Shivay bhi mera thoda sa🤣

Thnks for always reading n commenting on my posts🤗 Ani😳


da other 1 is ONLY MINE NO SHARING!!! shiv is also MINE,acp bhi robin is urs pora 🤣
areh yaar lojja deona eta bole 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: SRKian


da other 1 is ONLY MINE NO SHARING!!! shiv is also MINE,acp bhi robin is urs pora 🤣
areh yaar lojja deona eta bole 😆

Sapne
Nakul Puro I mean Shivay puro amar. Nakul tor. Kunal r Om dutoi amar. Robin er voice aamar. ACP r Tdi amar. Tui laddoo kha 🤣 tui rudy baby ke rakhte paris. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: preity_d

Sapne

Nakul Puro I mean Shivay puro amar. Nakul tor. Kunal r Om dutoi amar. Robin er voice aamar. ACP r Tdi amar. Tui laddoo kha🤣tui rudy baby ke rakhte paris.😉


shiv amar,K amar, O ke share korte parbo,acp keo share korteh parbo bt K ke na!!nakul ke puro rakte paro,robin keo nd rudy amar ok 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SRKian


shiv amar,K amar, O ke share korte parbo,acp keo share korteh parbo bt K ke na!!nakul ke puro rakte paro,robin keo nd rudy amar ok 😉

kichutei na
I WANT Shivay n Kunal 😉 🤣 puro 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it was amazing preitu 👏
love u for writing this ❤️
hugs 🤗
i want something similar to happen in show to him to understand on his own
that how baseless his beliefs have become.
and that tej pinky bit looked so real 😭
i can easily see tej mocking pinky on things like this n then pinky trying to make shivaay like
him so that no one sees him as misfit as they saw her 😔
ek bacche ki childhood ruin krne ka acha
tarika tha by him ..
but yeahh once he falls for anika everything will
get solved.. n i just love his pov ❤️
he finally accepting anika fully ❤️
beautiful character evolution.. maine bahut kam shows dekhe h jha pe really koi character evolution hua ho hope it happens in ib ..
once again saying it was awesome piece of work
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing update dear
i loved it very much
;agtah hai meri dinaag bhi kahi collide kiya
seriously omg sso traveling in train
so sso loves his anika
and thanks for the pm dear
Edited by kusharberry - 8 years ago

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