Riansh ss Noori- complete. Note page 26

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Hey guys so this is the new story, and some of the things different from serial are

- The family members are actually decent.

- Vansh is around 30 yrs old, and Riddhima is 20 yrs old.

- Vansh is already married to Ragini, has a son. Ragini is cheating on him.


The Raisinghania's were a known and wealthy family. They were quite humble in a nature as well. All the people say that it is close knit family. Vansh Raisinghania the elder grandson of the family, has taken care of them since the demise of his parents.


Ragini Raisinghania, is the elder daughter in law of the household, she was the college sweetheart of Vansh. They looked like a perfect couple, but only Vansh knew, the reality. Ragini only married him for money.


She always pressured Vansh to live somewhere else without the family, but he never agreed. When she found out she was pregnant she wasn't happy, Vansh thought that a baby may bring back the love in their relationship but, she had completely changed after his son Ansh came into the world.


She wouldn't let him touch, she wouldn't take care of Ansh, he had to become a mother and father, he didn't mind. Ansh was the bright light of his dark life. He wouldn't forget the day he came to knew his wife was cheating.


The family had gone for a picnic, Vansh knew about the picnic, Dadi had sensed something was amiss between them, so she had made the plan of going to the picnic without telling Ragini.


Ragini was happy, that family was not here. She had called her boyfriend and they were getting cosy. Vansh came home early after finishing a meeting to suprise her, but he himself got the suprise, of his own wife, sleeping with someone else in their bed.


He had not talked to her properly since that day, they are just husband and wife to the world. He had many times thought of giving a divorce but, he always stopped thinking about Dadi and his son Ansh.


He was sitting in their favorite cafe, drinking coffee ,he looked around couples were there, he had a bittersweet smile, was he so bad that he didn't deserve love, he yearned to be hugged by someone, to fight and later on make up with someone. He yearned to break in someone's arms.


His phone was ringing, Dadi had asked to come back home, her best friend and her poti are coming to meet them. Great another person to take care of. He went home everyone was laughing and talking loudly.


Dadi saw him and dragged him to the living room, and introduced him, Riddhima was the girl's name, but she looked more like a women, beautiful doe eyes, sensuous curves and smile to die for. Wait what is he doing.? He is married for god sake.


Riddhima had heard about, Vansh and his family, they were all jovial and friendly, but Vansh was so different, so intense she didn't know why but she blushed under his gaze. Then she saw a little boy trying to sweep some sweet from the plate kept infront of her. Vansh saw it too,

V- Ansh, humari kya deal hui thi, you will get sweet only if you eat vegetables at dinner.

A- Yuck i don't like vegetables. Before Vansh could say something, Riddhima interrupts,

R- Aare aap vegetables nahi kahogaye then you will become strong, and aap ki height kaise badegi. Aap chotu se reh jaogaye.

A- Nahi, i don't want that to happen, i want be tall like dad.


Everyone was shocked Ansh didn't normally liked talked to strangers, but he had gelled with Riddhima so quickly, the whole day they were together playing, doing masti and running around.

Dinner was lively affair, Riddhima's dadi asked if she can stay here, but Riddhima interrupts,

R- Dadi, please i told you mein pg stay kar lungi. Why should we disturb the family.

D- Riddhima, i am concerned about your safety dear. Nothing else.

Vansh was impressed with his bad experience with women, he had thought she too would be a gold digger like Ragini, but she still said no to all the luxury.

I- Aare Riddhima stay, hum bore ho jate hain. And bhai toh hum se baat hi nahi karte.

R- I am sure he is busy Ishani, my Dad too was busy with work but that didn't mean he didn't love us.

Suddenly Ansh knocked down juice glass on Riddhima's suit.

V- Ansh, see what you did, Ansh had tears in his eyes, Vansh was scolding him.

R- Aare, my champ koi baat nahi, it just juice. Don't worry sweetheart. Now stop crying, otherwise i won't give you chocolates.

Vansh was overwhelmed, never had someone spoken to Ansh like that especially Ragini. He also felt irritated that why he was thinking so much about this girl. So it was decided Riddhima would stay with Raisinghania's, and finish her studies here.


Hey guys, how was first chapter, please suggest a title too. Do comment if you like it.


Chapter 1- page 1

Chapter 2- page 2

Chapter 3- page 3

Chapter 4- page 5

Chapter 5- page 7

Chapter 6- page 8

Chapter 7- page 8

Chapter 8- page 9

Chapter 9- page 10

Chapter 10- page 12

Chapter 11- page 13

Chapter 12- page 13

Chapter 13- page 14

Chapter 14- page 15

Chapter 15- page 17

Chapter 16- page 18

Chapter 17- page 18

Chapter 18- page 20

Chapter 19- page 21

Chapter 20- page 22

Chapter 21- page 23

Chapter 22- page 24

Chapter 23- page 24

Chapter 24- page 25

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Chapter 2- Ragini's fear, Riddhima bonding with the family.


Hey guys, please suggest a title as well.


Ragini was glaring at the so called newcomer of the family, Riddhima. All the attention of the family is on her now. Ragini had married Vansh, because she wanted a lavish lifestyle, not because she loved her. His love knows only to possess a person, and she didn't want be someone posession, she wanted to be a free bird.


Taking care of the family, was a chore one she had stopped doing, they have servants for this. Getting pregnant was the biggest mistake of her, she had tried to abort the child but Vansh had threatened to ruin her reputation, by giving the media evidences of her cheating. She had endure labour because she didn't want to scar her body.


She never had any attachment to Ansh, Vansh took care of him. He was shy like Vansh and she didn't care much, she wanted to focus on her career of becoming a actress, she had hid the news of pregnancy from the world.


Now, all the attention of the family, is on her. Well maybe it is good for her, she could find a way to manipulate her in taking care of this family, and she can be free.


The family had finished dinner Dadi made the food today on the occasion of Riddhima coming here to stay. Everyone was stuffed after the breakfast all going to their rooms to sleep,when Riddhima stopped them

R- Guys wait, kuch meetha kha ke jao.

I- Yaar, Riddhima we are all full.

R- Theek hain phir yeh suji ka halwa mein fridge mein rakh deti hun.

All- Nahi nahi we want it.


All were complementing her cooking, she had even asked Vansh to eat the halwa but he said no and went to his room

I- Don't worry, bhai doesn't like sweets much.

A-I want more..

R- Ansh itna meetha bhi aacha nahi hota okay baby.

Ra- This is really tasty.

Ar- Let me kiss these beautiful hands.

I- Aryan kuch jayada hi flirt kar rahe ho.🙄🙄

Ar- Ishani don't worry she is like a sister to me.

S- Aacha hi hain🤣🤣🤣


Everyone were enjoying the sweet, Vansh was in his room working, when he saw Ragini come into the room he bristled when she touched him,

Ra- Hey dear, bahut kaam karte ho, relax karo thoda.

V- Kyun boyfriend busy hai tumhare.

Ra- Jealous?

V- Please, you can be with anyone you want i don't care.

Vansh went to the living room to work, he was feeling a bit hungry, he looked in the kitchen, everything was over, he looked in the fridge a Tupperware with his name was kept in it. It had the halwa which he refused to eat.

He unknowingly smiled at Riddhima's gesture, he quickly warmed it up and ate, it was really delicious. After doing some work he had fallen asleep on the sofa. Riddhima had woken up in the middle of the thirsty, she went to take some water in the kitchen, she saw Vansh sleeping on the sofa but he was shivering as well.


She didn't know why he slept here, but she quickly grabbed a blanket from her room and put it on him. She smiled when he snuggled into the blanket. Unknown to both of them, they were slowly making place in each other's heart.


PS- No precap as of now, tell we what you want to see.🤣🤣🤣

Edited by raveena0605 - 4 years ago

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