~:DEEWANI:~ Omkara os - Page 2

I really like the way you write about the deewani you have left the room for viewer's choice as they can imagine anyone in her place... I really like the way Om came ask and the stunned her that he knew that she was drooling lovely OS

gosh!! This was lovely 😳 Loved this so much *drooling*

Originally posted by: .Poorva.

Oh wow wow.. My first os to read in Ishqbaaz... Glad I choose this story.. I feel like I am the girl who is drooling Omkara.. I seriously wanna see this in story too..

Aww thank u..
Even m glad that u choose this one..
I imagined myself being the deewani

Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani

haaye rabba.. it was too good...
that intimate moment when Omie jaan asking name and that smile.. oh so lovely.

Thank ya..
He has a breath taking smile..

Originally posted by: KRITII

Res

Unres

Haaye Deewani Mastaani Ho gayii😳

Keep writing such stories❤️

Thank u..
Wii do

Originally posted by: Amreen...

To be honest... I was imagining myself in place of that deewani all the way. ☺️
What's beautiful OS... loved it 👏

Trust me when I say this...I literally imagined myself as deewani that's why I didn't name her anything 😆...

Thank ya buddy..
M glad

Originally posted by: pearl100

Hey Anshi lovely OS😃enjoyed reading it...plz do keep writing more. Looking forward to it. Till then take care.

Thank u..glad that u liked it..
Will try n write

good you gave me goosebumps while reading it.I just loved the way you expressed their emotions.Just loved it.

It's an Awesome OS

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

I really like the way you write about the deewani you have left the room for viewer's choice as they can imagine anyone in her place... I really like the way Om came ask and the stunned her that he knew that she was drooling lovely OS

I am glad that u liked it...
Aww thank u so much..