AnShi SS: Fanaah.. Tere Pyaar Mein. (last part-pg11 *COMPLETE* - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
I just lovveeedd it
its amazing how Shivaay is just being himself with Anika without any ego or arrogance😊
I think when Shivaay proposes Anika on the story you will imagine yourself in Anikas place😆
Loved it❤️
Thanks for the pm
Jaldi update karo na😭

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
superb upt
loved it
waiting for shivaay's proposal
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Read it in a go! Suspense se seedha romance...wah wah!
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Aw baby girl.
*offers a tissue box*
Don't cry!
See, I promised to read and review and that is exactly what i'm doing!

Often, I cannot help but compare the writing styles of people in this forum! And though everyone has their own flare, I adore your dramatic one the most!
I mean of course, Shivaay and Anika are dramatic, bold, intense and passionate and what not! But the mere way that you spice it up is super good!

I loved the chapters!
And since you have a great skill for imagination, I am dying to see how Shivaay proposes to Anika!
*grins*

Update soon lovely!

XOXO
~Red
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
ch3.

Annika went to the kitchen to make evening tea for everyone. She liked taking care of everyone. She was looking for Shivaay. She asked Omkara about Shivaay. But,he replied in a no indicating that he doesnt know.

Annika went to her room to freshen when suddenly her phone rung. It was from Shivaay..

''Aap kahaan hai Shivaay?''

''Mere room mein aao.. Kuch baat karni thhi tumse.'' Shivaay replied and cut the call.

Annika went towards Shivaay's room. As she entered the room,it was pitch dark and was dimly lighted with scented candles. The view of the room was looking really beautiful in the moonlight. The moonlight added a perfect creamy glow on her face.

She came inside and stood under the chandelier.Suddenly,rose petals showered on her. She looked so pretty.. She closed her eyes in bliss.. She twirled in happiness..

She heard some noise coming from the pool area.Sound of water splashing. She stepped inside towards the pool area and what she saw,blew her mind away.

Shivaay stood in the middle of the pool,bare bodied.Her eyes went wide and she turned the other side and closed her eyes. Blood ran upto her cheeks as she blushed a lot.

She felt her waist being snaked by two cold arms.She shivered at those touches. Butterflies fluttered in her stomach. Suddenly,Shivaay turned her around and she hit against his chiselled chest.Their eyes locked instantly and it spoke volumes in that silence.

Shivaay leaned down and pecked her forehead and Annika closed her eyes in bliss.Shivaay could feel her lips curl into a beautiful smile.Now,Shivaay pecked her eyes and let his lips linger there for some moments.

Shivaay picked her up in his arms and went inside the pool.He carefully made her stand infront of him.. Her eyes lowered because of his intensr gaze. He pulled her much more closer to him and proposed to her very sensuously.

''Mujhe tum saato janam keliye chahiye ho.. Kya tum mujhe haq dogi tumhare saath saari zindagi bitane keliye? Kya tum mujhe woh ahem haq dogi tumhe pyaar karne keliye? Kya tum mujhe haq dogi tumhe Mrs.Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi banane keliye? I love you,Annika.''

Annika was in tears after the proposal. She felt so loved and cared. She grazed her fingers over his face and joined their foreheads and replied, ''Ijazat hai aapko..''

With the reply,Shivaay smiled from his heart and hugged Annika tightly and lined her neck with wet kisses. Annika was losing herself in his romantic touches but she had to stop because she didnt want to cross the line.

''Shivaay.. Hum yeh sab shadi ke baad continue karenge,please.. I know,aap mujhse bohut pyaar karte hai.. Par,main..''

''Main samaj sakta hu,Annika.. Aur main tumhe force nahi karunga.. I just wanted to propose you and make you feel happy and special.. And i achieved your smile which indicates that you are really happy. Mujhe tumhari khushi se barkar aur kuch nahi chahiye.'' Shivaay replied and pecked her forehead.

''Thank you Shivaay mujhe samaje keliye. Mujhe aapko ek gift dena thha.. Aakhein band kariye aap..'' Annika replied.

Shivaay closed his eyes and smiled.Annika leaned forward and pressed her lips against his,turning it into a passionate kiss. Shivaay was shocked but responded to the kiss and played along.

After they broke the kiss,Annika hid herself in Shivaay's protective embrace. Shivaay smiled at her antics.

Precap: Haldi of Shivaay and Annika.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
awesome update
wow anshi proposal was beautiful 🤗
awe anshi shared their first kiss 😳
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
☺️!
Loved the way shivaay proposed anika!
Waiting for the next part
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Ufff!! Kya batao Anika...it was simply perfect...
What a hott proposal.. Shivaay was mindblowing...
Nd Anika kissed him...that superb😳
Loved it.
Love Sharmi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
koi window kholo plese..
i need to breathe..hawa aane do ...
yaha atmosphere bohot hot ho gaya hai...
saans lena mushkil ho gaya hai..
yeh kar diya Anika madam
aapne to meri saasein hi cheen li

what a beautiful update
aur likho jaldi 😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
uff uff uff
what a part anika
so hot proposal man 😳😳
so hot
shivaay shirtless
i cant comment anymore
after reading the scene😃

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