Shivaay OS: Guilt. *complete*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its my imagination on what happens after the much assumed Shivaay-Tia's wedding.

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I see my brothers' standing beside my empty wedding dias with none of them looking at me and their heads' hanging down due to the embarassment they had to bear because of me.

There stands my Daadi who is eyeing me with every drop of hatred due to my sudden decision of getting married to Tia,just to save my company.

There stands my Mom and Badi Maa,who kept their heads lowered due to the shock of the revelation of the truth behind the real and evil intentions of Tia and her family.

There stands my lovely sisters', Saumya and Priyanka,who doesnt want to meet my eyes'.

Finally,she descended from the stairs with her angelic face bearing no expressions. Her chestnut eyes were emotionless and dried tear stains were clearly visible.

She went near Daadi and took her blessings. She smiled faintly and hugged Daadi and sobbed silently.

Then,she went near Mom and Badi Maa and took their blessings,as well. Mom and Badi Maa gelled with her really quickly in a very short time. Both of them placed their hands' and blessed her with all the happiness of the world.

A muffled sob escaped through her mouth as she moved towards Saumya and Priyanka and hugged them tightly.

As she moved towards Omkara and Rudra,i saw her smiling faintly at Rudra as he moved his head to his left not wanting his beloved Anika di to leave. She held his hands tightly and I heard her saying to him that she will always reside in their heart and gave him a motherly hug. She ruffled his hair and moved towards Omkara who felt really guilty about Shivaay's behavior towards her.

She engulfed Omkara for a side hug. I could see Om's eyes' watering up and could see Anika trying to suppress her muffled sobs.

As she seperated from him and proceeded towards the exit,she slowly turned her back and took in everyone's face inside her heart for the last time ever and left Oberoi Mansion.. For ever..

And.. I could do nothing..

I couldnt stop her from leaving me and my family..

Because of..

Guilt..

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The End. Sorry for not giving a proper ending because after seeing the precap.. My mind has blocked and is cursing SSO for his uber rude behaviour with Anika. Hope its upto the expectations.. Please hit the like button and comment.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Awh so angsty and well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
A great write up until the end...and i can relate to your reasons for an abrupt end...because the pre-cap has me in fits of all sorts too. The Bhaagad billa!! What more can i say. Maybe you want to reattempt to write the end when you have cooled down some! And if not...no problem, however you should continue to write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice 👏
I just hope whatever you said comes true coz baagad billa deserves all this for the ridiculous behavior shown in the precap 😡 And I really hope he feels guilty about it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! Very well written with the perfect emotions! 😭👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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well written..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb!!..
A pain filled one...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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all i wanna say is he deserved it😡😆

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