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crushcrushed

@crushcrushed

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Why did I not see this earlier?This is such a brilliant piece of Writing Sarcy.Completely Loved the OS and the way you described OBBros bond was really heartwarming Great work Sarcy.This OS was worth the wait❤️

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Amekha

@Amekha

Sparkler

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Aww😳

You made me so emotional. The ending was just awesome.

I loved your os. The way you described each brother's emotion was so apt. This is how i think each of us wanted the brothers to react. Now i can replace yesterday's episode with yours in my mind. It was just beautifully written.

And thanks for the pm😃

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

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+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
U r a brilliant writer sarcy...
It was soo emotional nd lovely
Loved Rudy baby the most.
The bros bonding was beautifully penned down...👏

Thanks, hun! :)
Given the equation between the ObBros, this is the kind of scene I expected after the new of the chpper crash came out.

Rudy baby is the best! 😆

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Sanavi
This is how I wanted ObBros reunion.
CV'S ruined it. We even didn't get a jhappi.
Nyways u wrote it so well. First part was full of emotions. Loved ur portrayal of OmRu's feeling.
The scenes frm then we're good. Specially the bedroom scene.
Thnx so much dear fr such a wonderful OS

Thanks, Sanavi! We did indeed need a super charged reunion between the Bros. A private moment where they can be themselves and express their deepest fears. OmRu are Shivaay's jaan and vice versa. They would be absolutely shaken if something happened to him, as we'd seen from the past two incidents. But it's like the CVs think that with every accident, the intensity of emotions would lessen. 😔

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Sparklle801
Wow. Never can get enough of oberoi bromance. It was so cute and emotional.

Thanks! The ObBros are love! The more scenes we get with them, the better it is! Never enough, indeed. 😉

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

My goodness...this is a masterpiece.

The emotions were woven with a realm of reality and constant furrow of ever running tension was brilliant. Rudra's reaction, Omkara's countenance and the way to sneak in the mention of Rudra's attack amidst another tragedy was overwhelming.

Rudra's reaction was so in tune to his previous reactions during Shivaay's hospital period...that I felt your fic should have been the episode.

And Shivaay returns. I loved it how he went to his brothers first. Even he knew that they definitely won't be in the hall with everyone and so he had to sneak in to meet them first.

And poor Shivaay had to eat Rudra's disaster of a dish. That dish was seriously a murder.

And their last sleeping scene got me. It was so warm and beautiful that my eyes got a tad teary.

Loved it.

Niki

PS: I love the way you spell Rudr😆

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: BookWormV
Res! 😊

Edited:

Hey Sarcy!😊

This was pure bromance, something I was dying for in the show. The aftermath of crash episode was a huge disappointment so this is something that left me with a content smile. This is a brilliantly written OS. Hats off.👏

The title - I loved it.! It just makes sense you know.

I loved the fact that you zoned in on Rudra's panic attacks, you took this aspect into consideration and so brilliantly brought out all the worry, concern and agony that I wanted, so desparately, to see in the show. It was so so so so good to read it. Om's being the big brother here and making sure that Rudy boy gets through the panic attack. Suicidal thoughts.. thats just ouch! I could just picture Om rubbing his chest trying to will away the hurt. This whole scene was so exquisitely portrayed here Sarcy... i could feel the despair, the misery, the torment, pain so potently. It takes a brilliant author to do something like that. 👏

Shivaay's first thoughts for his brothers, his kahaani ke two other hisse! Their reunion was
The emotional-awkward one liner made me laugh after the absolute sadness from the previous part. Brilliantly donr there... I am smiling now! 😛 He didnt break his phone... How come?? 😲 😆😆

LOL! If he didn't die from the crash that bhindi a la carte with cream sauce definitely will!😆 Shivaay ate it without a witty reply and accepting punishment too... I was literally LMAO during this whole scene... Why would you write you are no good with humor? This OS had the perfect amount in it. Rudra grabbing Shivaay's collar and asking - What did you do to my bhaiyya?! 🤣🤣 I loved it! The ObBros are back indeed. Dil bole, Oberoi!

Can I just hug you for that phenomenally sweet ending? That was a pure awww moment. Well, the show disappointed but this OS made my day. Thank you so, so much! ❤️

Do you send PMs? Please can I get one when you write next? *puppy eyes*

Love,
V

Hey, V!

Thank you for your lovely words. Your comment left a smile on my face. 😳

The title was a very spur-of-the-moment thing, but something that would connect well to Rudr, so I decided to go with it.

Rudr is a very sensitive person and the way he has been protected by his brothers, he's lead a very sheltered life, so the smallest hints of grief leave him shaken, especially when it comes to his brothers. During the hospital scene when Rudr knew that Shivaay was fighting with death, he had been completely shaken and terrified. So the thought of Shivaay dead should have broken him, and Omkara a little more because he had to handle a broken brother plus fight with the grief of another's apparent demise. There was a lot of potential there but the CVs dished out something that was very tame as per the expectations.

Writing Shivaay's perspective was a tad dicey because first I got into the details of the whats and the hows but then I realised I didn't care about that because the emotions was what mattered here. And given the way he's possessive about his brothers, I couldn't let his raw emotions get diluted by meeting the family first. 😆

Glad to hear that you found the kitchen scene humourous. That just flowed along as I kept writing.

And I did want a very sweet ending for the trio, a very warm, cuddly one so it's nice to hear you liked it too. 🤗

I hadn't sent out PMs for this one until yesterday. Will PM you for my next piece. :)

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janvi0513

@janvi0513

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

It made me cry
It made me smile
It made me laugh
It made me go aww
This is brilliant
This showcases the real essence of the ObBros

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iamred

@iamred

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Hey love!

Ugh, not fair!

And here I was thinking that no one would write a One Shot on the OBros! So I would have written one given the fact that you hadn't already done it way better than I ever could!

Ah, I've missed this!

Such a lovely welcome after 10 days of inactivity, I might as well vanish like "POOF" everyday!

For starters, I loved the whole concept of it and I won't say that I missed an OBros moment on the reel, since it's okay even though it was disappointing to quite a few!

It was fine how they dealt with it but I loved your way anyway!

Ah, too many ways!

*crazy grin*

Okay, just ignore my nonsense!

Poor baby, Rudra's panic attacks literally break my heart. The way he says "Closer to the left" made me sniff and frown alternately.

*groans*

And Omkara, who said the man was sensitive?

I mean sure, he is high on emotions and clam too. But he rides a roller-coaster on a daily basis and still puts up a composed facade for his baby brother! Shivaay and Omkara are similar in that respect!

*smiles*

Superman Returns!

Well what else do you expect?

It's Shivaay Singh Oberoi we are talking about and once a hero, always a hero!

He might as well throw himself off a cliff but he would come back alive because he has made a pact with Rudra and Omkara! I love him, ah, that man!

*starry-eyed*

One simple question, are you a meanie?

It over 1:30 a.m. and your Pasta Arrabiatta and Lemon Butter Roast Chicken followed by Cookies and Cream Parfait has sent my stomach on a hunger drive!

You know I love you baby girl, but I am not liking you for doing this to my almost flat tummy!

There goes my efforts in the gym!

*sobs*

To end it, I'd say,

He is a superman,

Their hero to be,

A rock and a shield,

He is Shivaay, you see!

I love being lame!

Hahahahaha!

I hope this long comment makes you happy, love!

XOXO