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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KRITII

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Aahh...nice one
So your Going According to the Story Of Each Episode
Update soon and thanks for the Pm
Love Kriti:)

thnx dear...no its just slightly according to the story..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thnx dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickachu

Loving ur ss!

U have written it beautifully!
Continue soonnn

thnk u ash ki pickachu😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...amazing yaar...i had fun while reading your story...yaaar pm me for next update and please update fast...please please..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys.. i m back wid my update...
AUTHOR'S NOTE

i thought of turning this into an ff but unfortunately my vacation is almost over..so i wud b finishing dis ss very soon. 😛 thank you very much for ur lovely comments. love u all loads🤗 and sorry 4 missing all d updates of other other os and ss. will definitely read them today n comment asap😛


CHAPTER : 3

BLOOMING RELATIONS

"Life introduces us to a million of people every new day. We never know who becomes our life and who becomes the reason of our life."

A chopper landed on the grounds of the temple turning everyone's attention to the people stepping out of it. The three brothers stepped out of it one by one. They straight away went to meet their dadi and took her blessings. She inquired her eldest grandson about his unreachable phone while he just looked everywhere but her. Omkara caught his eyes and shook his head slightly " So you broke it again." Rudra and Dadi went wide eyed before counting the number of phones her broke "78..Bhaiya its your 78th phone. Sorry...not is was..but still how do you manage breaking so many phones." Dadi slapped Rudra's cheeks slightly "What happened Shivaay? What made you break your phone this time child? A dog came infront of your car or your tyre got punctured?" Shivaay just sighed and said that he got angry on his driver. Saying so he just left the place as soon as possible avoiding further questions. Although he thought that he convinced his family but unknown to he left his family smirking behind. They definitely understood that it was not the driver who angered him lest he would not have been standing here at the temple bringing in the other required things for the aarti. They thought of asking the driver when Priyanka came running to them. Her state made Omkara and Rudra worried thinking someone scared her but to their surprise she called Vishal, Shivaay's manager and quickly took away his phone showing what he got for them. At first the trio frowned but at the very next instant Rudra fell down on the floor shocked and Dadi face palmed herself. While Omkara's eyes bulged out from its pockets. They gulped hard and looked at Vishal signalling him to explain. By now they were very much sure that this was the very reason for the death of Shivaay's 78th phone. Vishaal narrated the whole thin in one breath shocking the wits out them. Omkara thought if that girl would have been here at the Maha aarti then it would have been much more interesting to watch Shivvay interact with her yet again. But to his surprise Rudra came to him in a knowing look which earned him a light wack on his head. "O, please think silently. We can hear whatever you are thinking." Rudra pouted and turned his head only to increase the shock.

Here, Anika was made the incharge of the catering at the Maha aarti and she entered the temple only to hit against the only man she wished to never see again. Shivvay was busy checking his new phone when he hit againt a soft body. He looked up to see when he frowned lokking at her. Oblivious to them four pairs of eyes were looking at them waiting for their reaction. Rudra and Omkara were very much sure that they both would again have a fight while Dadi and Priyanka knew that they would not even talk to each other. Shivvay sighed heavily while Anika muttered something inaudible under her breath and turned their respective faces to the other side, walking away with an i don't care look making Om and Rudra's jaws drop and Priyanka and dadi smile.

Somewhere in a dark room a shadow of a girl emerged out speaking over the phone while another shadow of a girl popped out behind a tent.

Voice 1: Ya, I managed to enter the Maha arti. I hope you know your work.

Voice 2: Don't worry. Have I ever disappointed you?

Voice 1: I know. Make sure you get all the required information.

Voice 2: Done. But why do you sound tensed? Is everything alright?

Voice 1: No I am fine. Its just that i feel something is going to happen here tonight.

Voice 2: Don't worry. I know you can manage everything. By the way what happened at the temple? What is the result of "Stalking Shivaay Singh Oberoi."?

Voice 1: Don't ask. He is just another arrogant rich idiot who thinks everything can be bought with money. Though its not his fault, he is born and brought up in such an environment.

Voice 2: Ya but I heard that he was way too affected.

Voice 1: Whatever. I just don't care. Just keep an eye on the temple. Is that clear?

Voice 2: Yes Boss. And what about the other two?

Voice 1: I am yet to find out that. But what about your research. Did you get any information?

Voice 2: Yes, there is something dark about these Oberois. They are hiding something very big.

Voice 1: I knew it. And I am very sure, today we are going to get some clue in this Maha arti. Ok now, we'll talk later.

Voice 2: Ok. I will keep an eye on the temple and inform you if I find anything suspicious.

Voice 1: Be very careful. Don't get yourself caught in any suspicious activity. Got it?

Voice 2: Yes Boss.




Scene Shifts to the Aarti place

The Maha aarti was just about begin but Tej paced up and down in worry which didn't go unnoticed by Priyanka.

Here Anika was busy with her catering when her phone rang. She went to the other corner of the temple to order the remaining items whe she again encoutered with Shivaay. Shivaay too was on phone and did not see her coming. He was about to say something when Anika walked past him not bothered to even spare him a glance. Shivaay who was known for his charm was left stunned yet again by the same girl. He couldn't digest the fact that a random girl just walked past him without paying attention. He muttered something under his breath and walked off oblivious to the two beings standing behind him.

Om and Rudra followed Shivaay to talk about the temple incident and were left dumbfounded gaping at the scenario that just took place. Within a second they ran to Pinky informing her about the incident. Here Pinky was left astound at the mere thought the girl who challenged her son every now and then. Priyanka shared the video of the temple just few minutes ago which shocked the whole family and now the same girl ignored her son and walked away. Impressed would be an understatement, Pinky was way to fascinated by Anika and wanted to know more about her. Here Janvi sent both her sons to chat with Anika to understand her better after hearing the whole story from Pinky.

ok guys i end it here as of now. do leave ur comments.

@Shail: sorry dear i couldn't reply to ur comment earlier. love u
Edited by Mihika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...now all want to know about Anika...Anika is one of the voice right? Nice update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Wonderful. Read it in one go. Wish it turned into a ff, but will be happy with a ss. Good luck with school and please continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so all wants to knw abt anika
Those two woman talking on phone.One of them was anika i guess
Anyways nice part
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Awesome would be an understatement 😛 this is just beyond that 😊 keep writing more ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shail_j15

Wow...now all want to know about Anika...Anika is one of the voice right? Nice update...

thnx dear😛yup all lv anika😆 btw i don knw abt any of d voice...😎

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