Ishqbaaz FF: Consequences. Chapter 15 on Page 39 (02/08/17)

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

So glad u found d time to update ...again a wonderful piece...loved d way tej n anika talked to each other...d history of d obros was a treat to read n d more heartbreaking looking at d state there r in😭...cant wait for everyone to get home...yeah i know i am so impatient ..lol😳

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@--Nargis--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Ahhh...father-in-law and DIL bonding...beautiful! And he asked her to call him dad...so sweet!

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Cookieg

@Cookieg

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

An amazing update

You write brilliantly

You really bring your characters to life

Love this story

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twerping

@twerping

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Yesss! You updated!

And it was all brilliant! Tej and Anika's.conversation was superb. Gave us insight into his past actions and also showed the changing realizations. Anika trying to return the handkerchief was too good though!😆

Loved the idea of a young Shivay standing up for his brother.

And finally Tej telling Anika about living with one's choices...that was perfect. Can't wait to see what.might happen when Om and Ani actually return to the Oberoi house.

And then the scene of ACP with Prinku! Thank you for that one! Totally see him as the bulldozer in China shop!😆

So he believes her at that moment, does he now? What might that belief make him do next?!

Thank you for this fantastic update ❤️

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mandu

@mandu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Whew!!

That was intense. I liked the conversation between Tej and Anika and Anika be able to defuse some of that tension on hearing Tej .

I'm sorry I am unable yo put in words at this moment how much I am enjoying your work.

You are an amazing writer

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Tanu221

@Tanu221

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Ranveer - priyanka 😉 please write a fic on them or is !!! U write so well ... N the game is on hiatus !!! Work it out na !!! It was going good than addiction !! 👏

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Fantastic update

Wow! I love shivaye in a protective big brother mode.

The flashback was awesome.

Update next chapter at ease

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Choices u make is what can makenor break u

Everyone choose what they felt was right

N they HV to face d consequences

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

I cant wait for shivaaye anika omkara showdown... its gonna b epic!!

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#230

I apologize for the fact that I have actually read the last the last 2 parts mutltiple times and not commented because after each part, I go reread Shivaay's fantasy which is just too lovely and the other chapters so painful but this last chapter was just too much! Too powerful!! Made me feel too many things so I just had to write!

It must have been hard for Om to be a child who is always compared with another sibling from childhood and even harder to love him...but Shivaay, with Rudra's help, managed to break that barrier of hate and change Om's hatred to love!!

I also loved the great wall of Shivaay coming down and threatening even Tej, for Om's happiness...Tej was right about one thing though, that Shivaay's life right now is largely a direct consequence of his actions.

I remember reading in one of your previous comments that you had already written the part where Shivaay and Anika meet again and I have butterflies thinking about it!! I know that Anikara is the endgame now but still looking forward to that chapter.

Thank you for this brilliant story and so sorry for bugging you every time with my moaning! I have stopped now!! Pinky promise!! Eagerly waiting for the next part!!

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