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Sarcy your writing is such a beauty
Sarcy your writing is such a beauty
Ab toh ObBros pe likhna bana de apna duty🤣
(Okay, I'm sorry😆)
Anyway,
Getting serious.
This was such a beautiful OS, my darlin'.
The way you started, describing each of the family members' pain and reaction, before you moved on to Omkara and Rudra, that was so perfect, because it just showed that though others care, they will never-ever be as effected as the brothers.
They are their own world, and the entire world is just them. Through the tumultuous and painful life behind the picture perfect family, they formed their own safe haven, THEM.
And, they've become immune to anything and everything for as long as their haven stays intact. And that's what you've depicted so beautifully.
How Rudra couldn't breath, and Om's heart ached like it could stop functioning any moment, it wasn't the fear of the loss of a loved one. But the fear of losing a part of themselves.
And the entire OmRu scene. Where Om couldn't even register how scared he was, because he had to put Rudr at ease first.
The broken Rudr, with his panic attack, always gets me.
But I absolutely loved how Om kept on repeating that Shivaay will be back again and again. As if to keep the faith alive, in both Rudr and him. That was their last thread, hope, and Om wasn't losing it.
Shivaay didn't have to think twice to know that his brothers were the ones who NEEDED him, and wasted no time in doing so. I loved that.
Also, the part where, Shivaay is so terrified at what could have happened to him, not for his own fear, but for the fear of how broken his brothers would be. That just stole my heart.
Rudr slided into Shivaay's bed while he forced Om to do the sane was the most adorable thing ever.
Also, Side note, Rudr is never going to get any girl who's going to love him enough to eat his Bhindi a la carte and lie about it being nice.😆
This story tugged at my heart strings.
It was everything I wanted and more.
K bye
Edited by -Panda- - 9 years ago
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