Riansh fs - The king is back 1,2,3,4,5 updated on pg 4 (completed)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi everyone... So here i come with another shot... This is a long one.... It has 5 parts.... This is not the first part.... This is just a page in which I have shared details about it

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It is from the track of vihaan's entry in ridhbir's marriage


Things to keep in mind:

1) In this riddhu is not a spy
2) Vansh forcefully married her
3) Riddhu didn't like him forcing her for this marriage so she used to irritate him by doing things he hate... (Spying, blaming him, etc...)
4) But eventually she started to see the actual vansh and fell in love with him
5) Vansh loved her from the beach party but he assumed it to be infatuation but when she gave him the resignation letter he understood tht he is in love with her.
6) Vansh from starting had a doubt whether she is a spy or not
7) Anupriya and Kabir are same as show
8) Family is good. At starting they did not like riddhu but after staying with her and seeing her care everyone loves her even ishani and aryan
9) Same as show siya gets attacked.. Riddhu blamed... Kabir claiming riddhu as a spy and she gave him proofs.. Vansh was madly in love with her so he committed suicide. Same as show siya in coma
10) Riddhu doesn't know Kabir.. She only knows him as the inspector.
11) Riddhu did kidnap ragini but bcoz she heard someone is going to frame vansh.Ragini is safely shifted to london
12) Vihaan is none other than our dear Vansh.


Note: All parts are already written.. I will update seeing the responses.. And by response I mean comments... First part will either be updated by midnight or tomorrow... Next will be updated as per responses


Signing off.
ASH😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting..... Very Interesting.

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Hey can someone please tell me wht is the meaning of the error


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I m not able to update the first part as I m getting the above error

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Originally posted by: Ashriansh

Hey can someone please tell me wht is the meaning of the error


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I m not able to update the first part as I m getting the above error


I am not sure. May be newbies k liye kuch number of posts k restrictions hoti hai. ( But not confirmed)

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Ohk let me see. I ll try to update it in another page.. If it is possible then I will mention abt it here and if not possible then will do it tomorrow

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Hey dear i am posting on your behalf


Next will be accd to ur responses... Total there r 5 parts

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Ok now I m going to use short forms while writing dialogues
K-Kabir
An-Anupriya
Ar-Aryan
I-Ishani
A-Angre
D-Dadi
C-Chanchal chachi
R-Rudra chachu
S-Siya
V- Vansh/Vihaan
R- Riddhima

Same as show Kabir is accepted.

Dadi and whole family finds riddhu to be depressed so they decide to make her marry Kabir.Kabir blackmailing riddhu that he will kill ishani's child and her going to vihaan same as show..

She was looking her reflection in the mirror. She was broken beyond repair. Her one mistake and she lost the only thing she owned. She don't want to marry Kabir but she can't let anything happen to her family. So she needs to do this. Don't know how but she has a faith that vihaan won't betray her. But she can't take a risk so she has a backup plan which can cause pain to the whole family but she can never be someone else.

R(smiling sadly) : Y r u crying? This is all ur mistake. If u had just confessed ur love to vansh then he would have been with u but u were scared bcoz of ur insecurities. And tht inspector used this against u and created misunderstandings between u and vansh. Sometimes I don't understand whether I should cry tht I lost my love, my husband or be angry tht he trusted a stranger and didn't even listen to his wife. (Crying)But alas I love him a lot 🥺.(Wiping her tears) Kabir if u think tht u r gonna marry me then let me be clear. I ll never let this happen. Either Vihaan or without him I ll escape this marriage. Bcoz Vansh Raisinghania apni cheeze battha nhi hai aur apni biwi toh hargiz nhi.

She closes her palms and holds the small bottle very close to her.

Anupriya comes to take her down

An(wicked smile) :Ch... Chi... Ch.. Riddhima.. U r so unlucky everytime u r crying in ur own marriage. But this time u r actually marrying a devil. My real son won't let u even breath peacefully. U ll cry each and every day

R: That time will say mummyji(stressing the word mummyji)

She takes riddhu to the wedding dias. Riddhu comes there like a dead person. Anyone can say that she is completely broken. All Raisinghanias feel sad seeing their chirpy and bubbly riddhu like this.

The pandit ji starts to recite the mantras. Riddhu glances towards the door each and very second but she only gets disappointed.

Now its time for pheras. Her hope is completely broken. Now she can't take any risk so she throws something in the agnikund and drinks the poison.

Voice: Yeh kya chal raha hai yaha?

Everyone gets shocked to hear the voice. They all know who it belongs to. For a second even riddhu doubts but then she remembers vansh committing suicide in front of her.

And then they see the owner of this voice standing as he owns this world. All are happy and overwhelmed to see their vansh except the mother son duo they r hell shocked.

Ishani and Angre smirk bcoz now the KING is back. Now no one can even imagine to hurt the QUEEN. Each person is gonna badly pay for it.

Vansh enters inside the mansion in his glory... VR style...His aura is radiating which is even scaring the family

Riddhu goes towards vansh and hugs him tightly. Vansh hugs her back.

R: How can u be so late Vihaan. Marriage would have been completed.

V(flirty way) : I m not late dollar biwi. I just made the perfect entry at the correct timing just as a hero. Waise bhi I m ur hero(winks)

Riddhima starts to cough: U r late vihaan. Just promise me u ll take care of my family and will not let anything happen to them. U ll consider them as ur own family. U can have as much money as u want but just don't ever let anything happen to them. And if u won't do so and try to betray anyone then trust me I have a backup tht will mess up ur life.

V(a bit tensed) : What happened dollar biwi? R u not going to stay with me.( Playful smile) Wait r u afraid tht u won't be able to control urself if u r with me.

They broke the hug and Vihaan aka Vansh gets shocked to see blood coming out from his sweetheart's mouth.

V:Riddhima...What did u do?

All the Raisinghanias are shocked even anubir

Riddhima gave him a sad smile and she was unconscious in his arms.

Vansh felt his breathe stop. He was cursing himself for being late. He hates what all happened between them but he can never let her die. He cant even see her getting hurt.

V: Angre call the doctor.

Few mins later, the doctor arrived and he went to check riddhu.

Now vansh was back in his VR form. The VR whom everyone is afraid of is back. Well.. Well.. Well someone tried to harm his sweetheart.So he/she has to pay

Bcoz accd to him only he has the right to love her, harm her, scare her, etc.. Now tht person has to pay and even his sweetheart has to face a lot of things

Angre found poison bottle in the wedding dias and showed it to the family.

D: This all is happening bcoz of me.i forced her to marry Kabir. I knew that she only loves u but then also I did this. And so she tried to take her life.

V(tears in his eyes): No dadi it's not ur mistake. U were thinking abt her only.Dont worry everything will be fine.

Doctor comes out

V, I, A, Ar- How is she doctor?

Dr- Now she is better but she is not fine. This is not the first time she has tried to take her life. She has attempted a lot of time. She is in depression. She will again try to take her life. It's better u all try to bring her out from her depression or else u will lose her forever.

Whole family was shocked. They knew she wasn't able to handle vansh's death. But few days back they had seen her trying to cope with it. But now they learnt the reason behind the change in her behavior.

All Raisinghanias went back to their room. V, I, A took Dr to other room

V - Dr actually I wanted to ask.....
Secret conversation.....

Dr leaves from there.

I: Bhai she is not fine. She...

V: No ishani she is not that weak. She needs to face the result of her doings. Dhoka kitna bhi khoobsurat kyu na ho na toh voh mujhse maafi paega na daya

A: But bhai...

V- I told u both to be quiet. (Looking at riddhima) Now all those who have dared to betray VR will pay(with rage) Each and every person.


Wht was the conversation with the doctor?

Does vansh know the truth or not?

Is he going to harm riddhu bcoz of the misunderstandings between them?

Will vansh learn the truth before its too late or will he lose his love forever?

Signing off
Ash😘










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Posted: 3 years ago
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So interesting story update soon ..❤

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Very I interesting! Waiting for next updates

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Very Interesting

Fantastic

Update Soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank u so much raveena u again saved me.... Lots of love ❤.. Truly said... A friend in need is a friend indeed...

So here is the next part.... Part 2....

Loved ur comments.. Thank u so much all... And pls do keep commenting....

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V: I told u both to be quiet. (Looking at riddhima) Now all those who have dared to betray VR will pay(with rage) Each and every person.(moist eyes) And it will start with those who tried to harm my Sweetheart
A, I: Bhai...
V: How can u both think tht I ll harm her even after learning the truth. Now u both leave. I want to spend time with my wife.

Angre and ishani had happy tears in their eyes. They went from there.

V(crying): Sweetheart how could u do this with me? Did u think so cheap(choking on his voice)about me that u felt I will leave u or will hate u after knowing about the truth. First time in my life I m feeling shame of my ownself. I always say that Vansh Raisinghania ke paas baaz ki nazar hai uske aankhon se kuch nhi chuptha. But then also I wasn't able to see ur pain. I believed in the words of Kabir and left u all alone. Thanks to Angre and Ishani that I learnt the truth or else even I don't know what I would have done with u. I m sorry sweetheart for all that u went through. Sorry to hide my reality and to come as Vihaan but it is necessary or they will harm u and our family. I thought to reveal u the truth after seeing ur condition but doctor has clearly forbidden me from doing so.


Flashback 1

V: Dr she doesn't know something. If she learns abt it she will be happy. She was stressed due to that. So can I tell her...
Dr: No Mr. Raisinghania. Don't even think about it. She is very depressed. In this stage even surprises can give shock to her. And this can lead to some mental problems. She can lose her memory or the worse she can lose her mental balance. It's better u don't disclose anything now. Let her be better and go with the flow. And yes Nr Raisinghania she will take time to wake up as the antidote I have given causes drowsiness. So she will be in great slumber for 8-12 hours as the dose was high.
V:Ok Dr.

Flashback ends


V: I can't take risk with ur health riddhima. So I need to hide this from u. I know u ll fight with me, u may even ignore me after finding out the truth but I m ready to bear all this but I can't let anything happen to u. U know u r just like a sister to Angre. He was not at all ready to believe that u betrayed me. I ll always be debted to Angre for this.


Flashback 2

Vansh was saved by Angre as he had sent the latter a sos.
In a hideout near the cliff.
V(rage) : I want all the footage from the day riddhima entered VR mansion. I also want each and every detail of riddhima's past. Riddhima has to pay for her betrayal
A: Bhai sorry to say this but u r trusting ur enemy over ur wife. I know that we had doubt whether bhabhi is a spy or not. But bhai she can never do this as she has always taken care of everyone as her own family, loved them, even solved problems between u and aryan. And most importantly she loves u a lot. She can never ever think abt harming u.
V(shouting) : No she doesn't love me. If she did then she would have confessed her love to me but she never did. Leave it Angre. Just do what I say. And set up a camera with microphone in riddhima's room. I need to see what will she do in her room.
A: Ok boss. But boss even u have never confessed to bhabhi that u love her. Just like u have trust issues she may have some other problem. Something that forced her not to reveal her feelings to u. Think about it boss. U have finally got a person who loves u to pieces. Don't take a step in haste that at end will only cause regret and destruction. Bcoz if u r wrong then u ll die each and evey second in guilt.
Angre leaves from there. Vansh thinks abt wht angre said.
V(thinks) : Is Angre right? Does she actually love me? What if she has some genuine reasons to not confess her love. Even I didn't confess that doesn't mean I don't love her. Angre is right.(tears in his eyes) Even I have seen care and love in her eyes for me and my family. I have seen the fear in her eyes when I ate the poisoned watermelon.(smiling like a mad person) : She loves me... She loves me.. Yes.. Yess.. I.. I need to learn the truth.i can't trust that Kabir. He hates me to core. His dream is to break me. Thts the reason he is bringing my wife between us. (Mad glint) Even if she has betrayed me I will punish her but I won't let her go away from me. She is destined to be mine. She is my sweetheart, my wife. I need to look into all this and find the truth. Now I can't trust anyone I need to be careful. It's sure that other than riddhima someone from the family is helping Kabir.

Flashback ends


V(hugging riddhima): I am sorry sweetheart but now I know ur reason. I know y u were afraid to confess ur love to me. In these days when I have stayed away from u I have seen how much u craved for me. I can't believe I m so lucky to have u in my life. I never imagined that I ll have a person who will love me to bits, who will mend all the problems between me and my family. Now it's my turn I will mend ur broken heart. I will make u the old chirpy and lively riddhima. The one I loved, the one I married,(chuckles) the one who backanswered VR and shut his mouth.

With this vansh sits near riddhu hugging her and remembering all that he learnt when he was away from his sweetheart.


Flashback 3

As told Angre had set up new cameras in whole VR mansion and in Riddhima's room.

In hideout,
A: Boss I have done all tht u said
V: And wht abt riddhima's past Angre?
A: Yes boss I have kept few of my best employees in work for it. We will get all the details ASAP.
V: Ok Angre.
Just then a notification pings on Vansh's phone.
A: Boss this is from bhabhi's room. I guess she entered the room so u got notified.
Listening this vansh sets up the footage and they start watching it.

In riansh's room

R(crying): Y Vansh? Y did u do this with me? Y u didn't listen to me. U trusted that inspector over ur wife. I know about ur trust issues but at least u would have let me speak. But u just jumped off without even listening to me(holding Vansh's coat and scarf) Now how will ur riddhima live...without u. No.. No.. My vansh can't leave me... This all happened bcoz of my insecurity, bcoz of my tragic past. I was...

Just then the door opens with a jerk and Kabir enters

K: Ch.. Ch.. Ch.. Riddhima. Mujhe tumpe itna taras aa rha hai. Kitna pyaar karthi thi tum usse par usne kya kiya usne apne biwi ke upar apne dushman par vishwas kiya. Patah hai riddhima jithni jalan mujhe Vansh ke VR hone pe, yeh paisa hone pe hua na usse bhi zyada tumhare uske life mein hone mein hu. Mom mujhe humesha batati thi ki vansh ne tumhare saath kya kya kiya ki usne tumse zabardasti shaadi ki phir bhi tumne usse pyaar kiya itna hi nhi, tumhe jise khoon kharabe se sakth nafrat hai usne yeh jaanthe hue ki vansh ek criminal hai,ek mafia hai usse pyaar karthi rhi aur usse choda bhi nhi..

Hearing this Vansh and Angre both were shocked they didn't knew that Riddhima knew that vansh was a mafia.

R(shouting):Yes... I knew about this. I know that he is a mafia.i know that I hate violence but then also I love him. I love him a lot. Tumhe patah hai Kabir mujhe vansh se kitna pyaar hai. Nhi na. Toh suno mujhe vansh se itna pyaar hai ki main uske liye apne usul bhi badal sakthi hu,itna pyaar hai ki main apne vansh ke liye apni jaan de bhi sakthi hu aur kisi aur ki jaan le bhi sakthi hu(Kabir gets shocked).U know y Kabir bcoz loving is not about liking someone's qualities, its about loving the person even if he does something u hate. Its not about loving someones perfections its about loving someones imperfections. Its not about leaving the person when he does something wrong its about staying with him and giving him more love and bringing him back on the right path.

Vansh was shocked would be an understatement. He actually didn't knew how to react. Angre was having tears of happiness seeing the amount of love his bhabhi has for his bhai.

K(trying to instigate her) : Riddhima I find that u r very innocent so I don't want to drag u in my game. I don't even know u. It's true that I put false allegations on u bcoz I wanted to see vansh breaking and him feeling as a loser but it was vansh who believed my words I did not give any proof to him. He did....

R(anger, shouting) : Kabir, let me clear a thing to u. Tumhe lagtha hoga ki mujhe us vansh se pyaar hai jisne meri jaan bachai, mera dhyaan rakha, meri care ki but let me clear this to u.(chuckles) U r wrong. Kyunki main sirf us vansh se pyaar nhi karthi jisne meri jaan bachai, mera dhyaan rakha, meri care ki balki usse bhi karthi hu jisne mujhse zabardasti shaadi ki, jisne mujhpe shak kiya, jisne mujhe daraya dhamkaya, jisko main jhutti lagthi hu.

Vansh gets numb listening to this. He wasn't able to believe that she even loved the devil. The devil whom even his own family was afraid of, he loved the vansh who only deserved hate. How could she be so pure and innocent.

Kabir gets angry hearing this, Riddhima's smirks seeing him.

R: Chalo Kabir tumhe ek aur baat batati hu. Yeh baat toh vansh bhi nhi jaantha. Maine vansh ke upar chalne waali goli apne upar iss liye nhi li thi kyunki main kisi ko bhi martha hua nhi dekh sakthi ya main aesa kisi ke liye bhi karthi balki iss liye li kyunki main usse haad se zyada pyaar karthi hu aur usse kharoch lagthe hue bhi nhi dekh sakthi. So it's better tht u get out from here. I know wht u r trying to do Kabir and let me tell u its waste of time to instigate me against him(wicked smile)

Vansh feels happy that she had fallen in love with him during the initial days. He is crying with joy and happiness. He was happy to see how riddhu was not paying any heeds to Kabir's words unlike him. He was also feeling guilty for not trusting her.

With rage Kabir goes from there

R(rage):Oops! I forgot to tell u the most important thing Kabir . Bcoz of u I lost my vansh. I promise u Kabir now I ll make ur life hell. U will plead God that y didn't he let u die on the day when vansh held u on gunpoint and I stopped him. U ll lose all the things that r dear to u. This is the promise of Mrs Riddhima Vansh Raisinghania.

Vansh and angre gets shocked to see this side of riddhima but somewhere vansh feels happy that she is doing all this in their love.

Unknown to everyone, ishani was listening all this and was proud to have a sister in law like her.Listening to all this she goes from there.

R: And after that(sad chuckle) I ll go back to my love, my vansh(looking above). Don't worry vansh after taking our revenge ur sweetheart will come back to u. No one will be able separate us.

Listening to this vansh and angre were shocked, they understood what she was going to do and they knew they needed to stop her.

She wipes her tears and goes to the washroom

V(emotionless face) : Angre go from here and take care of the whole family especially riddhima.
A: ji boss.
Angre leaves from there

V(crying) : How could I do this to her?(choking on his voice) Even after all this she loves me so much. I don't have time. I need to act fast.I can't let her die. I am sorry sweetheart for all that u went through and will have to bear in future but trust me I ll mend everything. I ll make u the same old riddhima, my riddhima, my sweetheart, I ll not let u take any step.(frown) But wht was she saying about insecurity. What was the reason for her to not confess her love? How is it related to her past?

Just then riddhu comes from the washroom and sits in the bed hugging vansh's photo.

R: I m sorry vansh I wasn't able to tell u about my past about what happened 4 years ago.


Will continue the flashback with next part.


What happened in the past with riddhu?

Y is she insecure with her past?

What will happen after vansh will learn about it?

Will they grow closer or....



Signing off
ASH😘

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