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VJDIPA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

It's supernice

Pls update FAST time time and update me

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Superb. It's good shivay heard it.its gonna be fun and there bickering was cute.it showed shivay concern for ani so clearly.

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Wandering about

@Nomadic_Vibe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Good job dear...story progressing at a good pace!!!loved reading it👏👏👏update soon😃

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---Angel---

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Yes! Finally Shivaay knows about that b*tch Tia😡

Their argument was so cute and I can't believe that they are both scared of cockroaches ;when they pretend to be so brave😆

I can't wait to see the loving and caring side of Shivaay

This was a lovely addition to your story😃

Do update soon!

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Read both the chapters in one go..

Have to say it was superb!!

U r writing their POV'S perfectly👏.

Loved ShivIka's cute tiffs...

I am just loving this caring Shivaay...😳.

Nd that bloody bitch Tia...hw dare she say my Annika cheap😡🤬.

Superb...nw continue sooon..

Love Sharmi

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Loll doctor were so amazed seeing anshi cute fight

Doctor even called them love birds

But sahil know anshi nok jhok very well

Loll anshi hug each other as they scared of cockroach awe so cute

Both r really stubborn & admitted with their decision

Awe shivay made soup for Anika & she couldn't help for compliment as it was heavenly

Finally shivay got to know the truth that Tia blame Anika

Now it's gonna be interesting what shivay will do with Tia

Continue plz

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Tanu156

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Okay i am going to be honest I recently started commenting bcoz I don't like most of ffs but it was good like real good. But it was short . prologue didn't attract me much but these chap and especially doctor and the ranting ... It was too good... Kudos to you keep writing and please update fast .

P.s. keep the humour alive😊

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Ab bajegi Tia ki band🤣

Loved their spat😆

Update soon !

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Cookieg

@Cookieg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Hilarious... their cute fights and both scared of a cockroach 😆
Glad Shivaay knows about Tia.. waiting to see how he sorts her out
Love your story.. please update soon

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Immaturebookie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Tanu156
Okay i am going to be honest I recently started commenting bcoz I don't like most of ffs but it was good like real good. But it was short . prologue didn't attract me much but these chap and especially doctor and the ranting ... It was too good... Kudos to you keep writing and please update fast .
P.s. keep the humour alive😊

Thank you for your honest comments it does mean alot😊 and I know that my prologue isn't great it's like all over the place😭 I had an idea about rewording it and yes I'd re-word it before tomorrow😆. Thank you for commenting and about the humor wait for it fair maiden I shall provide it to you 😉