ShivIka OS: Life without you

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys this is Angel once again with another OS. Please comment and tell me how to improve and enjoy!
PS: If you have any requests for a story please tell me in the comment section and I will try to fufill it!
This OS is told in Shivaay's POV.

It's all my fault. The bomb blast didn't kill her. The only thing that could kill her was words. Words are the most powerful thing in the world. Once said you can never take them back...

Flashback:
I never want to see your face again! But Shivaay...
Didn't you hear me I said go! Just go away and never come back!
Flashback ends.

I am the reason such a beautiful soul left this Earth. I am the reason a brother lost his sister. I am the reason my Anika left me...

People say I am lucky to be alive since I was also present at the bomb blast, but they don't understand the day Anika left this world I died. I am now a person without a soul. My soul was Anika. People think I am being selfless by adopting her little brother. But I am selfish. I knew that her soul would haunt the house her brother lives in so I had to make that mine. Now that I think about it she is still here just not with me. She is with Sahil since he was her soul.

When Anika left this world an angel left this world. Die is such a harsh word much to harsh for an angel like her. She has not died she has just left me. My brothers are my life but she was my soul.

I still have my life. But my life is without you. I am sorry Anika. I am sorry. If possible please forgive me. Though I already have part of my punishment and that is a...

Life without you...

Ok guys I know this is short but I have got to go now. Please tell me what you think about it. I know it's not that good but still please tell me what you think. PS ignore any typos and write down your requests.

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Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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you made me cry...
Shivaay punishing himself..
Shivaay adopted Saahil as he is Annika's soul..
Aww!!
you made me cry...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good one girl but PLZ avoid sad OS !!!
Keep writing romantic tracks on Anshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my god! That's heartbreaking
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Posted: 9 years ago
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if possible do write an os on AnShi where Shivaay realises that he loves Annika a lot and cant stay without her and will have to propose in true Annika style,infront of Rudra and Omkara.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I was only gone for about 10 minutes and look at all the replies!😳 Thank you so much everyone who has commented! @VidyutKiDewaani I will try post an OS like that tomorrow.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Angels...

I was only gone for about 10 minutes and look at all the replies!😳Thank you so much everyone who has commented! @VidyutKiDewaani I will try post an OS like that tomorrow.



aww!! thanks gal.. pure Annika style mein proposal that too with Champa n Chameli..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was a wonderful Os...
Beautifully written...
Do write more😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my...
Makes me emotional...
Pls write an OS on ShivIka's love confession... Your writing skills are amazing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😭!
Anika died!
Poor shivaay :(

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