|| Ishkara SS : An Artist and his Muse || Chapter 5 Updated Page 8 - Page 5

You are a gem of brilliance!

god gurl it was so damn amazing...😳😳
i just loved it to moon and back
om's last dilogue
god gurl u left me speechless😳😳

Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef

This is sooo good. Lets hope Omkara & Ishaana converse soon. It is getting really interesting. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

You are a gem of brilliance!

Hello there...just went through your latest update and couldn't help from penning an appreciation.

The way you went through it was sheer brilliance.

Ishaana, despite her hurt, still feels something for Om; that was definite. She realizes that she fell in love with an illusion for she didn't know the complete him. She didn't know him descending into darkness and it hurts her to realize that.

But as Fate would have it, her curiosity rises and she brings the first link alive between them. She goes to his exhibition and the wheel rolls.

Omkara is another dynamic. He is literally drowning under the guilt and feeling of intense self-loathing combined with love for her and that resulted in him taking the way out to obliviousness through alcohol.

I loved the Tej-Om scene. He was way indifferent and it showed how indifferent he had become to Tej's taunts after realizing tht inspite of running away, he committed his father's vile actions.

The last part was brilliant.

Loved it.

Niki

Hey dnt say like this that few readers are reading this story...i am damn sure that most ishqbaazians are reading this story...ur story is truly beautiful...it has an enigmatic touch to it...i don't read omkara- centric stories but urs is one of the best stories in ib forum...I am so sorry that I didn't wrote any comments...but I will write in future definitely...i am sometimes a lazy person...please continue soon...eagerly waiting for next update...

Dear Rani,

Beautiful chapters 3 and 4. 👏

Chapter 3:

I loved how you brought about this much anticipated meet. You unveiled it so, so poignantly and elegantly. Hats off.

The first part from Om's POV, his regrets and the memories of the love, the relationship, how it developed, how deeply and madly he fell! I loved how you took the story into a flashback, I could so imagine it happening in front of my eyes. Then the interlude - they meet, he apologizes and walks away, once again - no explanations nothing. And a beautiful glide to Ishaana's POV - her thoughts and memories brought in so brilliantly. 👏

And oh crap! I never thought it would be along these lines, he cheated on her? Man, I love that you haven't put your Om on pedestal. I like this fallible guy with his mistakes, I like the fact that he has owned up to it and has a darker shade to him. 😊He was so absolutely in love with Ishaana and on the side he was falling in the dark pits of drugs. And that oh so beautiful afterglow of their lovemaking in Ishaana's flashback. It was beautifully agonizing. She waited for him to come back🥺 with explanations, any reason, anthing at all. I loved the fact that their relationship ended so abruptly without any explanations or goodbyes, it leaves scope for interaction, possible reconciliation with slow and steady building of a trust filled relation - I can't wait!😉

Chapter 4

She is curious about him. I really really like how you execute your thoughts so brilliantly into words. This whole chapter answered some of the questions of what happened to Om? what has his life been like? An Overdose, an art gallery. Ishaana can't stop herself from seeing what it was that she was missing out about him, what was the real Om. That brilliant gallery scene was awesome. Her thoughts, her questions, her confusion. Loved it!

The whole Om-Tej scene killed it! It was a jaw dropping read! Dil Khush Kar diya!!!
Please update soon. Waiting eagerly. 😊

Love,
V😊

The last part wherein Om made Tej look like shit was 👏 thank god u didn't make this story revenge oriented as it would be more predictable... waiting for your next update 😃 ⭐️ also pls do pm me for the next update 😊

Originally posted by: abshcool

god gurl it was so damn amazing...😳😳
i just loved it to moon and back
om's last dilogue
god gurl u left me speechless😳😳

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope

res.

*edited*

Starting off with Ishaana's thoughts, it is so well written and so relatable. How she feels bad and guilty when it came to Rohan. She wanting to dig into Om's life. Many do this. It might not be through exhibitions, it's mosy through FB😆. anyways, you have kept it realistic and I like that.

The way the works at the exhibition was described...mindblowing. 👏👏 Loved every bit of it.

AniKara is so adorable. I could totally imagine it and that's the best part. Your chapters just play like a movie. TejKara was brilliant and wel thought out. I especially like the earth and sky reference that Tej used when shivay tried to defend.

Awesome ending. Om's reply and him calling Teja papa. Love the idea and the dialogs👏

upd8 soon😊

Originally posted by: Raniaa3

Thank you! :D means so much that you left a comment behind!

u r welcome...😳😳
honestly this SS has really caught my attention
i love to read all ishkara writings
but there are only a few
which has clearly got me hooked
urs is definitely one of them
the way u hv penned this up and described each and every detail is worth praising...👏👏👏


BTW when will u update
am waiting for it eagerly...😳😳😃