Shivika SS : Turning Point ( ch 12 page 20) 24 sep - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
that was an awesome update just loved it...especially Shivika and their pottery session... ;-)
Hope Ishana doesnot do something that affects Shivika's budding relationship negatively :-)
Continue Soon...will be waiting... :-)

I hope and pray Your mum gets well soon :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Both are angry in each other acting indifferent
Rudra my baby he rocks
He turns the radio on and love angel gives signs of falling in love
Spot on she listed the signs
Haha Anika gussa and turns the radio off
Awww poor Rudra baby Shivaay asks him not to irritate Anika
Lovely scene Shivaay and Anika making pottery together
Superb love to each such scene on the show as well
So Om witnesses them making pottery together
Hope he doesn't mind and accept their relation and anyways he and Rudra always ship for them so not to worry
Oh dam that girl ishana and her dad both are making plans to robe and blame on Anika
Hope everyone believes Anika
Brilliant
Om is still shocked and goes to call Rudra to see it as well
Awww Shivay telling her not to be depressed and sad as she will recover soon
Love how intensely he looks at her and tells her not to change
Omg did he just say he likes her they ways she is...hell yes he just confessed along with a kiss on her cheek
Lovely
Aww Anika shocked as he kissed her haha she put her clay hand on her face
Poor Shivay trying balance himself but fell and broke the vase
Anika angry
Let's see how he manofies her
Omg both throw clay in each other haha
Rudra and his one liners
Pani Nani mila toh clay fight
Rudra not believing that Anika and Shivay be together at first
haha Anika in Shivay arms and he without caring for anyone pulls her in his arms
And Rudra OM and Sahil are shocked to see them closer
Lovely update
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
This part is lovely dear🤗
Everything down to the song was perfect!
The pottery part was my favourite!
Ae Dil Hai Mushkil suits ShivIka so well
Both of them got irritated with my cutie pie😆
They are in love but they just haven't realised it😳
RuMya and Sahil are to cute!
I love them so much!
Om witnessing the pottery scene, was another one of my favourite parts!
I hope that Ishana chooses the right decision and takes the right path.
I loved every single part about this update❤️
And I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Continue whenever you can dear🤗
PS. I am sorry about the short comment, it's just that I am in a rush😳
I will definitely add to my comment😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Love the pottery
They cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
Grt update.
Loved this carefree SSO.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was really cute...
just loved it...
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome loved it
plz update soon
Edited by chco - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update! Awww Shivaay said he loves her the way she is! SO SWEET! aaand then they're back to fighting LOL! typical 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

After a while everyone sitting around the table in open air , everyone were staring them when the tea boy came and placed 5 mugs on the table , Anika and Shivaay without looking around placed hand on same cup , a current run down her spine , she pull away her hand

" dekha ! dekha! jo mein karo woh karan SSO ka must hain " she pat on his hand

" i selected this one " he tried to take it out from the glass stand

" yeh meri hai " Anika tried too snatch from him

" Aaah " he placed on table and shakes his hand as it got slightly burned ,she at once held his hand

"jal gaya na " she blow breath to ease the pain , everyone giggle she look around found them hiding their smiles "Kya ho gaya hain Billo ji ka haath jal gaya hain " she said , even Shivaay stare at them , they tried to became serious , " hey what the wack? "he said as she pull it out she took out the handkerchief from his jacket pocket and stated wiping it


"Anika Di aap kai aur SSO kai tou fight huai thi "Sahil pull her arm and whispered

" Mein abhi bhi naraz hoon , mein kaise ko daard mein nahi dekhe sakti bus " Anika said and left his hand

"Naaraz tou muhje ko hona chaiya , first you clean your hands on my face , and now you have burn my hand, how i will use my cell ?" he said and tried to operate it


Acha hai na thora quality time with your sibling " she smirks


Anika tum ko muhje ko tang kar Ka bohot maza aata hai " Shivaay said angrily


She looks away " wow " she pulls Shivaays sleeve and look up in the sky , everyone look in direction


"Bhai I want to light a lantern" Priyanka said to Om


"Muhje ko bhi" Sahil too asked Om


"I and Sahil will together lighten one "Rudra warp his arm around Sahil and said " we will wish for a cute girl friend " Rudra whispered both had high five


"Anika di would you too like to lighten one " Om asked her She gave a helpless look


Om smiles and walked away with in few minutes he was back with 3 lantern


"Bhai you help Anika di " he placed one on table and said


"Me" Shivaay gave him an angry look ,Om ignored and started helping Pryinka


Rudra and Sahil lighten first and left in air both made wish loud " woh hum we bhi pyar karna laga God " both wiped fake tears


Shivaay shakes his head he look at Anika who was looking at Om and Priyanka , he picked up the matchstick box and he lighten the stick "Ab help bhi karo , warna your wish will reach God late" he said while hiding his smile , Anika picked it up and look at him , he offer his hand to her ,she placed her's and she stands next to him , he lighten the lantern ,both held it from opposite corner " lets leave it together " he whispered she nod " you can make a wish" he said." aap nahi wish kara ga" she asked him ,"you wish lets God hears your first i will make some other day " he said and waited for her , she look at him ,she closed her eyes ,he stared at her as she made a wish ,she opened her eyes and nod at him he blinks his eyes both left it the lantern it slow moved away from them ,Shivaay took a step close to her and ,she rested her back next to him "itna small hain per phir bhi andhera mein ujala kar raha hain " she murmur as it was already sunset ,he couldn't stop himself mesmerizing her as she put all her weight on him and look up in air ,her head was resting on his shoulder and she was looking up " hamara sub se duur ja raha hain Shiva" she murmur, he press her hand which was still in his ,he look up in dark sky , he could see their's crossing others

" what you wished Anika ?" Priyanka asked her from other side , Anika realized she was standing close to him " i can't tell what i wished " she said and trying to pull her hand from his firm grip , he was busy looking up in air

"I wish ka tum kabhi bhi hamara ghar se na jao , we all always stay together and have fun " Priyanka said from other side of table

" Priyanka mein hamesha tou nahi tum logo ka saath ra sakti hoon " Anika said sadly , Shivaay over heard them and look at them " Bhai kuch asie nahi ho sakta ka Anika kabhi bhi Oberoi , today after ages we all have spend time together , time ka pata bhi nahi chala " she said and smiled

" ho sakta hai Priyanka agar koi chaiya tou " Om said and look directly in Shivaay's eyes , he was still standing next to her and lost in some deep thought

" Oh God i had a videoconferencing , i totally forgot " he said and picked up his cell, " we better reach home " he said

" Shivaay stop hiding the fear of losing her " Om said

"What "Shivaay asked him

"stop acting Shivaay i very well know you when you want to hide something you walk away " Om said as they seated in car

" what you are trying to say ?" Shivaay said

"Sahil stop it dont sit in my lap daard ho raha hai " she said irritatingly Om look at Shivaay he tried to hide his expression , he only look back in rare view mirror and clutch the wheel

" Anika Di you come and sit at front seat " Om at once offer her his place , as she was dead tired ,she without any hesitation agrees and sat next to him

" seat belt " he asked her , she look at him , he unbelt himself and helped her

"Anika di do you know bhai never take care of anyone like this " Rudra smirk and said

"Shut up Rudra or I will throw you out of the car " he said husky

Rudra zipped his lips ,Sahil had a laughter ," aap ka bhai bhi Anika di ka tarah hain , jab sach bola tou danta hain " he winked at him and said loud , Shivaay and Anika could easily hear him , they look at each other but ignored

" freshen up and meet me in study , today you have to attend the video conference with me " he said as the reached home

" mein kya karo gai " she asked him

" i will tell you later " he said and walked away

Anika with Priyanka and with the help of crutches walked back to his room , she was dead tried , she look at Sahil he was lying on bed , she walked in washroom to freshen up, when she walked out Sahil asked her " yeh kya hain " he asked her and taken out Shivaay's wallet " yeh do muhje ko " she tried to snatch from him , she lost her balance and slips ,she fall down on floor " Ahhh" she cries with pain ,

Sahil get panics ,he tried to help Anika but fails , "Anika di wait abhi mein kaise ko bolata hoon" he said "SSO " she murmur ,he caress her with his tiny hands ,he limb to Omkara's room, he saw Shivaay "Anika di gaar gai " he said crying , Shivaay throw his towel and run out , he kneel next to Anika who was crying with pain ,he carefully picked her up she wraps her arm around his neck. he made her rest on bed " dekhe kar nahi chal sakti " he fixed pillow behind her back , she shakes her head

" muhje ko daard ho raha hain aur aap daant raha hain " she said while wiping her tears

" tou pyar karo tumhari foolishness per " he dialed Dr number " you scared both of us " as he saw Sahil walking in room " Dr please come quickly Anika slipped " he said and disconnected " where is everyone ? where is that girl?" he asked and look at her who was having sever pain ,he rub her shoulder and her back, "dr is coming " he caress her face

" raat ho gai hai , woh apna ghar chali gai " Anika said ," and baqi sab tou dinner per gaya hain, bola tou tha aap ko " she murmur and notice he was in his causal

dress .his hairs were not properly combed nor his shirt buttons were closed

"what were you doing ?" he asked her , she passed him his wallet

"Sahil khel raha tha , mein tou bus iss se wapise la rahi thi " she said innocently ,he could not stop himself mesmerizing her , he shakes his head " tum pagal ho " he angrily said shakes his head

" mein thek hoon " she said , he didn't listened her , again called the Dr

with in few minutes Dr arrives , he examine her

"She is totally fine Mr Shivaay you only panics " he said

" Panic , she was in pain , can't you see she has turn all pale , her arms, her back is aching "

" Mr Shivaay hardly few days back she had met an terrible accident , i asked you to let her stay in hospital but you didn't listen us , now you are complaining , i told you she needs strict bed rest" he paused " give her time she will be fully recover " he said and walked away , Shivaay look at her thank no one else was at home , or they had made fun ,when he walked back in room he found Anika lost in some deep thought

" you rest " he said

" you will not teach me laptop ?" she asked him

" kal " he said and avoided her ,he asked the servant to bring dinner

"aap kai video conference hai " she murmur , he look back at her ,shakes his head and turn around " chup kar ka dinner karo , then have medicines and sleep " he said huskily " Shivaay " she held his hand

" aap ko bhi meri tarah daar lagata hai kya " she asked in low voice as Sahil was sitting watching tv in other corner of room

" Daar kaisa daar " he frees his hand and pull the dinner trolley close to her

" khona ka daar , uss din hum dono mein se koi bhi maar sakta tha " she said as he turn back and look at her intensely

"Anika stop your nonsense talk and have dinner " he passed her the plate

"apko meri liya itna pareshan kyun hai ?" she asked him

" i am having head ache i will go and rest , you take care " he said and avoided her questions

" are we in Love Shivaay " she whispered


to be cont 😆😆😆

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