~:DEEWANI:~ Omkara os

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola deewanis.I am back with a yet another os on our Jatadhari Om😆.
This dedicated to all the fellow deewanis of om.NOT PROOF READ

DEEWANI

His hands were playing with the clay leading to the formation of yet another magnificent masterpiece.His molten chocolate orbs focusing only on that clay material,completely oblivious to his surroundings. He adjusted his glasses and i swear every single female present in that hall turned to look at him.Each one of them drooling over him.I was also one of them.Staring at him from afar.Omkara Singh Oberoi does that to you.

He turned his face to look here and there.I guess he sensed my blatant staring
Standing up from his chair,he flicked his hair off his face.Holy shit!! My breath was caught in my throat.I almost stopped breathing.His eyes roamed in every corner of that hall, searching for something or someone.

I was still staring at him but alas he didn't even spot me ,checking him out.Being invisible to him has its own difficulties, woe is me.He was the epitome of elegance, smooth as silk,effortless,impeccable and full of heart whereas i was clumsy and careless.

He moved his chair to a side and looked in my direction.His chocolate brown orbs staring directly at my ordinary jet black eyes.He strolled towards me ,taking purposely long strides.Freak, he is coming here.No No no.What should i do??.I was freaking from inside but my face held a calm and composed look.His orbs were staring at my soul.

I turned away ,all my confidence vanishing like vapours into thin air.
"Wait"
He spoke, his voice was gruff with a tinge of smugness in it.He noticed me!! I was jumping from inside.Yay!!.
"Yeah"
Arrogance oozed out of my voice.May we did share some same denominators.This trait was common between us.He looked here and there.
"This is weird"
He muttered to himself, weaving a hand through his zulfein.Oh my freaking god!!!.A part of me just died.
"What is weird?"
I asked ,curiosity at its peak.

"I just thought someone was staring at me"
He grumbled, scrunching up his nose.I have to get off this topic.How to tell him I was the one who was shamelessly checking him out.
"You are not the centre of attraction"
I sassed him off.This was the major problem with me Although i am gravitating towards him but my sarcastic attitude can never change.

"Sassy much.Girls these days"
He dramatically huffed.What??? Ok so i like him but this is unacceptable for me.I am known for sarcastic comeback ,short temper and laziness.
"Then why don't you go back to your stone age era"
I asserted,a string of rage lacing my voice.See shirt tempered.He smirked at me, a mischievous glint sparkling in his eyes.He put a step forward,a step closer to me and whispered
"If I went back to my era"
He quoted it with his finger and continued
"Then on whom would you drool"
With that he backed away.Holy shit!!! He knew that all along.No no no,this is so not happening.I can't loose,my ego doesn't allow me to do so.
"In your dreams"
I obnoxiously said, flicking off my flicks.A full blown smile graced his handsome features
"Different"
He commented.
"By the way.What's your name"
He chuckled.So straight forward and i was as straight as jalebi.
I step forward,close to his ear and whispered
"Deewani"
Stepping back from his personal space ,i continued
"Maybe its enough for you to know"
He stared at me and then a slow smile crept on his face
"One day you,yourself will tell me your name.Till then I am happy with Deewani"
He chimed in.A laughter erupted through me and I staggered away from there.Leaving him into his chain of thoughts with me being lost in his thoughts.
That was our first meet.
I was his Deewani.Om Ki Deewani.Maybe we'll have a story in future.Nah!! with him story is not possible,he will create a saga.

How was it??
A lame try on my behalf
Feel free to criticuze me
Love
Anshi
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...tejaswi... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg anshi it was a way too fab to control
no intimacy yet the convo raised my goosebumps

do write more sweetheart

kehte hai ye deewani mastani hogayi😆😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful os..
it was amazing..
the words described the emotions so perfectly..
i loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...tejaswi...

omg anshi it was a way too fab to control

no intimacy yet the convo raised my goosebumps

do write more sweetheart

kehte hai ye deewani mastani hogayi😆😳


Thank u Teju :)..
Glad that u liked it..
Will do..
Saari deewani mastani ho gyi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
Unres
Haaye Deewani Mastaani Ho gayii😳
Keep writing such stories❤️
Edited by KRITII - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh wow wow.. My first os to read in Ishqbaaz... Glad I choose this story.. I feel like I am the girl who is drooling Omkara.. I seriously wanna see this in story too..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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haaye rabba.. it was too good...
that intimate moment when Omie jaan asking name and that smile.. oh so lovely.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: adorableniti

beautiful os..
it was amazing..
the words described the emotions so perfectly..
i loved it..


Ooohhhooo...So glad that u liked it..
Awe..thank ya..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Anshi lovely OS 😃 enjoyed reading it...plz do keep writing more. Looking forward to it. Till then take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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To be honest... I was imagining myself in place of that deewani all the way. ☺️
What's beautiful OS... loved it 👏

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