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Batool M

@.Rangeeli.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

What a nice OS 😊

Edited by Arshifan72011 - 9 years ago

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Heya Niki, 😊
Applauds to you for writing this absolutely magnificent OS. This bond between the ObBros has so many facets and is worth exploration from so many different angles. Really enjoyed reading this sweet OS. These ObBros are here to steal our hearts and they seem to be doing a fabulous job of it, aren't they? 😉 This is some really good writing. Looking forward to more. Keep writing. 😊
-V
P.S.: Do you send PMs? Would love one if you write more. I have sent a buddy request.
P.P.S: Do you have a writing index?

Edited by BookWormV - 9 years ago

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: coolove
That was lovely
Please write more

Thank you for your encouragement😛

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice..

Thanks 😛

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: UmIbrahim
I think you have predicted what might happen in the show, for Pinki will never accept Anika without a fight (which is bound to be downright underhanded tricks to prove that Anika is a gold digger).
A very well written piece keeping all three brothers in characters . Like Dadi said yesterday and Om said today Shivaay's love is going to be extreme. Because that is what it means to be Shivay Shakthi Oberoi, when he gives he gives 110%.
Which if and when his heart gets broken it will leave him in very mad and sad state. Like you have shown in the OS.

Om the voice of reason, he is what will pull our Shivaay back and Rudra is the innocent distraction this brothers need.

Lovely work and hats off.
Regards
N

First of all thank you for reading this😊

And yeah after yesterday's episode when Pinky turns her nose at Anika for being a caterer, I am sure she will create problems for Anika and proving the girl gold-digger or perhaps having an extra-marital affair that too with Om🤢...she will try her best for that. For her it would be like shooting two targets with one arrow by destroying Shivaay's relationship with both his wife and brother.

I have a bad feeling it is the latter way that Pinky will choose.

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: crazysweetie
Really awesome
I always wanted to see Jhanvi as admirer of OBbros

Me too. I always wanted a scene of Jhanvi defending the three brothers😆

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef
It was amazing. Please do write more.

Thanks a lot. I will definitely try to write more!

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Arshifan72011
What a nice OS 😊

Thanks a lot. I just tried to stick them to their character sketch..😛

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

awesome os

u should write more

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: BookWormV
Heya Niki, 😊
Applauds to you for writing this absolutely magnificent OS. This bond between the ObBros has so many facets and is worth exploration from so many different angles. Really enjoyed reading this sweet OS. These ObBros are here to steal our hearts and they seem to be doing a fabulous job of it, aren't they? 😉 This is some really good writing. Looking forward to more. Keep writing. 😊
-V
P.S.: Do you send PMs? Would love one if you write more. I have sent a buddy request.
P.P.S: Do you have a writing index?

Hello V!

Thanks a lot for appreciating my work.

The OhBros are seriously multi-faceted. I have my mind to target Rudra's alternate personality traits too since I gave him very less space in this one.

And for some reason I love Om advising Shivaay...I kinda love those scenes.

And yeah.love OhBros❤️

Btw I do send PM's, will send you for the next work.

As for a writing index, I am sorely in need to make one, though I haven't yet😆