Anshi ff shivaay ki anika

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeh kahani hai anika aur shivaay ki...
Yeh kahani hai uss pyaar ki jo naa pehle
Kisi ne dekhi thi aur naa suni thi...
Uss shivaay singh oberoi ki jiske liye paisa, power
Sab kuch tha,pyaar se toh woh koso dur tha...
Anika:- ek lower middle class family se, ek anath jiske naam ke piche naa toh uske baap ka naam tha aur naa hi koi surname
Shivaay:- rich, arrogant business tycoon jisse pyaar mein bilkul koi bharosa nahi tha
Om: shivaay's brother
Rudra:- shivaay's brother
Tia:- shivaay's would be wife
And the oberoi family
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1
Anika: Hey bhagwaan aaaj uss sadu shivaay singh oberoi ki shakal naa dekhni padhe oberoi house mein. Patta nahi khud ko kya samjhta hai. Hamesha ek hi baat ki ratt lagaye rehta hai main oberoi hoon. Usse toh raat mein sapne mein bhi main oberoi hoon wale sapne hi aate hoge. Uss oberoi house mein toh main kadam bhi nahi rakhti agar mujhe canteen ka form bharne ke liye paison ki jaroorat nahi hoti toh. I hate you Mr. Sadu singh oberoi.

Oberoi house
Shivaay's Room
Shivaay: main apni insult kabhi nahi bhulta hoon Mr. Anika. Aaj agar engagement party mein main ne tumse apni insult ka badla nahi liya toh mera naam bhi shivaay singh oberoi nahi. Tumne mere upar pani feka tha, main tumse aaj uss insult ka badla lunga. You just wait and watch.
Suddenly shivaay's phone starts beeping
Shivaay: Hello! Tia.
Tia: shivaay mujhe tumse puchna tha ki tumhe uss chocolate cake ka order de diya hai naa aaj shaam ki engagement party ke liye.
Shivaay: Haan de diya hai. Woh cake toh abb mujhe hamesha yaad rehega.
Tia: kya mtlb hai tumhara, main kuch samjhi nahi.
Shivaay: kuch nahi, bye see you in the evening.
Tia: bye, love you baby.
Scene shifts to engagement party
Shivaay: main ne jo kaha tha woh kaam ho gaya yaa nahi?
Servant: kaam ho gaya sir main ne cake Kharab kar diya hai jaisa aapne kaha tha bilkul waise.
Shivaay: Hmmm abb tum jao.
Shivaay's mom: beta pandit jee keh rahe hai sagai ka muhurat bita jaa raha hai tum dono abb jaldi se ek dusre ko rings pehna do.
Tia: yes mom jee.
Shivaay aur Tia dono ne ek dusre ko rings pehna dee.
Shivaay's mom: phitte munh koi cake toh lao abb meri bahu aur beta cake katenge.
Servant: mam saheb yeh raha cake.
Shivaay's mom: chalo abb tum dono cake kaato aur ek dusre ko khilao.
Shivaay smirks and cuts the cake.
Shivaay: Tia first bite for my would be wife.
Tia: ohh shivaay
Tia eats the cake
Tia: Eeeu yukk mom jee see kisine janbhujh kar mere engagement cake ko Kharab kar diya hai.
Shivaay's mom: Nahi puttarjee yeh cake toh tumne hi kaha tha special order de kar banwane ko. Lao main taste kar ke dekhti hoon.
Tia: no mom jee iska taste is too bad. Please mom jee aap taste nahi karo.
Shivaay's mom tastes the cake and screams ,'' kisne mere bete ki engagement party ko Kharab karne ke liye yeh cake banawa. Yeh bina shakkar ka jalla hua cake.

Meanwhile in the Kitchen anika was talking to someone on phone
Anika: Haan aunty jee mera kaam khatm ho gaya hai yaha oberoi house ka abb bas ghar ke liye hi nikal rahi hoon 1-2 ghante mein pahuch jaungi.
Suddenly Priyanka comes there
Priyanka: anika main bhaiya ke uss din ke behavior ke liye tumse maafi mangati hoon. Uss din jo kuch bhi hua uske liye main bahot sharminda hoon. Mujhe rudra bhaiya ne bataya ki yeh sab unki galti ke wajah se hua tha. I am really sorry for that.
Anika: Tu kyun sorry bol rahi hai sorry toh uss sadu singh oberoi ko bolna chahiye lekin woh aur mujhe sorry bolega kabhi nahi.
Priyanka: Anika tum bhaiya ko galat samjh rahi ho aisa kuch bhi nahi hai bas bhaiya ko gussa jaldi aata hai aur Isliye woh gusse mein kya bol dete hai iska unhe bhi patta nahi hota hai.
Anika: Dekh yr mujhe phirse tere bhaiya ke upar baat nahi karni hai.
Priyanka: accha baba sorry, tune mujhe maaf kiya yaa nahi?
Anika: jab teri koi galti hi nahi hai toh tu maafi kyun maang rahi hai.
Priyanka: iska mtlb tune mujhe maaf kar diya.
Anika: Haan, abb tu jaa bahar apne sadu bhaiya ki engagement party enjoy kar.
Priyanka: Hahahahahaha Haan

Edited by krazykrisha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sadu singh oberoi... 🤣 🤣 🤣

loved it a lot.
priyanka aur annika ki dosti.. loved it..
shivaay ka badla..
continue sooonish.
do pm me please.
Edited by VidyutKiDeewani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great start 👏 . So Shivaay got his own engagement cake spoiled just to teach Anika a lesson. What an idea? But how did he manage to remove the sweetness from the cake?
eagerly waiting for the next part .😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sadu Singh Oberoi 😆 😆

Great start dear plz continue soon !!! AnShi ka takkar and tashan wala pyaar 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start dear eagerly waiting for ur next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
Shivaay: mom mujhe patta hai yeh cake kisne Kharab kiya hai, kiska kiya dhara hai yeh sab.
Shivaay's mom: Phir tu abhi usse yaha bula jisne yeh sab kiya hai. Usse main batati hoon ki mere bete bahu ki engagement party Kharab karne ki sazza kya hoti hai.
Shivaay: mom usse aap nahi main bataunga ki meri engagement party Kharab karne ki sazza kya hoti hai.
Dadi: shivaay beta jo ho gaya uss par mitti daal, aage ki party Kharab ho jayengi iss sab se.
Shivaay: Nahi dadi kuch log apni aukaat bhul gaye hai unhe unki aukat yaad dilana bahot jaroori hai.
Rudra: Om bet laga raha hai bhaiya iss cake ko Kharab karne wali ko nahi chodenge.
Om: mujhe nahi lagta shivaay apna time waste karega kisi useless kaam mein.
Rudra: lagi 1 lakh ki bet.
Om: Haan lagi 1 lakh ki bet.
Shivaay: waiter yaha aayi.
Waiter: yes sir
Shivaay: jao kitchen mein se uss chef ko doondhkar lao jisne yeh chocolate cake banaya hai.
Waiter: yes sir
Waiter comes to kitchen and informs anika about whole incident
Anika: tum chalo main aati hoon.
Waiter: Tum jaldi aao shivaay sir bahot gusse mein hai.
Anika: Hmmm, hey bhagwaan abb kaunsa naya rayata faila hai yaha, chal anika iss sadu singh oberoi ki manus shakal dekh le.
Shivaay: yeh cake tumne banaya hai naa.
Anika: Haan, kyun aap bhool gaye ki yeh cake main ne banaya hai.
Shivaay's mom: Yeh 2 takke ki ladki iski himaat toh dekho mere bete se kaise baat kar rahi hai. Ae ladki apni aukaat mein reh kar baat kar.
Shivaay: mom aap bhi kiske munh lag rahi ho, yeh middle class ladkiya hoti hi aisi hai.
Anika: Excuse me! Aap mujhse aise baat nahi kar sakte ho. Kya koi mujhe batayega main ne kiya kya hai.
Shivaay: accha toh abb hum tumhe bataye ki tumne kiya kya hai, tum jaise logon ki problem hi yehi hoti hai sab kuch karne ke baad bhi aise react karte ho jaise kuch hua hi naa ho.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start 👏
Keep writing ;waiting for next update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awesome... All the parts are good... Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Both parts are nice! Update soon :)

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