MDT UNNAMED V2.0 SHIVIKA : (17,20) - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg 🤣 I love this I love this... happy family story waowww... Obros soumya and Shivika together
Wonderful updates.. Continue soon.. can't wait for a simple family fun and happy times with 2 bacchus 😆

If possible do pm me.. I don't wanna miss this...! I read all the updates together and had missed the last part thank god I came across it today by chance...

Good keep it up!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: pritzz

Omg🤣I love this I love this... happy family story waowww...Obros soumya and Shivika together

Wonderful updates.. Continue soon.. can't wait for a simple family fun and happy times with 2 bacchus😆

If possible do pm me.. I don't wanna miss this...! I read all the updates together and had missed the last part thank god I came across it today by chance...

Good keep it up!


am I dreaming.
you are here.

I mean I consider you as one of legends in this forums .
thanks for reading buddy.

and reply too.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: SAKIVIAM


am I dreaming.
you are here.

I mean I consider you as one of legends in this forums .
thanks for reading buddy.

and reply too.


Shakiv that was too much for a compliment.. 😆 nothing like that please ...lol

But yes I am here.. Bhai story kamaal hai to hai... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritzz



Shakiv that was too much for a compliment..😆nothing like that please ...lol

But yes I am here.. Bhai story kamaal hai to hai...😳


its not like any compliment. it is just I used to most active member of forums here in ib you definitely are.

there are two more stories of mine running simultaneously you can have a look at them to.


I am so excited to see you and planned writing again on v2.0 but I have given word to update v1.0 today.

will update by tonight .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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yipee obros,somu n shivika r together...awesome...waiting for the next one already...continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
haha anika and shivaay guessed
and yeah they all are together
haha all are on break and only shivaay is the eraning member haha
totally loving it.
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 14

It was around 7 in the morning when Om knocked the door .Anika was too tired shehas stressed her body to limit previous day.First being in nursing and participating actively in the event background and then late night journey.

Shivay decided to let her sleep as he went and attended the door as the twins were just as sleepy.

Om "Shivaay tum ready hon."

Shivaay "For what?"

Om "You forgot I guess."

Shivaay "What"

Om " aaj tumhey job mey join hona hain."

Shivaay "Seriously."

Rudra "Yes ."

Om "Dad ney humey mail bheja hain issey download karney ."

Rudra "Aur you have to report their by 10'O clock."

Shivaay "Ok I will report.readyb hojaaonga."

Shivaay "You know I came late night."

Rudra "Bhai hum kyon nahen jaanthey.Shaayad Guptaji nahen jaanthey hongey."

Shivaay "Who is he?"

Om "Your manager.Wohi naam likha hain usspar."

Rudra "Bhayya aap tension math leejiyen main breakfast banadoonga Om key saath milkey,bhabhi key liyen bhee."

Rudra "Thoda ajeeb lag rahan hain bhabhi boltey " rudra said slowly.

Soumya is sleeping in the diwaan in hall even she got disturbed by the trio speaking.

Soumya "Itney subaha kyaa huan?"

Rudra "Shivaay bhayya ka office ka first day hain aaj?"

Rudra "Hum ussey help kar rahen hain."

Shivaay "Yeh mera pehla din nahen hain,I have been to office before."

Om "But as a employee pehla day hain ."

Rudra was peeking in to see about twins they were sleeping peacefully in their grilled bed.

Anika got woken up by commotion came out looking for the source.

Anika "Kyaa huan still sleepy."

Shivaay "It is my first day for office it seems."

Anika jolted out from sleep coming out of dream.

Anika "Tho time kyaa huan?"

Shivaay "Its around 7."

Anika "Aapko patha hain office kitney door par hain kaisey jaana hain plan kiyya aapney."

Shivaay "I will go by car."

Anika "Kisska ?"

Shivaay was about to say mera/mine remembering he don't have any here. "CAB."

Anika "Billuji aapko budjet bhee dekhnee hogee."

Anika "Iss mahiney kee bills main dekhoongi you have to take care from next month."

Rudra waved to Anika almost teasing but she brushed it off.

Anika was half scared not knowing how will Shivaay handle his first day with all the experience he has as employer and boss.

Shivaay "Ok I will get ready and come." As he went inside to get ready Anika came out to kitchen to make something for all .

Rudra "Anika dee aap yahan kyon aaye hon humney bola na hum breakfast handle kar lengey."

Anika "Tum log pahunchey kabh they."

Rudra "Hum aapkey shaadi key din hee aagaye they."

Anika "Tum log theek ho naa .I mean aap log kabhee itney chotey ghar mey nahen they."

Rudra "Bhabhi ..mujhey ajeeb lag rahan hain main didi hee bolunga."

Anika just smiled.

Rudra "Han aap hummarey baarey mey math socho bhayya kaa taang kheechney ka mauka hummesha nahen milega humey.Aur abh tho jabh thak aap hain hum tho bindass karthey rahengey."

Anika was checking the changes in house,She left the house one way and OmRu made few changes accommodating all.

It was basically a two bedroom flat not that big but enough spacious for them.

Rudra made a make shift gym in the balcony and raised something to sit there being in the tenth floor they have a good view over the surroundings.It was all grilled previously.There were some mattresses in the corner of room .They might have kept them there .

Then she went to check other room.

It has OmRu's luggage in it,there is not almara left for them as it was Sahil's room and he used the only almara there.But the duo made a make shift one there .She was sure it is Rudra's idea.Soumya was coming out from the bathroom freshen up.

Anika "Soumya tumhaara luggage kahan hain."

Anika "Ek kaam karo tum merey room wala use karon main billuji ko boldethee hun yeh bathroom use karey."

Soumya "Anika dee aisey koi baath nahen ."

Anika "Soumya main bhee ladkee hun I understand."

Anika "Tumhara luggage merey almara mey rakhdena ."

Anika then looked inside that room and there are too many bags of OmRu or Ru mostly.

She just laughed at it.

Om was watching Tv in the hall seated below leaning on the sofa there. Ru was experimenting in the kitchen she never tasted Rudra's recipies though.

She glanced inside the temple room which was left unchanged.

Shoe rack is over crowded with shoes there.She could hear sounds from her room ,she is sure Aani woke up now but Shivaay attended him before.He is in a white vest with Aani looking at him in amusement he was expecting a lady actually so he was confused what to do with this guy here.

She just stood by the door looking at the father son duo speaking with their puzzled expression and then Aani began again.

Shivay "Anika ..." he shouted out her name.

Anika "Billuji yeh Oberoi mansion nahen hain itney zor sey chillarahen hon." Taking Aani from his arms.Anika started to feed the bhookad and Shivay stared at her with amusement.

Anika "Aisey kyaa dekh rahen hain?"

Shivaaay "Kuch nahen you are looking different."

Anika just waited silently thinking he is going to continue but he left the room wearing a shirt from his baggage.Aani was filled and was checking if someone's there to play with him.Soumya was the first to reach or was waiting for that .

It was already around 8:30 as both the twins are fed and one of then taken bath and other was not letting his mother do it patiently .

Om was giving lessons to Shivaay to tone down everything and don't get things to his head.

As finally Anika came out freshen up it was around 9 AM and break fast was prepared and served for her too.

Shivay has got couple of calls from his mother and daadi giving him instructions.

Om "Shivaay main tumhey drop karkey aaonga aaj."

Shivaay "You know where office is."

Rudra "Obviously humey patha hain ,hum kall he gayen they dekhney ."

Shivaay "Drop kissmey karogey."

Om "Anika ka scooty hain na."

Anika is half sure the duo have searched every inch of the house previous day or they came ahead for same .

Rudra "Om tum waapas aaaogey yaa waisey hee chaley jaaogey."

Om "Dekhoonga.Will see.Aaj pehla class hain."

Rudra "Ok."

Shivaay "Tum kahan jaa rahen hon."

Om "Modern art ,it's a field acting stage.Main wahan jaa rahan hun direction seekhney."

Om "Anika I am borrowing your bike.tumhey koi kaam nahen hain na."

Anika was checking some book kept in the shelf.

Anika "Om Ru aur sabh ,bataney ka mauka nahen mila."

Anika "Issmey kharchey bhardena .Jho bhee kharchey huin hon you should write it here."Shivaay was checking the book/ledger seeing even rupees getting accounted there.

They all nodded and agreed as Shivay was about to leave for his first day in the office .

Anika looked at him scared and worried she has spent years doing the same but today it is test not for her but him hoping that he behave properly.

Shivaay was expecting to meet Anika for the last time before leaving but with Om also needing to catch a schedule he has to leave without speaking to his wife, kissing his sons.

Rudra was busy playing with the kids and trying to win and argument with Soumya who has Aayu with her.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Okay mm every member doing their job.. this is ausum... 👏 Rudra is cute as always...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hmm,all r busy...
All went to their respective works...
Sso's exam...wow...n rudy as usual the most awesome n adorable one...continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
It is getting damn interesting 🤪 Shivay living a life of common man. waiting for more !

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