SS: Because, I love you..Part 3 (last part) pg 4 updated on 1st Aug 20 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: vava_ansh

Awesome Perfect Amazing... I feel d IshKara scene u wrote will turn out to be real maybe... Damn I want This RuMya track in d show of being fake gf and bf but Somu shouldn't be in love with Rudy I want him to be ... ShivIka was tooo hottt


thankyou
it will..but it will take a lot of tym..n m sure IshKara mein pyaar bhi ho jayega..
arre..aisa nahi hoga pr..coz I think Ruhi will say yes to Rudra..n so, Soumya will be ignored..I hope Rudra realises that he has been a jerk for hurting Somu..
I wanted to show a romantic Shivay..so thought of changing their storyline..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vava_ansh

Awesome Perfect Amazing... I feel d IshKara scene u wrote will turn out to be real maybe... Damn I want This RuMya track in d show of being fake gf and bf but Somu shouldn't be in love with Rudy I want him to be ... ShivIka was tooo hottt



thankyou
it will..but it will take a lot of tym..n m sure IshKara mein pyaar bhi ho jayega..
arre..aisa nahi hoga pr..coz I think Ruhi will say yes to Rudra..n so, Soumya will be ignored..I hope Rudra realises that he has been a jerk for hurting Somu..
I wanted to show a romantic Shivay..so thought of changing their storyline..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy

Continue yaar.. Am waiting for the next part. Want to know..


yes..I'll..
If u want I can post the next part today itself..just let me know..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: pickachu

Lovely starting!

Love all pairs scene
continue soonnn


thankyou
yup i'll
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: kamalapushpa

This was tooo good...

Especially shivaay☺️
Eagerly waiting to see how these couples get sorted
Update sooon!!!!


thankyou
here shivay will be romantic
yes I'll
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
wow. After seeing such a grt response for my SS m really glad..n here m posting part 2 as well..njoy reading..njoy thankyou for commenting n liking my SS..love u all..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Ishana kept looking at Riddhima in anger..

I: tumne asa q kiya Riddhima?

Ri: qki mein Om ki gf thi..aur tumhare wajah se humara break up hua..

I: tum uski gf kabhi thi hi nai.mqki tumne usse pyaar kiya hi nai..u were using him..apne khud k selfish faide k liye..usse apna bf math kaho..

Ri: dekho dekho kon keh raha hy..tumne bhi Om ko use kiya hy..apne selfish reasons k wajah se...atleast meine apni identity usse nai chupayi..so plzz, yeh bhashan kisi aur ko jaake do..

I: Bloody bitch!!

Saying so she left a fuming Riddhima behind..

Ri: yeah right..get lost!! looser!! bloody liar..

...

Ruhi was walking alone when she saw Soumya crying..

Ru: Soumya? kya hua dear? tum ro q rahi ho?

S: kuch..kuch nai..woh bas asehi, aankh me kuch..

Ru: chala gaya hy?

S: haa..

Ru: oh Soumya, plz stop lying, look, I know u love Rudra..so just go n tell me!!

S: tumhe kse pata?

Ru: pure colg ko pata hy..sivaye uss Dumbo Singh Oberoi..just go n confess ur feelings..

S: but he doesn't loves me..

Ru: ofcourse he loves u..bas, usse ehsaas nahi hua hy..n woh tum usse karaogi..

S: mi? kasa kay?

Ru: mi saangte..

S: tula marathi yeta??

Ru: thode thode..

Soumya smiled..

...

Shivay kept looking at himself in the mirror..he remember ever moment he had spent with Anika..how he hated her..how they fought..how he tried to buy her..how she challenged him..everything..n suddenly he thought of the kiss n closed his eyes...

Sh: yeh meine kya kar diya??

T: baby? yeh Anika itna shocked q hy?? meine abhi usse mansion k bahar jaate huye dekha..kaafi shocked thi..kuch hua kya? tum usse chillaiye kya??

Sh: Tia plzz, plzz leave me alone..

T: pr hua kya baby?

Sh: hua yeh hy k I kissed her, isliye woh itni shocked hy..hua yeh hy k I have strted loving her..i love her Tia..n isliye I can't marry u..

T: Shivay??

Sh: I don't want to spoil ur life..plzz leave..

T: baby tum asa nai kar sakte..tumhe, SSO ko uss Anika se pyaar..

Sh: pyaar ho jaata hy..uspe kisi ka control nai hota..woh kiss gusse me jarur thi..pr mujhe uss baat ka koi afsos nahi ho raha..m glad I kissed her..yeh har waqt ka ladna, challenge karna..meine aaj tak ase ladki nai dekhi joh SSO ko challenge kare..I must say pehle mujhe irritate hota tha pr abh..abh yahi sab mujhe accha lagne lag gaya hy..uska gussa hona, uski baate, uski bhasha..sab, I Love everything abt her Tia..I love her...plzz, m sorry..

T: Shivay, m glad tumne sach bola..but..(n she left)

...

Om was sitting inside his room..tears flowing down his cheeks..He had got 15 missed call all where from Bela..ohhh...Ishana, how could he forget??

O:(looking at the phone he said to himself) plz stop calling me Ishana..(n threw his phone away)

O: tumne asa q kiya? meine tum pr itna trust kiya..aur tumne..ussi trust ko toda..aakhir q??

Om: mein ase tumhe jaane nai dunga Ishana, I trusted u..tumhe jawaab dena padega k tumne jhoot q bola? q mera istamal kiya..tumhe baat karni padegi..aaj raat sab clear ho jayega..

...

Rudra was now tired to be honest..It had been 6 months he was trying to woo Ruhi, but she was ignoring him..he was ssly fed up now..this was the last tym he was trying, if she still ignored him..he had decided to shift his mind n heart on another gal..

R: Somi, tumhe toh meri help karni hi padegi..kaha ho tum??

Ru: hey!!

R: (to himself) kahi mein sapna toh nai dekh raha?? Ruhi khud se mujhse baat karne aayi hy??

Ru: u ok??

R: absolutely..achanak kse meri yaad aayi tumhe??

Ru: mujhe humare bich ki yeh joh awkwardness hy usse kam karni hy..look Rudra, I have a bf, n m really happy with him..plz stop ur idiotic antics of wooing me..its of no use..u are wasting ur tym n energy, we can just be friends..plzz, tumhare ase behaviour se mujhe bahot embarrass feel hota hy..jab tumhe pata hy mujhe tum me koi interest nai hy toh phir q try karte ho?

Rudra just kept looking at her..did she just rejected him? RSO?

R: so tum mujhe reject kar rahi ho? meine 6 months tumhare piche lagaye..aur tum mujhe yeh sab bataa rahi ho?? yaar itne ladkiyo ko meine bhaav nai diya..tumhare liye..aur mujhe kya mila??

Ru: look, there are 1000's of gals who love u..but they don't love u..

R: matlab?

Ru: they love ur looks, ur money n ur status..no one loves u as Rudra..just Rudra..

R: kya bol rahi ho?? Sacha wala pyaar chahiye bhi kise?

Ru: n u said u love me..God, Rudra, love is a pure thing..jab hota hy na sab baddal jaata hy..hume sab se pyaar nai ho sakta..woh insaan bahot khaas hota hy..agar uss insaan ko dekhne k baad aap apne saare tensions, tradegy bhul jaate hy..toh wohi insaan apke liye perfect hy..kya asa koi insaan hy tumhare life me??

R: ha hy na, mere bhai..O n Shivay bhaiyya..

Ru: (rolled her eyes) aur ladki me??

R: nai asa toh koi nai hy..

Ru: think..koi toh hogi..

R: ummm.. (n closes his eyes n thinks harder..n suddenly he sees a blur figure of a gal..running n dancing n jumping..she is smiling, she is short yet fair m, her smile is contagious, she could make anyone smile..but who the hell is this gal??) yaar..ek ladki dikhi, pr blur thi..samjhi nai kon thi..

Ru: Soumya!!!

R: hein? kuch bhi..woh kse..? (n saw Ruhi hugging Soumya) ohh..mujhe laga...

S: hey!!

Ru: kaha thi tum? meine mera kaam kar diya hy..abh tumhari baari..

R: ksa kaam?

Ru: gals talk..stay away..Byee Soumya..I'll catch u later..

S: byeee..

R: Somi!!!

S: hmm? kya hua?

R: usne mujhe reject kiya yaar..

S: tumhe sach me bura lag raha hy?

R: aur nai toh kya?? mere 6 mahine waste huye..

S: Rudra?? mujhe laga k Ruhi k baat ko samjhoge tum..pr...(n she left)

R: yaar, abh meine kya kiya? Soumya!!!! yaar..isse full n final baat karni hi hogi..yu mujhe confuse karke jaana matlab kya hua yaar??

...

Anika reached her home n straight away went inside her room n locked herself up..

A: yeh kya ho gaya? yeh kse?? mein unse kuch bol q nai paayi?? unki shaadi ho rahi hy aur mein...thappad bhi nai maari..unhone pehle mujhe hug kiya mein tab bhi kuch nai kar oaayi..aur aaj..kiss..Anika, tune bahot galat kiya yeh..woh..nai..mujhe unse baat karni hi hogi..

So, part 2 ends here..i hope u guys liked part 2 also..plzz ignore spelling n grammatical mistakes..thankyou for reading..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
wow dear
nice update
hope ishkara clears their misunderstanding
and rudra understand that soumya is perfect for him
shivaay says his feelings to her
eagerly waiting for ur update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
woooww its nice to see Shivaay realising his feelings by himself...
I wonder how Om will forgive Ishana since she was planning to con him😔
Omg i totally loved it in the 1st part when u started "Riddhima being the bitch she is"🤣
Rudra bachcha try to understand what Soumya and Ruhi are trying to say
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice one yaar
Read Both the Parts in a go
Loving All the Couples☺️
Pls continue soon and do Pm me
Edited by KRITII - 9 years ago

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