I am scared of...? Anshi OS

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Hello people, Soumya here. So I saw yesterday's precap and that made me write this. First it was only the precap scene but then I ended up writing a huge one shot instead. Also this one has hindi dialogues which I usually avoid since it is hard for readers to understand plus many of my previous works' readers used to ask me to translate them as many of them were not hindi speaking people. But the dialogues are fun only in hindi so I just wrote it as such. So just in case you do not understand anything in the story please feel free to ask me about it.

I am scared of...?

As Shivay walked out of his room he bumped in to his badi ma. He immediately caught her to steady her.

"are you okay?" he asked concerned.

"yes yes. Main thik hoon." Jhanvi replied with a smile. But when she looked up at him she saw the worry on his face. "kuch baat hai Shivay?"

Shivay, who was thinking about something, looked at her and shook his head slightly, "kuch nahi badi maa."

She gave him a motherly smile and put her hand on his shoulder.

"Shaadi ki wajah se na? Tia ke saat kuch jhagda hua hai?"

"no. it's nothing like that." Shivay said quickly.

"I know. shaadi ki tayariyon mein kaisa lagta hai ek ladki ko. As her to be husband tumhe usse thoda special feel karvana chahiye Shivay." Jhanvi said remembering her own wedding days. "kabhi kabhi unkahi batein hi aage ja kar chubti hai aur rishtey bikhar jatey hai." She continued sadly.

Shivay looked at her pained face and felt bad. He didn't want to see her sad but he also couldn't do anything for her. so instead he tried to lift her spirits up. "you are right badi ma. Main Tia ke liye kuch special karta hoon."

Jhanvi smiled at him and lightly caressed his cheek. He just smiled back at her.

Rudra was annoyed. He had gone to his Bhaiya to spend some time with him. but instead his bhaiya had sent him down to tell Tia to come to his room. Like hell he would. If he could help it he would not let that lady baba' enter the mansion, forget his bhaiya's room.

He saw his dadi around the corner and walked up to her.

"dadi, shivay bhaiya ne usse apne kamre mein bulaya hain. Usse bata dijiye." Rudra said pouting.

"Usse kisse?" Dadi asked confused. Rudrajutted his head to the side still looking at the floor.

Just as Dadi looked up Tia walked away from there leaving Anika alone to look at all the materials that were ordered. Dadi smiled, confused at why Rudra was acting like a child just to tell her this. But before she could ask him he walked away from there dramatically depressed. She sighed. no point trying to make sense of her youngest grandson's antics. She walked up to Anika and told her to go to Shivay's room.

When Anika walked into the room it was dark except for a few candles. Her heart sped up a bit but she walked in following the candles. Just as she reached the white curtains the breeze blew in causing all the candles to go off. She stopped. Her heart clenched. she was scared.

Shivay walked into the moonlight as soon as he felt her presence in the room. He had planned a candle light dinner but since this was the first time he had ever done anything like this he hadn't accounted for the breeze. Well didn't actually matter.

He walked close to her and put his arms around her. he felt her stiffen. He had surprised her. her body was slightly shivering but he assumed it was thanks to the shock. He kissed her hair lighly and said, "I know tumhe lagta hai ki mujhme emotions nahi hai. Par aisa nahi hai. I just don't express myself."

And then he stopped surprised at his own words. Why did he say that? Tia was not the one who had accused him of being emotionless. It was Anika. So why was he bringing this up now? his hand without his knowledge went over hers and he covered them. He was taken aback by how cold her hands were. And she was like wood in his hands. That was so unlike her.

Anika had felt someone wrap his arms around her and she felt her worst nightmares come to life. He fear of dark was more for the creatures of the dark she assumed were lying in wait to attack her. and now that creature had caught her. She stopped breathing. And then she felt a light kiss on her hair and a voice that should have made her angry yet it made her feel relief. It was not a monster who had caught her. and then she frowned. Hadn't she always said that he was one? so why was she feeling so safe in his arms now?

She heard him continue, "I know these last few days maine tumhare saat thik nahi kiya hai. But tumhe toh pata hai ki mein apne kaam ko humesha first priority deta hoon. Plus kisine meri family ko hurt kiya aur main usse punish na karun aisa ho nahi sakta."

Those words instantly lifted the paralysis that had settled on her brain in a second. Why was he hugging her? why was she letting him hug her? what in the world was happening?

"mr Shivay Singh Oberoi mujhe chodiye."

His eyes snapped open. She had felt so small and perfect in his arms. She had felt like she belonged there. He had felt calmness in his heart with her satiating presence there. And now he knew she was not who he thought she was, She was Anika.

He pushed away from her. what in the world was she doing here? How dare she come here? How dare she have such an effect on him? she was not supposed to affect him at all. Then why did he feel the urge to pull her back in his arms?

Anika felt the push and she almost lost her balance. The lack of physical contact with him brought back the gripping fear of the dark.

As Shivay pushed her he stepped into the dark to try and hide the yearning that he was sure was clearly visible on his face. the yearning to touch her again. he saw her lose her balance and then straighten herself and stretch out her hand towards him. he took another step back.

Anika looked around trying to adjust her sight to the dark. She was searching for him. the only other person breathing in this dark apart from her. right now she didn't care about the fact that she didn't like him. all she needed was an assurance that she was not alone. Alone in this dark.

He saw her frantically look around her, her hand moving around trying to hold on to something solid. He saw her eyes, once full of courage and determination, now gleaming in the moonlight with unshed tears of fear. Her hands had started trembling again. her fingers turning cold. Her face had lost its colour.

He didn't like it. He didn't like to see her like this. Something pulled at his heartstrings and he put his own hand out without being aware of it and caught her outstretched hand.

The moment she felt his touch she relaxed. His hand which was holding on to her was visible to her and now as she followed it she saw him too. Thought his face was still hidden in the dark but she knew it was him.

He saw her relax. He relaxed too. He saw her try to look at his face so he turned. He realised that it was the dark that had scared her. so he pulled her along with him guiding her around the tables and sofas he was used to by now and opened the door. And she followed him without a sound. As soon as they came in to the light he let go of her hand. He heard her breath. Rather she was panting. He hadn't known that the dark scared her so much.

Slowly Anika's breathing came back to normal and she frowned. Why had he called her here? To scare the living daylights out of her. she glared at his back.

Shivay was still standing with his back to her. he couldn't believe that this single girl could make him feel so many emotions in just a few seconds of time. emotions he was not aware of. He closed his eyes.

"so tumhe andhere se dar lagta hai?" it was more of a statement then a question.

Anika felt a tick on her head. Had he done all of this just to test whether the dark scare her or not?

She replied with venom, "kyun? Dar sirf aapko lag sakt hai? Meri chameli se?"

"tumhari what?" Shivay asked turning around totally flabbergasted. He saw her signal to her foot with her eyes and rolled his eyes, "oh right, tumhari sandal."

""chappal" she said with emphasis. "isse chappal kahte hai."

"tum isse chameli kehti ho." He stated without emotion.

"meru baat alag hai. Aapke liye ye chappal hai." She said crossing her arms and jutting out her chin.

"dekho tum..." he said as he pointed his finger at her face. but stopped when he saw her focus her attention to his finger and then she narrowed her eyes.

"ye aap bar bar mujhe apnni ungli kyun dikhate rehte hai? Mujhe aapki ye ungli dekhkar itna ghussa aat hai, inta ghussa aata hai ki man karta hai apke gadi ke sheeshe ki tarah isse bhi tod doon."

Shivay immediately pulled back his finger. His reaction made Anika smile but she controlled it. But Shivay saw her trying to hid her smile and his eyes narrowed.

"dariye mat. Aapki ungli nahi todungi. Agar ungli nahi hogi toh aap bade bade papers par sign kaise karenge. Aise toh aap bhuke mar jayenge. Aur main kuch logon ki tarah dusron ke pet pe lat nahi marti." She said giving him a pointed look.

"tum zyada smart maat bano samajhi. I can sweep the floor with you if I wanted to."

Anika looked at him confused. "aap angrezi jhade bina koi bhi baat nahi keh saktey kya?"

"Angrezi kya?" he asked puzzled.

"Jhdna. Hindi samjh mein nahi aati."

"tum jo bolti ho who hindi nahi hai." He said getting angry.

"par aap jo bolte hai who toh angrezi hai. Angrez chale gaye par apna billa yahi chod gaye. Who bhi kanji aankhown wala." She said more to herself than him. but he heard her.

"dekho tum.." but he stopped at the last moment from pointing his finger at her.

Anika again looked at him amused. She put her head a little closer to him and asked softly, "aap mujhse darte hai kya?"

Shivay fumbled,. "main... main tumse kyun darrunga. Tum darti ho. Andhere se." he said trying to put her in her place.

Anika narrowed her eyes at him and said, "kyun sirf aapko dar lag sakta hai. Jaise ki paani se."

"mujhe paani se dar..." and then the glass of water hitting his face flashed across his eyes and he flinched at the memory. He looked at her and saw her trying to hide a smirk. He gritted his teeth.

"tum.." he pointed his finger at her.

"phir se?" she asked him exasperated. "kitni bar kahun ki apni ungli apne pas rakhiye nahi toh.."

"tum mujhe threaten kar rahi ho?" he asked.

"kyun dhamkiyan sirf aap hi de sakt hai? Main tumhe tabha kar dunga, main tumhara tender chin lunga, main tumhara ghar karid lunga, main tumhe karid lunga, main tumhari chappal kahrid lunga."

"chappal" he said confused and disgusted.

"dekhiye, aap ki tarah fokat nahi hoon main. Kam karna padta hai mijhe. Billu ki shaddi bhi toh karani hai." She said with laughter in her voice.

Before Shivay could retort, she had walked past him.

And here I end it. There is another thing which I wanted to write but I'll put that in another OS. It will be Rudra and Anika centric with Shivay and Omkara in it too. So first tell me how this was. Was it okay? Did the hindi suck? Should I write the next one with hindi dialogues too?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it would love it if something like this happens in the episode i dnt mind the hindi dialogues it makes sense to why u want to be in hindi as it will sound better in hindi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was nice. Please do write more.
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🤣 hilarious babes.
superb👍🏼
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super nice I could see dis happen felt surreal ...do write on ani rudra aayu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg! What do you do to me?
Now I am having really high expectations from the show.
It was that terrific.
I just L.O.V.E.D every bit of it.
Rudra and Dadi, love you guys for this.
AnShi - What should I say? They were perfect to me. Their banters are what makes them AnShi.
Haha, Chameli did more than what needed to be done. Loved their dialogues overall.
This was really fun to read.
Thankyou for this amazing piece of update! 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant interpretation of the precap
And I personally prefer Hinglish narrations
Write more
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved every bit of this story..
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That was amazing. Nicely written.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yo, Soumya! A new AnShi OS by you! 😳
Will be back, soon.

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