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Hi guys this is Angel! This is my first OS on this forum and I would love it if you guys comment and tell me how to improve my writing.
Some background is that this story takes place when Svetlana takes over the Oberoi empire and the three brothers leave with their Anika bhabi...
S: Come on Rudra don't cry.
R: But bhai what about Priyanka? She will miss me so much!
O: Don't worry about her she has Dadi and Ma and Choti ma.
R: What about my Soumya baby? She will wonder where I am.
S: Just call her and tell her about our new home.
R: Fine but what about Dadi she will break without us. And Ma will have to tolerate that stupid Svetlana amd no one will be there to protect her O.
Hearing this both Shivaay and Om became emotional.
A: Don't worry Rudra Badi ma just has to make a call and I will be there with Champa and Chameli ready to attack since all your body guards are pretty lame.
R: Really bhabi?
A: Yeah! You can even ask Sahil how many time I have taught my bandari bua a lesson.
O: What about Dadi?
A: You can all send her messages and she can visit us everyday.
S: Anika what about us where should we go? I am not using any money which has come from the Oberoi business.
And with that Shivaay broke down and burst into tears.Rudra was shocked seeing his superman cry and Om was crying himself seeing his brother in such a state. Anika knew she had to do something.
A: Well you guys have three options. One you can put up with my stupid bua. Or two we can go stay at one of Rudra's girlfriend's house until we have enough cash to get our own place.
The second option made everyone burst out laughing and that's when Shivaay realised they were all there for each other. Om when Rudra broke down. Shivaay when Om broke down. And Anika when Shivaay broke down. He realised that they could do anything just as long as they're together.
Okay guys I know it is really bad but still gonna post it. Ignore any typos.
Some background is that this story takes place when Svetlana takes over the Oberoi empire and the three brothers leave with their Anika bhabi...
S: Come on Rudra don't cry.
R: But bhai what about Priyanka? She will miss me so much!
O: Don't worry about her she has Dadi and Ma and Choti ma.
R: What about my Soumya baby? She will wonder where I am.
S: Just call her and tell her about our new home.
R: Fine but what about Dadi she will break without us. And Ma will have to tolerate that stupid Svetlana amd no one will be there to protect her O.
Hearing this both Shivaay and Om became emotional.
A: Don't worry Rudra Badi ma just has to make a call and I will be there with Champa and Chameli ready to attack since all your body guards are pretty lame.
R: Really bhabi?
A: Yeah! You can even ask Sahil how many time I have taught my bandari bua a lesson.
O: What about Dadi?
A: You can all send her messages and she can visit us everyday.
S: Anika what about us where should we go? I am not using any money which has come from the Oberoi business.
And with that Shivaay broke down and burst into tears.Rudra was shocked seeing his superman cry and Om was crying himself seeing his brother in such a state. Anika knew she had to do something.
A: Well you guys have three options. One you can put up with my stupid bua. Or two we can go stay at one of Rudra's girlfriend's house until we have enough cash to get our own place.
The second option made everyone burst out laughing and that's when Shivaay realised they were all there for each other. Om when Rudra broke down. Shivaay when Om broke down. And Anika when Shivaay broke down. He realised that they could do anything just as long as they're together.
Okay guys I know it is really bad but still gonna post it. Ignore any typos.
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