Dark On Me (Shivaay&Anika - One Shot) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Red u r an awsum writer!!! loved evry work of urs and this one is no different!!!
absolutely amazing and very captivating... loved it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh god it was so heart wrenching...😭
I almost cried..😭u ve beautifully penned it down..
Love ur writings red.. u r one my favourites...
Couldnt see a Broken Shivaay..never..
Edited by lucky_princess - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful
Heart wrenching update
You made me cry 😭 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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*sigh*
You sadistic woman...you cook up ways to make us cry at 3:00AM in the night!
Obnoxious Devil!!!!!!
I am crying now...see what you have done. I am sobbing and my sister is giving me wide-eyed looks like I should be drafted to the mental asylum😭😭😭

This was so intense. At first I was confused as too who died and then when it became clear I felt bad (for the first time for Shivaay)...it was so heartbreaking.
Anika was so sure that he will have both his wife and son instead he got two corpses and painful memories for the entire lifetime.

This was a terrific writeup...I applaud you👏

*still crying pathetically*

Niki
Edited by mistofshadows - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
you made me cry,Red..
it was beautiful and emotional as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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if u were planning to make me cry...then u have succeeded
it was heart wrenching😭
but it was also nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
the one-shot made me cry..very hard hitting...well written...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Too overwhelming!
U write dope stuff...
P.S- sorry for commenting once in a while as I'm still a newbie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was really emotional OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Whoa!

Now, I feel like a ruthless spawn of the wickedest demon in the deepest pits of the Underworld. I had to get through all your comments three times just to count the number of people who cried. And then I thought, Blah! Let me just count who did not cry and that would be easier!

Trust me lovelies, I am not enjoying your tears, I am just letting my pride swell a bit.

I don't even know where to start.
*offers a tissue box*
Wipe your tears, cupcakes, Red hates tears!
*sweat-drops*
I am the definition of NONSENSE right now!

Fireflake, BookWormV, Sofna, Simplypriceless, sweetie_angel, lourel24, shail_j15, SanyaEterna, jarir2010, dimpled.smile, cuteariya
As far as I can see, I have sent a buddy request to all of you, or something of that sort. And that is the first way of telling you that I love you.
If I missed someone, please do send me one! I am waiting! *smiles*

Messi2, omertaxborgata, -Amri-
Thank you lovelies! Blessed be! Cheers!

vidya29
I love your rambles, fret not, dear! Wow, I'd catch that tear if I could, but I'll make up for that with a One Shot dedicated to you. Topic, please?

OlicityQueen
One funny girl you are, darling! *laughs* Of course, I'll write more and more and even more! Anything for you peeps!

lucky_princess
I know right! A broken Shivaay drives me insane! My, my, one of your favourites? Now that has got to be the best thing I heard all day! A One Shot for you too!

-Jamina, VidyutKiDeewani, srividhya68, MahaSrilu
Hold on to your tears, darlings! I promise to make you lovelies smile soon enough! And Red never breaks promises! Pinky Promise! *winks*

MysticRiver
I can't thank you enough! Your compliments always mean a lot to me and this one is the one I'll always remember. Coming from a person who bestows crisp compliments, I'm honored dearest!

iiROSIii
I feel you, girl! Being a newbie is the most annoying thing ever! Thank you for the compliment, though! Much love!

Niki
Such fury!
I'm burning up right now!
*hugs and strokes your head*
Hush, little one, it is alright! No one died!
We will definitely get to see a heartbroken Shivaay, though it might not be under the circumstances I create.
You always manage to get me all excited for your comments, darling! I literally scroll down at the speed of light to catch sight of your comments!
*hugs tighter*


XOXO
~Red


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