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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Sonikins
nice intro
who is virat
i m guessing om boss will be Shivay. I think
do pm me

Thanks

Virat is Om's bff . wait I am posting his pic

Is he shivay or not u will know in next part

Sure I'll pm u

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manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: neelpari
amazing update
nice cs
ishkara first meet nice
want to know more
update soon

Thanks dear

Yup will continue soon

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manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
Intresting...continue sooon...nd pls show virat's face...

Thanku

Will continue soon

N virat face is in next post

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manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

He is virat ( shivin narang)

Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Beautiful part 1

waiting for more...

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: StarletBeauty
Beautiful part 1

waiting for more...

thanku so much

sorry for late but I'll continue soon n give frequent update now

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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part 2

om come to his room n put buckets. he lay on bed n think

om - kitni ajeeb hai ye jindgi aksar unhi logon ko dhoka deti hai jinki khwahishien bahut choti hoti hai.warna to kisi ki badi se badi khwahish bhi puri kar deti hai. khair virat ko family bahut acchi mili hai , uncle aunty mona n khushi

he smile on her name

om - ab bas yaha mujhe sukun mile. sab fir se shuru karna hai

just den his bell ring. he open door

mo - hi om bhaiya

om - hi bha ahh sorry mona . how r u

mo - fine humesha ki tarah. or apki rat kaisi nikli humare gareeb khane mai

om - bahut acchi..or ap to bahut ameer ho. itne acche rishte jo hai apke pas

mo - haa wo to hai..khair aap jaldi ready ho jaiye with your certificate hum logon ko 10:30 par nikalna hai

om - okie , i will b ready

mona leave.

here at ishana home

she is laughing

ish - or pata hai ma us bholu ram ne sabko pani bharne diya or uska pani nahi bhar paya

ma - sach mai , use pani nahi mila bechara baccha kaise nahayega or kya piyega

ish - koi nahi ma humne use do balti pani diya hai .

ma - accha hua beta tune de diya,.

just then mona enter. ishana pull her n make her sit on dining chair n serve her breakfast

mo - di mai tujhse naraj hu

ish - or wo bhala q

mo - tune mujhe bataya nahi us 4 no wali ne teri dance class k samne bakheda khada kar diya

ish - are wo .kuch nahi tha reema aunty ko music sound se problem ho rahi thi to unhone kaha or humne sound slow kar diya

mo - kaha.plz di mujhe somu ne sab bata diya hai .unhone kaha nahi literally ladai ki.wo to tu jawab nhi deti koi or hota to acchi halat karta unki.

ish -chod na . ye le dhokla kha

n he put dhokla in her mouth

ish - ek sal choti hai mujhse koi kahega bade bhai ki tarah behave karti hai

mo - ab tu itni seedhi jo hai di karna padta hai .meri serial type abla nari..

she pout n go to kitchen n help her mother. they take breakfast n ma send breakfst for om with mona

she knock om 's door. om open .he is ready,

mo- so ready,

om - hmm chaliye

mo - kuch khaya

om- abhi mere pas kuch saman nahi hai kuchbahar se kha lunga

mo - koi jarurat nhi ma ne nashta bheja hai

she forward a packet n om denied . but mo insist so he take breakfast .

om n mona reach n om give interview . he got job.he is very happy. he join office from today itself .

at evening both return home n give goodnews to all. all get happy

ishana is not there. she has gone to her friend home .

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Posted: 8 years ago

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om return to his room n call virat to give him good news that he got a job.virat also become happy.

om go to market for utensils n grocery purchasing .he pick a pressure cooker

om - bhaiya ye kitne ka hai

shopkeeper - 5000 ka sir

om - itna mehnga,

shk - ap pehli bar khreed rahe hai lagta hai .isiliye apko nahi pata iski yahi rate hai.

om - thik hai

he again hear that beautiful voice n melodious laugh

ish - tum bhi na silky fir bewakuf ban rahe ho . iski price only 2000 hai. inhe galat q de rahe ho bhai

shk - galat kaha accha mal hai , ap 2000 mai le lijiye

om get shocked that shopkeeper bargains alot

next ish help him in his whole shopping .

ish - tumne kabhi shopping nhi ki kya

he move his head in denial . she smile

ish - mai samjh gayi thi

om - ye shopkeepers kitni high price batate hai

ish - haa inse khub bargaining karni hoti hai.

om- thanks khushi for help.

she.smile

ish - koi nahi silky ..

n both come to home ..om take a book n cook dal chawal. he dont know cooking .

next day he wakeup n saumya help him to take water.he cook oats n tea n get ready for office, ish's ma ask him to eat with them but he politely refused . he leave for office.

one week passed ,

today is sunday

its 7:30 am

om is sleeping peacefully . suddenly he hear loud noise of speaker he come out of room n see.peoples is rushing here n there. he is in half sleep

aise kya dekh raheho beta,

its vardan . he is standing there

om - uncle ye sab

var - ye chawl h beta ,yah ye chlta rehta hai. or aaj to ganesh chaturthi hai. ruko

he give earplugs to him

dd - ye lagao or thodi or der so jao fir puja mai aa jaana.

he take them n sleep.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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at 10 am

all preparation has been done for bappa puja. all get ready . ish wore a beautiful golden n purple navvari sarre. n hair tied in a bun with gajra. she wore earings n nosepin, looking so beautiful . mona also come

mo - wow di , sadi q pehni tune ek dum pari lagti hai sadi mai,kitne log mar jayenge socha hai tune

ish - kya mona tu bhi. wo to saumya ne jid ki to maine pahan li.use company chahiye thi

ma- mna mar khayegi jaldi kar . khud to ghanto lagati hai nikalne mai. q bigad rahi hai bacchi ko, are waah ishu kitni acchi lag rahi hai sadi mai

mo - haa wo to hai..ek dum tere hindi serials ki abla nari in saree

she make cute face , om enter n smile

ish - or aap q has rahe hai, kya hum sach mai wo heavy makeup ladies lag rahe hai

om - nahi tum bahut acchi lag rahi ho. or mai isliye has raha tha qki tum bahut cute face bana rahi thi.

ish sacchi

om - ek dum sacchi

virat - om tum aa gaye, idhar aao

om - aya viru

ishkara smile to each other n start their work..after that they did puja n take lunch.om also take lunch wih them.virat is an orphan so he celebrate all festivals with his inlaws

one month passed like that

om adjus in chawl n its lifestyle . he is actually enjoying living there.

its navratri

mo - om bhiya jaldi chalo hum dandiye k liye late ho jayenge. aaj di ki special performance hai wo bahut nervous hogi

om - aya mona

he lock room n come out

om - baki sab

mo- gaye, ab chale

he nod n both left

om - waise dada ishana bahut darti hai na.means

mo - haa w hum sabki ladli hai. har kam k liye wo hum par depend hai, usme thoda confidence bhi kam hai, baki to wo har kam mai perfect hai

om -hmm.she is so good. or meri to unhone help bhi ki hai

mo smile. n both reach pandal.they enjoy ishana 's special performance n dandiya.

now its all turn

ish - tum nahi chaloge om

om- nahi mujhe ye nahi aati

isha - isme kaun si badi bat hai , dekho ek danda aise ek aise or fir yun or ye ..its done yhi repeat karna hai.

om - maine aaj tak nahi kiya

virat - to aaj kar lena .bahut maja ayega chal bhi

mona n virat drag him in pandal , he also dance with them n enjoy alot

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Posted: 8 years ago

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some more days passed. now om is totally settled in chawl.

he come from office late n make dinner n eat. after dinner he go to roof for a walk . he find ishana is there sitting silently n lost

om - ishana kya hua

is - kuch nahi omkara

om - fir aise udas q baithi ho

ish - aise hi kuch khas nahi

om - ishana hum dost hai na tum mujhe bata sakti ho. ya tum mujhe dost nahi manti

ish - aisi bat nai hai, actually humari dost seema , wo or hum kab se dost hai. par kal humne use ek galat ladke k sath dekha to use alert kiya . par usne ulta humse ladai ki or dosti tod di, kaha hum jalte hai usse qki hum uski tarah smart or stylish nahi hai, or hume koi bf nahi hai .

om - dekho usne tumhe insult kiya or jane kya kya kaha,dost aise nahi hote.wo to apne dost ko samjhte hai n support karte hai. or tumne to apni dosti nibhai na, ab use.nahi samajh aya to uski galti. tum udas mat ho , wo tum jaisi dost deserve nhi karti.or waise bhi tum hasti hui acchi lagti ho miss khushi

ish smile

om - or mujhe silki bolti hui

ish - thanks om hume samjhane k liye.

om- isme kya hai hum dost hai na , mai tumhe humesha samjhunga or support karunga

ish - mai b.

both shake hand..n unknowingly they made promise for future..

next day its karwachauth

ish also fast for her future husband . today is om' s off. ishana , mona n ma are fasting . so vardan om n virat decide to cook food n do all prep for puja. so virat n vardan take kitchen charge n om handle decorations n preparation

n here girls apply mehndi in their hand.

mona come to virat

mo - virat dekho meri mehndi

vir - bahut acchi hai or ishana tumhari

she.show him mehndi

vir - bahut acchi hai ek dum meri behan jaisi.chalo jyada uchal kud mat karo tumhara fast hai na.

he make ish sit n om look at three of them . he admire relations of this family .

at night they break fast n take dinner. they celebrate diwali also. n om enjoy with them alot.

sme more days passed

one family is coming to see ishana for marriage purpose n all are doing prep.

tbc...

pre - ishana 's relation get fixed n her marriage preparation .