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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
nice narration in the second part. eagerly waiting for the next part where Anika will open her mouth to shut Shivaay. I don't think she will take the blame so easily.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Part 3

Anika: aap kya ke rahe hai mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai.
Shivaay's mom: Yeh ladki abb jada bano mat. Main acche se janti hoon tum jaisi ladkiyon ko. Seedhe Seedhe batao kiske kehne par tumne the sab kiya hai.
Anika: aunty jee main Sach mein nahi janti hoon aap kis bare mein baat kar rahi hai.
Shivaay: accha toh Tumhe Sach mein nahi patta hai ki hum kis bare mein baat kar rahe hai. Main tum jaisi middle class ladkiyon ko bahot acche se janta hoon. Tumhare ghar par bachpann se Tumhe aisi hi parwarish milti hai ki kaise dusron ke kaam Kharab karna. Amir ladko ko apne jaal mein fasana aur bhi naa jaane kya kya sikhate hoge tumhe.
Anika: abb aap apni limits cross kar rahe hai Mr. Shivaay singh oberoi.
Shivaay: abhi toh main ne apni limits cross karni shuru bhi nahi ki hai aur tum Abhi se hi darr gayi.
Dadi: shivaay beta ek baar uski baat toh sunle. Kya patta iss sab mein uski galti naa ho aur hum wewajah hi bechari ko galat samjh rahe ho.
Om: shivaay tu thande dimaag se kaam le, iss tarah gusse mein liye hue faisle aksar galat hote hai.
Rudra: bhaiya aap ek baar uski baat toh sunlo.
Shivaay: enough is enough guys. Abb mujhe aur kuch naa toh sunana hai aur naa samjhna hai. Abb isse hi mere party Kharab karne ki sazza bhugtani padegi.
Anika: aap ka mtlb kya hai?
Shivaay: woh toh tumhe abhi patta chal jayenga.
Shivaay sabke samne se Anika ko khichkar kitchen ki side le jaa raha hota hai ki tabhi Priyanka kehti hai,
Priyanka: bhaiya anika ki baat toh ek baar sunlo. Last time bhi aapne usse bina kisi galti ke...
Shivaay: bas bahot ho gaya. Main ne kaha hai naa mujhe kisi ki koi baat nahi sunani hai. Abb agar koi hamare piche aaya toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.
Anika ro rahi thi aur kehti jaa rahi thi ki,
Anika: please aap mujhe batayiye main ne kiya kya hai.
Shivaay usse kitchen mein hath pakadkar khichte hue lata hai aur kehta hai ki,
Shivaay: Yeh cake tumne banaya hai. Am I right?
Anika: Haan.
Shivaay: toh abb khud isse khakar dekho, tumhe patta chal jayenga tumne kiya kya hai.
He forcefully makes her eat cake.
Anika: yukk, yeh kaise ho gaya.
Shivaay: yeh toh mujhe tumse puchna chahiye naa. Batao tumne janbhujh kar cake kyun Kharab kiya. Sirf Isliye kyunki tum mujhse badla lena chahti thi yaa sirf Isliye ki tumhe meri engagement party Kharab karni thi. Tumhe patta hai tumhari aukaat nahi hai ki tum yaha oberoi house ke aaspass bhi kadam rakho. Lekin Sirf Dadi ke kehne par main ne tumhe yaha aakar cake banane ka order diya aur tumne dikha dee apni lower middle class standard.
Anika: main sach keh rehi hoon mujhe nahi patta yeh sab kaise hua.
Shivaay hold her hands tightly and hits her on wall.
She screams in pain. Shivaay makes her face him and feels bad seeing her crying.
Shivaay: abb daffa ho jao yaha se aur phir kabhi mujhe apni shakal mat dikhana. Get out of my house.
Anika waha se rote hue chali jaati hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
nice update dear what will happen next pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I can't believe Shivaay went to that extent. And I don't believe Anika is crying instead of retorting. How I wish she get hold of her cake and whack him for his misbehavior.
waiting fro the next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Part 4
Uss raat Priyanka shivaay ke room mein gayi.
Priyanka: bhaiya mujhe aapse baat karni hai aaj jo hua uss bare mein.
Shivaay: lekin mujhe uss bare mein koi baat nahi karni hai, toh accha hoga ki tum uss low standard ladki ke bare mein kuch naa kaho toh.
Priyanka: aaj jo bhi hua woh bilkul thik nahi tha bhaiya. Aapko anika ke sath aise zanwaron jaise behave nahi karna chahiye tha. Aap ne bahot galat kiya uske sath.
Shivaay: Ohhh please! Abb tum mujhe bataogi ki mujhe kis se kaise baat karni chahiye. Dekho Priyanka main ne pahle bhi tumhe kaha tha aur aaj phir keh raha hoon ki tum aise logon se apni friendship mat badhao. Aisi bahot si ladkiyon ko main ne dekha hai. Inke parents inhe aisi hi parwarish dete hai. Inki naa toh koi class rehti hai aur naa hi koi zameer.
Priyanka: aap ne sahi kaha bhaiya ki jaisi parwarish waise log. Lekin Anika ko toh yeh bhi nahi patta hai ki uske naam aage kya surname lagega. Woh anath hai bhaiya. She is an orphan. Aur aaj aapne usse yeh parwarish wali baat kehkar uske purane zakhmo ko phir taza kar diya hai. Aapko patta hai woh apni bua ke pass rehti hai apne ek chotte bhai ke sath. Uss bua ke sath jo usse zanwaro se bhi battar pesh aati hai. Woh chahti toh kabka apni bua ka ghar chodkar kahi aur chali jati, lekin usne aisa nahi kiya. Kyunki agar woh aisa kuch karti toh uski bua usse aur uske chotte bhai ko zinda nahi rehne deti.
Shivaay: what
Priyanka: Haan bhaiya. Woh part time job karti hai aur apni sari salary apni bua ko de deti hai. Aap ne aaj usse aur takleef pahochayi hai. Aapne jo kiya woh thik nahi tha bhaiya.
Shivaay: Yeh sab tum mujhe Kyun bata rahi ho. Mujhe uss badtameez ladki ke bare mein kuch nahi sunana hai. You may leave now.
Priyanka: bhaiya mujhe patta hai kabhi naa kabhi aapko apni galti ka ehsaas jaroor hoga.
Aur itna kehkar Priyanka waha se chali jati hai.
Shivaay: Kya main ne aaj jo kiya woh galat tha? Kya mujhe usse iss tarah nahi rulana chahiye tha? Aansu uski aakhon se gir rahe the aur dard mujhe Kyun ho raha tha? Nahi koi ladki Shivaay singh oberoi ki life mein koi changes nahi laa sakti hai.

Scene shifts to Anika's house

Anika's bua: ohh maharani ghar ka rashan khatam ho gaya. Rashan lane ke paise kaun dega. Muft ki rotiya todne mein toh waise hi tera koi zawaab nahi hai. Chal paise nikal. Aur Kal ke kamai ke paise bhi de.
Anika: bua jee kal ka order cancel ho gaya tha, Isliye kal paise nahi mile.
Anika's bua: main ne pehle bhi kaha tha aur aaj phir keh rahi hoon mujhse jada hoshiyari karne ki koshish bhi nahi karna. Nahi toh dhoodh mein padhe makhi ki tarah nikal kar fek dungi. Aur agar tujhe ek baar iss ghar se nikal kar fek diya naa toh sadak par baithe cheel kauye tujhe noch noch kar kha jayenge. Chal paise nikal.
Anika: bua jee sach keh rahi hoon kal ka order cancel ho gaya.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

I can't believe Shivay felt the pain on seiing Anika's tears. I think its too early for him to feel that. May be he will feel like that when he really see Anika facing brutal treatment by her bua.

btw, thanks for the 4th part so soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Part 4
Anika's bua: lagta hai tu aise nahi manegi. Mujhe teri akal thikane lani hogi.
Anika's bua slaps her and call the cops.
Anika's bua: abb teri akal thikane aayegi jab tujhe havalad mein police ke dande padenge.
Anika: buajee yeh aap thik nahi kar rahi hai. Main aapse jhooth kyun bolungi kal Sach mein koi order nahi tha aur ek order jo tha woh uss sadu singh oberoi ke chalte cancel ho gaya.
Anika's bua: Yeh sab main kuch nahi janti hoon. Main tujhe aur tere iss pille ko yaha muft ki rotiya nahi todne dungi, abhi tere hosh thikane aayenge jab tujhe tere sasural wale lekar jayenge.
Itne mein hi waha police aa jati hai.
Anika's bua: le jayengi madam isse. Iss ladki ne mera jeena muhal kar diya hai. Aaj Phir mere bhatije ko lekar bhagne ki koshish ki isne aur main ne jab rokane ki koshish ki toh mujhe dhakka diya. Abb aap hi batayiye main bechari kaise iske atyacharon ko sahungi.
Lady cop: ae Anika main ne tujhe pehle bhi kaha tha naa ki agar tujhe yaha rahna hai toh tameez se rah. Aaj chal main teri acchi khatirdari karti hoon.
Anika: Yeh aap dono bahot galat kar rahe hai. Aap bina arrest warrant ke mujhe arrest nahi kar sakti ho.
Lady cop: abb tu mujhe kanoon sikhayegi.
Aur itna kehkar woh lady cop anika ko khichkar police jeep mein baithati hai.

Oberoi house

Shivaay: Priyanka mujhe tumse kuch puchna tha.
Priyanka: Haan bhaiya puchiye.
Shivaay: mujhe uss ladki kya naam hai uska Haan Anika uske ghar ka adress chahiye tha.
Priyanka: bhaiya aapko apni galti realize ho gayi yeh jankar main bahot khush hoon.
Shivaay: tumhe kya lagta hai main usse sorry bolne jaa raha hoon. Tum abb tak apne bhai ko samjh nahi payi ho. Main toh usse uske Kal ke kaam ki salary dene jaa raha hoon. Shivaay singh oberoi kabhi kisi se free mein kaam nahi karata hai. Main jaa raha hoon, tum mujhe adress message kar dena.
Priyanka: thik hai bhaiya.

Shivaay at Anika's house

Shivaay: adress toh yeh hi diya tha Priyanka ne koi dikhai kyun nahi de raha hai. Lagta hai neighbors se puchna padega. Excuse me yaha koi anika rehti hai naa aap bata sakte hai woh abhi kaha milegi.
Neighbor: beta Anika toh abhi yaha nahi hai, uski bua ne usse aaj hi arrest karwa diya hai. Woh police station mein hai.
Shivaay: what
Neighbor: Haan beta bechari hamari Anika. Patta nahi waha sab uske sath kaise zanwaron saa salook kar rahe hoge.
Shivaay yeh sunte hi gusse se laal ho gaya.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Just read all the parts...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
i read all the parts in one go
awesome
plz plz update sooon
and do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
all the parts were awesome.
continue soonish.
do one thing.
when u write the update,make sure u mention the updated chapter number and also the page number where u updated i.

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