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littlesmile

@littlesmile

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Your an amazing writer.Generally I.dont read fan fiction but today I was bored so gave it a try.I must say this is soo impressive ⭐️ You writing has soo much depth and I can connect with it and fee the happenings.please continue.I m eagerly waiting for next part.

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Raniaa3

@Raniaa3

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mistofshadows
This was seriously a shock!
Bomb Phor diya!!!

Omie cheated on Ishaana with her roommate? Yaar you are the first writer that is making me take Omie in a negative light!
My Goodness...my heart is still thumping madly.
The plot was so good...and the descriptions so realistic that I could not bear to turn my eyes till I finished it off.
And I am hungering for more Btw!
And Om really loved her. *sigh*
And she loved him too...but he left without any explanation or apology *bangs the head on the wall*
And now she is engaged.

I want to read more...plzzz

Niki

Was so nervous posting this chapter, wasn't sure how people would take Om cheating. But my point is that if we can accept that he is drug addict, we should also accept that he is capable of other things too. And thats what i am trying to look into this story. I am glad u are enjoying it, i only hope that you like the future chapters as well.

:D Thankyou

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Raniaa3

@Raniaa3

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: coolove
This chapter was very good in allowing character development to occur. Om characterisation is quite accurate to someone from his stature but I still believe ishaana deserves more scenes as it would be good to see it from her point of view. Final note keep writing and do pm when you do.

Thank you so much for your feedback :D

Hope u like the next one!

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Raniaa3

@Raniaa3

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: KRITII
Ohh noo
Why did omie cheat on Ishana 😭
I hope he did not.
Waiting to read what exactly happened and has brought them in this position .
Please pm me :)

Thank you for such lovely comments, really made me smile! Hope u like the next update! And yes sure will! :D

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Lekha

@Echo.of.Hope

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

chapter two was a good intrduction of Ishana's life. I ike the fact that you didn't make a Rohan an abusive finace. I want to know how this one goes.

Ishana's analysis of baby oberoi was well written and Rudr's actions to Ishana is a nice idea.

Finally, the change in Om was fit into the chapter really well. Smoothe ending.

Now, I'm going to read the next part.

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Lekha

@Echo.of.Hope

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Wow! an intense chapter three. I loved it.

The flashback was perfect. Not too many details and not too little either.
Ishkara meet was well described and Tej was so in character. You really know how to maintain the flow of the story.

Recently I've formed the habit of giving downright frank feedback about any writing. So, I've become choosy about what I read. I don't want to read something where I know it requires a lot of improvement and then hurt the writer's feelings with my comments. Not all writers like constructive criticism. So I read yours and I got hooked. God plot and brilliant writing. Keep it up and don't forget to PM me.

P.S. Waiting to see you on wattpad and read your stories there too

Lekha

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Hey dear...😊
This is nimi...i m a NAUCian...(Fan of Nisha Aur uske Cousins) i m not a regular viewer of this show...
One of my friend of k khandaan(echo of hope) told me abt yr writing skills...so i m here to read ur work..
U r more than amazing
👏
Ur command over the language ur word selection was brilliant...
I m in love with yr writing...
Keep writing like this and keep shining... 😳

Now coming to yr story...i hv read part 1
Begining of the story was awesome😊 the way u describe the bonding between son mother duo was fantastic...i really love all the detailed that u give about small small things...like about sculpture moulding and all... 👏

Will read part 2 and 3 soon n do pm me... 😊

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Raniaa3

@Raniaa3

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: littlesmile
Your an amazing writer.Generally I.dont read fan fiction but today I was bored so gave it a try.I must say this is soo impressive ⭐️ You writing has soo much depth and I can connect with it and fee the happenings.please continue.I m eagerly waiting for next part.

Thank you so much, the fact that you're not a regular reader and you still thought to comment on my work really means so much to me. I wish you like the next chapter as well! :D

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Raniaa3

@Raniaa3

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope
chapter two was a good intrduction of Ishana's life. I ike the fact that you didn't make a Rohan an abusive finace. I want to know how this one goes.

Ishana's analysis of baby oberoi was well written and Rudr's actions to Ishana is a nice idea.

Finally, the change in Om was fit into the chapter really well. Smoothe ending.

Now, I'm going to read the next part.

I was very strict about not making Rohan abusively or blatantly evil, he has normal shades of a human. I am glad you like that about the story, really love such amazing feedback! :D Thankyou!

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Raniaa3

@Raniaa3

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope
chapter two was a good intrduction of Ishana's life. I ike the fact that you didn't make a Rohan an abusive finace. I want to know how this one goes.

Ishana's analysis of baby oberoi was well written and Rudr's actions to Ishana is a nice idea.

Finally, the change in Om was fit into the chapter really well. Smoothe ending.

Now, I'm going to read the next part.

I always wait to read your comments on my work, can't thank you enough! Also thank you for spreading my story , it really means a lot!