Shivika TS.....LOVE IS ALL ABOUT TRUST....Epilogue updated (pg 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here u go wid
Part 3:

After 2 hrs anika regain her sense...her body was aching n pain was too much...she started to scream in pain...shivaay n her father were startled to hear her shouting...soon doctors came n gave injection...shivaay was cursing himself for her condition...he can't imagine that in anger he gave so much pain to her life whom he claimed that he loves her.

Shivaay was sitting beside anika holding her hand n staring her...anika opened her eyes slowly...shivaay was so much happy to see her awake n he calls the doctor...n doctor confirm that she is fine...shivaay hugs her tightly...anika was about to hug him back , wen all the flashes of his tortures comes infront of her eyes...she pushes him back...shivaay was shocked...

A: ( shouts) jaaiye yaha se...mujhe aap ki sakal tak nahi dekhni...
S: anika listen to me...plz don't push me away...i..lo...love...u...
She was sobbing badly...just than her father entered the room n rushed towards her...he hug her tightly...
A: papa...plz inhe boliye ki ye yaha se chale jaaye...
F: beta chup ho jaao...aur shivaay tum yaha se jaao...
S: plz uncle mujhe anika k pass rehena hai ( in pleading tone)
Anika' s father pushed shivaay out of the room...

A: papa mujhe maaf kar dijiye...maine aap ko bahut hurt kiya hai...
F: beta plz mat roh...maine tujhe maaf kar diya hai...aur haa ab tum hamare saath rahogi nahi ki ush shivaay k saath...
A: thank u so much papa...mujhe maaf karne k liye...

1 week had passed...anika was discharged from hospital...shivaay comes to see her but his guilt stpo him , to face anika...anika was taken home...her wound was recovering but wat about her inner wound, which will never going to heal..shivaay' s condition was no less...he crys everyday n curses himself for doing so...his house started haunting him...anika's scream n her painful face come infront of his eyes...he started to spend more time in office in order to avoid coming home.

1 month has passed...shivaay was in his room...bell rang n servant opens the door...servants informed him that one lady had come to meet him...wen shivaay saw her his happiness has no bounds...
S: anika...n run towards her n hug her tightly...
S: mujhse pata tha tum jaroor aaogi...anika m so happy...thank u so much for coming...
Wen anika didn't hug him back...he broke the hug n look towards her wid teary eyes...
S: kya hua anika...kuch bolo...
A: mujhe aap se divorce chaihye.
Shivaay was shocked to the core...
S: anika tum yeh kya keh rahiho...i know mujhse bahut badi galti hui hai ...but atleast tum mujhe ek chance toh do ...i promise main sab thik kardunga.
A: chance...kis liye haa...ta ki aap mujhe dobara hurt kar sake...aap ne jo kiya hai uske liye main aap ko kabi bhi maaf nahi kar sakti...
S: plz anika just one chance...plz...
A: nahi shivaay...u don't deserve any chance...aur kya thik karengay...boliye...aaj aap ki wahaj se maine mera baby koh diya...mujhe pata chalne se pehle hi aap ne usshe maar diya...u killed my child.
S: ( crying ) anika ...plz aisa mat kaho ...woh mera bhi baby tha...jitna tumhe usse khone ka dukh hai, utna mujhe bhi hai...
A: aap ka baby...seriously shivaay...aap ko kaise pata ki woh aapka baccha hai...aapki nazaro me toh i m bloody s**t...
S: ( shouts ) anika plz...aisa mat bolo...i know that it was my baby...mujhe sab sach pata chal gya hai...ki kaise sid aur tia ne milkar yeh plan kiya tha...plz anika don't leave me...marjaaunga main...plz...anika...

( anika was crying...her heart was aching to see her love in so much pain...but she can't console him...the wound which he have given her r not allowing her...it was matter of her self respect...)

A: nahi shivaay...ab kuch thik nahi ho sakta...maine bahut koshis ki aap ko samjhane ki par aapne meri baat nahi suni...aur ab bahut der ho gyi hai...sab kuch khatam ho chuka hai...aapne sah barbaad kar diya...hamraa pyaar,hamraa rishta ...sab kuch ...
S: ( crying ) plz...anika aisa mat kaho...
A: maine papers sign kar diya hai...aap bhi kar dena...
N she started leaving...
S: ( to himself ) i...love...u anika...always...aaj tumne mujhe maaf nahi kiya n i know i deserve this...balki isse bhi buta deserve karta hu...maine humesha tumhe sirf dard diya hai...par mai humesha yahi pray karunga ki tum khush raho...always...
Anika was sobbing badly while leaving...

A: ( to herself ) i will always love u shivaay...par i can't forgive u...agar aapko maaf kar diya toh saayad apni hi nazaro mei gir jaaungi...bye shivaay forever...n she run out of the house for not coming back...

(( pyaar me saath rahena zaroori nahi hota...balki pyaar ka hona zaroori hota hai...valehi shivaay aur anika saath na rahe par humesha ek dusare se pyaar karte rahengay...shivaay iss guilt me rahega ki usne apne pyaar par trust nahi kiya...aur anika ne apne self respect ke liye yeh decision liya...))

So kaisa laga...wat do u think guys...anika ka decision sahi tha ya galt...share ur views.
N haa kis kis ko epilogue chahiye??? If u want then comment 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes, so true what you said in the last few lines 👏 saath rehna nahi, pyaar ka hona zaroori hain.
If you had written a happy ending then I should not have liked it as much as I'm liking it now 👏

Self respect is most important and I'm happy that she didn't forgive him and may be in future they can heal each others pain and reunite. There is always a chance in this kind of open end stories. Superb 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so nice...gud that anika donot forgive shivay...epilogue. update karo...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: preity_d

Yes, so true what you said in the last few lines 👏 saath rehna nahi, pyaar ka hona zaroori hain.
If you had written a happy ending then I should not have liked it as much as I'm liking it now 👏

Self respect is most important and I'm happy that she didn't forgive him and may be in future they can heal each others pain and reunite. There is always a chance in this kind of open end stories. Superb 👏


I m thankful that u liked the ending...as for every person self respect is very much important...n yaa u said it right that there is a chance...maybe they can heal eachother in future...we can only hope for that till it happened...thank u so much for ur lovely comments😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: reshma4875

so nice...gud that anika donot forgive shivay...epilogue. update karo...

Thanks for comments...n epilogue will be update soon😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
True...
For once, a human can live without love of his/her life...
But not without self respect... It's important to respect ur self...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Epilogue :
Anika' s P.O.V

Its been 2 yrs since i n shivaay parted our ways...i still remembered the day wen we got divorced , shivaay never wanted to leave me...he want us to start a fresh n i know he loves me but i can't give him second chance...he didn't trusted me...he pointed towards my character ...a women can forget n forgive anything but wen things r related to her self respect n character , she can't...

Now i worked in an orphanage n also lived there...i don't want to be burden on my parents...but they don't want me to live in orphanage ...but its my decision n they supported me...i loved children very much...they remind me of my baby who died before coming in this world...my parents wanted me to get married again but i can't becoz i still love shivaay...but i can't forgive him...he comes to meet me twice in a week n call me to know how m doing n for now m happy in my life n don't want anything...

Shivaay' s P.O.V

2 yrs ago...i lost my love...my wife...its all my mistake no no not mistake its crime that i have committed ...but i also don't want her to suffer becoz of me...so i let her go for her happiness ...if her happiness is in staying away from me than m really happy...i visited orphanage to meet her n to spend quality of time wid her...i wanted to visit her everyday but she refused saying that i can come to meet only once or twice not everyday n i respected her decision n thankful to that she allowed me to meet her...i call her everyday to tell about what i did all day n she never replied beyond ' hmmm n haa' ...i m happy to see her happy...i will spend my rest of life in her memories ...i love her n only her...

Love is most beautiful feeling in the world...love never can be forced , its the other name of sacrificing his/her happiness for other n shivaay also did same...his happiness relies in anika n he is happy to see her happy ...n they will love eachother till their last breath...n may be in coming times they will be able to again recreate their relationship.

So here u go wid the epilogue n finally the story is off from my side...hope u guys enjoyed it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing end! It's not easy to forgive a person who has accused you of heinous crimes you've never done. I'm glad Annika didn't forgive him. Because with love, respect and trust is also very important in a relationship!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I totally agree with you,
When one of our own hurt us immensely
They don't deserve our forgiveness even though we love them to the end of the world
Edited by chandran.rudra0 - 9 years ago

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