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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Grt.
What a twist yaar.
Shivaay working under Anika as a cook.
Good concept.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
all parts r amazing.read in one go.love love love it.dear u r in vacation,but if possible update plz.👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Hey

I just read all the 3 parts and I loved the concept
Awesome job
please continue soon😊


Thanks Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sumatra1234

Amazing!😃

are you going to continue it?


Thanks
Yes I am
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: srividhya68

sorry for late comments
awesome upt
shivaay is the best chef...so far in telly world😆
loved the upt
waiting to know whether anika will accept him as her chef or not
cont soon


No problem
I am glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: jarir2010

all parts r amazing.read in one go.love love love it.dear u r in vacation,but if possible update plz.👏👏


Thanks
Yes I will
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Thanks guys for the response to the previous chapter
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Chapter 4

"Cooking mein yeh baggad billa number one hai, kaunsa reason use karo isse bhagane mein," Annika thought to herself
"kya soch rahi ho", Shivaay brought her out of her thoughts
"You cook well but that's not all that is needed, main me yeh restaurant start bhi nahi kiya, I can only afford to give my cook 1000 rupees per month", Annika told him recollecting an incident where Shivaay told her that earned million in minutes.
"Okay, I am good with that", he said smiling making her mouth widen in shock.
"You got sold for very cheap Mr. Oberoi, app toh kahe rahe the aap mujhe kharedenge khud itne saste mein bik gaye.", Annika mocked him
"Kaise bataun tumhe tumne toh mujhe bohot phele khared liya hai bina koi paisa ke sirf tumhare sachai aur achai se", Shivaay thought to himself
"Ab aap kiss duniya mein kho gaye Mr.Oberoi.",Annika said clicking her fingers infront of Shivaay
"It's not Mr.Oberoi, just Shivaay, mujhe salary se problem nahi, tumhe meri cooking se problem nahi, phir tum maan kyun nahi leti I am the perfect cook for your restaurant", Shivaay replied
"Not so easily billu aap bataye aap kitchen mein so sakte hai, I mean sorry jaag sakte hai, actually wo ne restraunt mein koi security nahi hai agar kitchen se koi saman chori ho gaya, iss liye apko waha raat bahar rahena hoga", Annika told him mentally patting herself on the back as she so his confused expressions.
"Bas itni si baat that's great, by the way mere paas rehne ke liye ghar nahi hai, you made my work easier", Shivaay replied making Annika want to bang her head on the nearby wall.
"Baagad Billa apko kissi cheez se koi problem nahi hai kya", Annika asked extremely irritated
"Yeh kya laga kar rakha hai, kabhi Mr.Oberoi, kabhi billu, kabhi baggad billa, tum Shivaay nahi khe sakti mera naam lena itna mushkil nahi hai, jab dekho mere naam ko badalti rehti ho, chup kyun ho, Shiv-ay, can't you say just this much." Shivaay replied
"Shivaay", Annika called out surprising him and herself
"See that was easy, ab job ke barein mein baat kare, tumhare paas koi reason nahi hai mujhe reject karne ka aur aise sharton ke saath you won't get anyone else except me", replied Shivaay
"Akhri baar soch lijye It would be a tough task", Annika tried the last time make Shivaay back off
"Shayad tum bhul gayi mujhe mushkil kaam karne mein zyada maza aata hai", Shivaay replied back with confidence
"Okay, but you will not come infront of my eyes", Annika told him
"So I got the job", Shivaay asked her for which he got a positive nod from her.
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Art Studio

Shivaay stopped the rickshaw next to the art studio the lights were on that meant either Om was in or both Om and Rudra were in, however there was a possibility of Ishana being there with Om and he couldn't take a risk. He took out his phone to dials Om's number but kept it back thinking of the possibility someone else could pick it up. Taking a risk he knocked on the door once, he felt the door moving and stood on the other side so the person wouldn't see him.
"Who is that", Omkara's voice called out.
"Are you alone", Shivaay whispered
"Nahi,Rudra bhi hai, hum ne decide kiya tha ke hum aaj yaha milenge and why are you whispering", Omkara replied confused
"Stupid, Idiot, Annika ke bare mein soch kar tu sab bhul gaya", Shivaay mentally cursed himself
"Andar ajaa", Omkara called out disrupting Shivaay's thoughts
"Bhaiya", Rudra called out hugging Shivaay
"Tujhe kya hua", Shivaay asked confused at his brother's reaction while releasing himself from the hold.
"Maine apko bahut miss kiya, Maine apko itni der se nahi dekha", replied Rudra
"Hum kal raat ko toh ki mile the and now it is only four in afternoon it is not even 24 hours since we have been apart and you are getting this emotional", Shivaay teased Rudra hitting him on the head.
"But it has been more than 12 hours and you didn't even call", pouted Rudra childishly making both his elder brothers smile
"Shivaay bata woh Annika ke restaurant ka kya hua, tu wahan kafi Der tak tha", asked Omkara
"Shivaay Singh Oberoi kuch soche aur wo pura na ho, is that possible", replied Shivaay trying to control his happiness.
"Tu itna over excited kyun ho raha hai", replied Omkara smirking while keenly observing his elder brother
"Over excited main kahan hua over excited.", Shivaay replied fumbling at his brother's sudden question
"Shivaay you were in eight standard, and the first term results you stood first in class that day and you were very happy, when you came home choti maa asked you alot about what happened but you gave her no reply because you wanted to tell maa about this first as she had helped you but she was out attending a charity function. Only I knew about it since we were in the same class, I observed you the whole time that day till mom came back in the evening, your legs had been tapping the ground in the same manner as you are doing now.", Omkara reminded Shivaay and pointed towards his feet.
"Why would I be over excited?", argued Shivaay
"Waise bhaiya mujhe bhi lag raha hai ke kuch gadbad hai", Rudra said narrowing his eyes towards Shivaay
"What's wrong with the two of you", Shivaay said nervously as his younger brothers looked at him suspiciously cornering him to the nearest wall
"Tu sidhi tarhe batayega ke nahi", warned Omkara
"O mujhe nahi lagta bhaiya kuch batane wale hai", Rudra spoke
A second later they began to tickle him making him loose his balance and trip on the floor soon the younger two were above him and Shivaay wasn't able to retaliate even if he wanted too. He knew there was only one way out
"I love her", he managed to speak between fits of laughter, his response startled the younger ones and stopped tickling their elder brother

Soon they were all sitting on the floor with their legs crossed
"You love who?", asked Omkara just to make sure that there is no confusion
"Annika", Shivaay replied blushing slightly
"Bhaiya aap blush kar rahe hai", Rudra asked unbelievably
"Annika ne Shivaay Singh Oberoi ko blush karna sikhaya. I am impressed", Om continued teasing
"This is why I wasn't telling you guys any thing", Shivaay said faking anger
"Okay aaj bata aaj hua kya", Omkara asked him and Shivaay gave him the details
"I know wo mujh se naraz hai and I deserve it main yeh expect nahi kar raha hun ke woh mujhe maaf kare ya mujh se pyaar kare", Shivaay spoke
"Bhaiya aap ko pyaar bohot fast nahi hua app usske ghar char ghanton ke liye gaye the aur itna deep love hogaya mujhe laga tha ke fast love mera style hai", Rudra spoke up.
"Mujhe toh usse pichle ek saal se pyaar..."Shivaay bit his tongue as his brothers looked at him accussingly
"Ek saal se aur humein kuch nahi pata", Omkara asked smirking
"Even you hid about Ishana", Shivaay replied
"Mein app dono ko apni love life ki sari details deta hun aur aap mujhe apne love ke important bate bhi nahi batate", Rudra said in childish anger.
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I know this chapter isn't that long but the part I wrote just know got deleted and a really annoyed to right the same thing again so I am only posting this much. Sorry about that. Will be waiting for your reviews.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally shivaay confessed that he love anika. Wow waiting for the time when he will confess in front of anika. Obbros are so loving and caring.
Edited by Sparklle801 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Lovely... Can't wait for romance to bloom...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
This is amazing..omg..shivaay accepted he loves anika since one year omg..childish rudra.. Now wish for anshi scenes yaar.. Amazing update

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