IshKara TS: Be Intehaan (last part-pg1) *complete*

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"Mujhse door raho,Ishana. Aag hu main,jal jaogi tum,"Omkara told her,as he held her upper arms tightly.

"Agar iss aag mein pyaar hai,toh,main iss aag mein khudko jalane keliye taiyaar hu.Tumhare pyaar mein mar mitne keliye taiyaar hu,Omkara.Mujhe akela chhorke maat jao,Omkara.Main mar jaungi tumhare bagaer," Ishana replied,with tears in her eyes.

"Nahi,Ishana.Main tumhe apni zindagi barbad karte hue nahi dekh paunga.Mujhse itna pyaar maat karo.Mere pyaar mein sirf aur sirf dard milega,khushiyaan nahi," Omkara replied to her in a furious tone.

But,Ishana was adamant.

"Om,agar tumse pyaar karne ke badle mein mujhe dard milta hai,toh mujhe manzoor hai," Ishana replied.

Omkara couldnt control his anger now.So,in a fit of rage,he slapped her hard that she fell down and hurt her forehead.

Shivaay,Annika,Rudra,Saumya and Priyanka were shocked to see this.

Shivaay: Om... Stop it... Kya kar raha hai,tu? Ishana ke pyaar ko thukraha hai?

Om: Woh samajhti kyun nahi hai,Shivaay? Yeh sahi nahi hai..

Shivaay: Woh samjhegi bhi kaise? Woh toh tujhse be intehaan pyaar karti hai.

Suddenly..

Annika: Ishana,utho... Aakhein khulo...

Ishana ko chot lagne ki wajah se behosh ho jati hai.Uske aankho se aansu ke do boondh nikalti hai.Rudra goes to take out the car.While Saumya called the hospital,and Shivaay carried her.

Ishana mumbled something in her unconscious state.

Ishana(mumbling): Omm...ka.raa...
Me..r...a. p..ya..ar tum...he huu..mesha sala..mat.. rakhega...
Jee..te...jee na sahi, pp...a..r,marne ke baad...
I... Love... You,Om...

After saying this,she went unconscious fully.
Then,Omkara realized,how much she loved him.He took Ishana in his arms from Shivaay and took her to the hospital in his SUV.others followed them.

In the hospital,everybody waited outside the ICU for the DOC to come out.

Atlast,Doc came out.

Omkara went forward.

Om: Ishana kaisi hai?

Doc: Patient aab thik hai.Khatre se bahar hai.Sar pe chot lagne ki karan woh behosh hai.Adhe ghante mein hosh ajayega.Unke chehre se lagta hai ki woh kafi mental stress mein thi.Behosh ki halat kuch kehrahi thhi.

Annika: Kya keh rahi thhi,Doc?

Doc: "OM,MUJHE AKELA CHHORKE MAAT JANA...MAIN NAHI JEE PAUNGI..."

Everyone were amazed to see the depth of love of Ishanafor Omkara.

Omkara clamped his face with his hands and slumped down on the hospital bench.Tears were flowing down from his eyes.

Everyone present there,felt bad for both of them.

BG Music:
"Jab saason mein teri saasein mili ho,
Phhir sulagne lage,
Ehsaas mere mujhse kehne lage,
Haan,bahon mein teri aake jahaan toh,
Phir se kehne lage,
Sailab jaise phhir se behne lage,
Khoya hu main,aaghosh mein,
Tu bhi kahaan aab hosh mein,
Makhmali raat ki ho na subha,
Be intehaan,Be Intehaan,
Yu pyaar kar,Be Intehaan,
Dekha karu sari umaar,
Tere nishaan,Be intehaan,
Koi kasar na rahe,
Meri khabar na rahe,
Chule mujhe iss kadar,
Be Intehaan."

precap: Finally,Omkara confesses his love.
Edited by VidyutKiDeewani - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏that was perfect...
why is om not accepting ishana love?😒

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awessome
Waiting for Om's confession
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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last part:

Omkara slumped down on the bench and clamped his face.Tears were flowing down from his eyes.He was having flashbacks of how Ishana saved him from the gunshot,how she prayed for his recovery,how they met.

Priyanka was watching this from a corner.She went up to him and hugged him.

Priyanka(in a concerned tone): Bhai,kuch nahi hoga Ishana ko.

Omkara(sobbing): Maine Ishana ko dard aur dukh ke sivai kuch nahi dia,uske badle mein Ishana ne mujhe pyaar,izzat aur khushi di. Mujhse aur sehen nahi hota.Mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho chuka hai.Main aaj hi Ishana se apna pyaar ka izhhar karunga.

Priyanka:Thats like my ideal brother.Love u,Bhai.

Omkara: Love u too,Prinku. Waise,maine socha hai ki tera aur Saahir ki engagement agle hafte karu.Kya khayal hai?

Priyanka blushes hardly and runs away from there.

Scene changes in ICU.

Nurse was checking Ishana's medical chart,when,suddenly,she saw Ishana was regaining consciousness.

Now,Ishana was fully awake.

She asked the nurse about Omkara.

Nurse: Dont worry,Ma'am.Your colleagues are here and your Om,also. Main abhi jaake bulati hu.

Ishana nodded her head.

As the Nurse went out,she informed that Ishana is awake.Everybody went inside to see her,but,Omkara stood outside.

Ishana: Prinku,Om kaha hai? Unhe bulao na,please. Mujhe unse milna hai.

Priyanka: Sabar karo,Ishana bhabhi...

Ishana was shocked after hearing this,and,she also blushed.

Annika: Aye haye,Ishana.Tum sharmate huye bohut acchi lagti ho.

Ishana: Thanks. Om ko bulao na.

Shivaay: Woh nahi ayega.Woh tumse nazre nahi mila sakta after aaj jo ussne kiya.

Ishana: Bhaiya,hum unko dard dete hai jinse hum pyaar karte hai.Mujhe pura vishwas hai ki Omkara mujhse bohut zyada pyaar karte hai.

Everybody,present there,were amazed at Ishana's love for Omkara.

Ishana: Hmm...Woh nahi manenge.kahawat toh suni hogi,"ghayal hui sherni aur bhi gussewali hoti hai."

Everybody understood what she was going to do.
They start their plan.

Ishana(acting like she is in great pain): Om... Mujhe bohut dard ho raha hai.

Omkara's head shot up after hearing that.He immediately ran inside the ICU.

Omkara(with concerned tone): Ishana,meri jaan,kya hua hai? Dard horaha hai? Doctor ko bulata hu.

As Omkara gets up to call the doctor,Ishana grabs his hand.

Ishana: Mujhe doctor ki nahi,apki zarurat hai,Om. Aap doge na mera saath?

Omkara nods his head and hugs Ishana tightly. She also hugs him with the same passion.

Shivaay: Chalo,hum sab chalte hai.Let the two love birds spend some time together.

Everybody leaves Omkara and Ishana.

Ishana notices that Omkara was crying.

Ishana broke the hug,and,sat up.

Ishana: Yeh kya... The great artist Omkara Singh Oberoi rotey bhi hai.Hey Maa Durga...

Om: I am sorry,Ishana. Mujhe tumpar haath nahi uthana chahiye thha.I didnt know what happened to me at that time.Please,mujhe maaf kardo.

Ishana: Maine apko tabhi maaf kardia thha.Bhala,main apne dil ki dharkan se kitni der naraz rehti,boliye?

Omkara: Ishana,kya tum iss murti banane wala se aur tumhe pyaar karne wala Omkara Singh Oberoi ki biwi banogi?Kya tum mujhe romance karna sikhaogi?Kya tum mujhe humare bacche ki papa kehlane ki haq dogi? Ishana,will you marry me? Main janta hu ki maine tumhe bohut dard diye hai,par,phir bhi,main apni baaki ki zindagi tumhare saath bitana chahta hu? Kya tum meri zindagi ki hissa banogi?

Ishana was amazed at his sweet and honest confession.

She immediately replied,YES.

Then,Omkara hugged her tightly,promising not to leave her again and to always love her and keep her happy.

BG Music:

"Koi kasar na rahe,
Meri Khabar na rahe,
chule mujhe iss qadar,
Be intehaan...
Be Intehaan,Be Intehaan,
Yu pyaar kar,Be Intehaan."

*****

The End.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was beautiful❤️
You have captured all the emotions so well👏
It was amazing dear!
I can't wait for your next story!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Angels...

It was beautiful❤️

You have captured all the emotions so well👏
It was amazing dear!
I can't wait for your next story!



aww.. thnks dear...
i have so many stories ke updates pending.. will write them slowly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing 😳
well written 👏👏👏

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