Entropy || A SHIVIKA - ISHKARA - RUMYA FF [A/N Page 9] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
I loved this update Nicky!
Even though I dislike ShivIka, I loved the way you wrote them and I didn't want to skip out in case I missed some clues!
Rudra was so adorable and I loved the way you portrayed Ishaana; she's so sassy!
Loved, loved your writing! The humour is so on point.
Update soon babe!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Wow awesome story
Can't wait to know what happens next
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Update soon!
Update soon!!
Update sooon !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Superb...
Its damn intresting...
U ve neautifully portrayed all the characters...
Pls continue soon...
Loved this update..
Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Vishakha..

oh seriously it was aweeesome...
loved it..
do continue soon


Thank you so much!
I must say, I read your haunted house story too and it was very interesting 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aahana-

The end made me chuckle loudly 😆

Do continue soon :D


Will try my hardest - the next instalment should hopefully be posted this weekend :)
Yeah, when I was planning my story, that was the one bit that I knew had to be posted!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: .ButterflyNeet.

Hi I am Neet,

As soon as I read your introduction I had a feeling that this story was going to be something quite good. There is a trait that each of characters have, and your writing highlights it exceptionally, and it's something that I absolutely love reading. Your setting is quite brilliant because the inherent comedy that we get to witness is such a treat. But I have to say the interaction you wrote for Omkara and Ishana was really incredible. Ishana's ability to mask hurt and anger is so interesting because most of us see her as someone who wouldn't break so easily by a taunt or comment. That intensity that you bring to these characters is genuinely intriguing.

Can't wait for more.

Neet



Thanks so much 😊
I love it when readers write such detailed and in-depth comments, it really inspires me to update faster!
I really love all the characters in Ishqbaaaz, but I do understand that a lot of people on the forum either can't comprehend, or downright dislike certain characterisations (i.e Ishaana) so I hope that my writing can open their minds to the different traits that each character exhibits.
I'm not a diehard Ishkara fan, but I do relate a lot to Om. I warmed up tremendously to Ishaana during their confrontation scene, when she showed viewers that she is actually quite self-respecting and to an extent, powerful.
Ishaana is hiding a world of pain behind her childish actions and her bright smile. Omkara on the other hand, is idealistic, too idealistic even (I say this because my personality matches Om to the T!) and he genuinely does seem quite torn by Ishaana's actions. I think finding out about the con makes his already black-and-white vision of the world even more damaged.
Thus, I want to write Ishkara in a way that shows the slow burn of the relationship, and to show how these two personalities inevitably complement each other.
Thanks again 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: twerping

Brilliant start!! Absolutely loving it!!

All the characters were introduced so interestingly!! From this chapter I can already tell how delightful this is going to be! Can't wait for more!! Do update soonish! You did leave us with a cliffhanger! 😳

Thanks for this awesome chapter!



Thanks!
I'll try to update ASAP 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYaansh960

This is some exceptional writing right here!

This fanfic is so enjoyable to read plus I can imagine the whole scene happening as you're writing is so vivid!

Keep updating regularly, please? 😆


Thanks so much, lovely 😃

I will try my hardest!

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