Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31 - Page 4

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jarir2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

Read 2 chap in one go.nice .
Update soon. 👏

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---Angel---

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Posted: 8 years ago

WOW!!!!!!!

This is just beautiful!There is a hidden beauty about this piece, which I cannot describe! The depth in your words adds so much to the story. In this chapter alone you have highlighted the fact that Shivaay Singh Oberoi is a caring and passionate person like Omkara. As a matter of fact the only difference is that Shivaay doesn't express himself. Just for Om he brought back Anika and he to has realised that Anika is the only one that can bring things back on track. The bond you have created between Om and Abika is beyond beautiful! One of my favourite things about this story is the friendship between Om and Anika! However something, which just makes your story, special is the intense ShivIka scenes! Within this chapter you have created a wonderful plot line and twist! The fact that Om is attracted to Anika and Shivaay is in a secretive way, makes your story truly unique dear! This love triangle is something that will make this story unforgettable! I LOVED it!!!!!!! Thank you so much for the pm Preity🤗

Love Angel❤️

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Akshnavlove

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Posted: 8 years ago

ohhh kahi om anikape fida to nahi ho raha [:O]

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SRKian

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome update Pre👏👏 wonder whoz dat lil baby shiv was holding😲 update soon😉 nd oh i luv u 4 write it,hope u knw y😆

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Arohi

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Posted: 8 years ago

woow...AWESOME...Superb...AMAZING...
waiting fr next part...pls update soon...

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sharmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Read both the parts in one go..

I swear i love ur story..

Its brilliant..Anika as a doc nd Om falling for her..

Get some AniKara scenes...dont get me wrong i am ShivIka shipper..but i like bonding AniKara..

I just hope Om's heart doesnt break at last..

The ending scene was awesome..Anika dashing into Shivaay nd finally ends up hugging him☺️.

Continue soon

Beautifully written..

Do pm me pls..

Love Sharmi

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_Niki_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks for the PM! Its a really interesting storyline! Do continue soon.. 😊

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floral

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d
Aww, that's so sweet 🤗 Then tell me If I have improved or deteriorated 😉 😆 Writing after so long 😛

well u were always an amazing writer so u r stable yaar

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floral

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Posted: 8 years ago

amazing update dear

i loved it very much

well so om is having feelings for anika

well who is that lil girl with shivaay

so wow i really love shivika so i hope u will unite them

its really intense and it gives me same feeling of ur virman story

plzzz do continue soon

and thanks for the pm dear

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neeme

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi dear

Amazing work

Chap 1 was really interesting

Chap 2 was too interesting

But i m waiting for next one *wink*

Do update next soon

And yap dnt forget to Pm me.

Thank you for this amazing work

Keep smiling

N

Take care

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